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Title: Chapter 4

Omg I can't believe her mother is dead ! That's so sad :( hopefully that's Wes that's at next to her 

Reviewer: Reader Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 03 2016 07:43 am

Title: Chapter 4

Alana isn't making any sense to me right now. She's all over the place. First she mad about Wes and her image, then she caves and she's not. Next, she's upset because she thinks he didn't come with her. This has to be some type of rebound thing. She can't decide what she feels about Wes. Which is about right since she's only known him for less that 48 hours. She's too emotional too soon about him.

I honestly believe she has to give herself more time to sort herself out about that scumbag because for what it was worth, she loved him and he really hurt her. Otherwise, I cant explain or understand why she would be getting this caught up in a vacation hookup.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2016 05:36 am

Title: Chapter 4

Alana needs to get off of Miss. B@tch mode and grow up. Here it is, this man has established a successful career in an industry where it isn't that easy to do, (at least not on that level), and she expects him to do a 180 on what she herself even thinks 'could' be a vacation I sland romance? She needs to bring it down a notch! 🤔

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 10 2016 06:30 pm

Title: Chapter 4

Hoping it's him! Love the story btw, I am really interested in Wes in real life now thanks to this. 

Reviewer: waterstos Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 05:19 am

Title: Chapter 4

It's Wes!!!

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 09 2016 03:02 am

Title: Chapter 4

Why is Alana so stupid?  When she wakes up it will be Wesley sitting next to her. Had her mom been sick or was it unexpected?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 08 2016 03:27 pm

Title: Chapter 3

That is a tough one to answer?  On the one hand I would like to give him the benefit of the doubt and stay and talk about what I saw but then at the same time, if he slapping girl's behinds, twerking on his DJ equipment while I am there, it is challenging to think what he would do when I am not there and with what equipment.  This is especially a hard choice for Alana because she just found her fiance cheating.  I don't know.  It doesn't look good for Wesley.  He has 2 kids with a woman he says he can't even understand why he had sex with her the last time when they met, then to see him slapping assess.....how is that suppose to make her feel comfortable in beginning a relationship or pursuing anything with him.  I understand her concerns regarding reputation as well because in all honesty that is all that we have in our careers etc.

Can't wait to see what his reaction will be?  How is he going to handle that she literally walked out at the end of his set.  But yet again, he didn't have any clue with her being a lawyer and partner at her firm.  C'mon Wes, tell me you had some inkling this might not go over well otherwise I will have to give you a new nickname.  Instead of Diplo it will be Dunno such as I don't know nothing.

Reviewer: lajack1 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 11:02 pm

Title: Chapter 1

I think some of y'all are being too judgmental about the situation. Its apart of his job and he gotta do what he gotta do to support his children. Personally, I wouldve been hella jealous but if I notice that he paying more attention to the crowd and his mixes then my anger would go down, then he would just have to prove to me that he wont be after the girls if we start a relationship. 

But the baby momma though, that would have to be talked about. I believe him when he says he wants a stable relationship but if that baby momma aint ready to let go of whatever type of relation ship she has with him I'm sure she'll purposely cause problems. I really dont wanna say yet cause we dont know what she's like. 

Lastly, image is important but theres a limit. She should give him a chance cause though they've only been around each other for a day he hasnt given any reason for her to be suspicious. He told her right away about the baby momma situation, he took care of her and her friends. I dont think he wouldve done all that if he was just about one night stands.

Reviewer: Golden Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 08:40 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Nice story. If other women want to expose themselves and act disgraceful that's their business. Longs as he is not touching it's ok.  Would I stay Yea.   

Reviewer: Francis Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 03:45 pm

Title: Chapter 3

i don't know if I would have stayed, but I don't know if I would have cut him off though. Just like Alana the lawyer is different than Alana the woman who just wants to be loved, Diplo the DJ is different from Wesley the man with two kids and wants love as well.

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 08:48 am

Title: Chapter 3

I totally get where she is coming from. I would have reacted the same way. I understand the industry and how stage personas work, but if I can't bring my mother and father to come see you perform out of fear they would have a heart attack in the middle of your set, then it just wouldn't work. 

But I think I would have stayed until the end of the set to talk to him and explain why I was uncomfortablt moving forward. I wouldn't want him to try to change my mind, I would just explain that we would continue on as friends...with...benefits. ;) lol

 I've always wondered how excplicit rappers who end up with really educated women were able to swing that. Was it the wining and dining and taking them all over the world that broke them down? The great sex? I'm interested to see where this ends up for Alana and Wesley.

Great chapter woman!! 

Reviewer: GreenRoots Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 07:44 am

Title: Chapter 3

Well, I'm not saying its everything, but image can be important and lead to other things happening in work/home/real life. Yes, its part of his job, and it doesn't have to mean any more than that, but the "looks" of that type of thing can get sticky. I mean Wesley is probably laughing all the way to the bank with other peoples' opinion about the "image" of what he does for a living, but it can and sometimes should matter.

However, I will call her out a little on her hypocrisy. If she was so concerned about image, she would not have let those pictures/videos they took be posted.

As for the rest, this is meant to be a weekend of fun, right? Fun in the sun and fun in the sack. Something to get Lucas out of her system. This was just supposed to be a ONS anyway. Or at best, a fling for the duration of the vacation. No harm, no foul. Go with it and then go home. He's not asking for marriage and neither is she. In reality, they are a step above strangers, so take it for what its worth.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 05:25 am

Title: Chapter 3

Yes, I would have stayed because it's business.  Great update 

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 04:36 am

Title: Chapter 3

See ya, Dip.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 04:28 am

Title: Chapter 3

Hell no!

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 03:38 am

Title: Chapter 3

Yes, I would have stayed to tell him just how disgusted and disappointed by that display.  The man has children!!  Smh  Wes needs to step up.

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2016 01:11 am

Title: Chapter 3

I was rolling when I read that line about the girls shaking their assessment until it got carpal tunnel, oh lawd.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2016 11:33 pm

Title: Chapter 3

I would have stayed!! We get on the man case when he don't want to be in a relationship with a woman because she have children. How is it alright for a woman to turn around and do the same thing to a man with children. I would tell him that if he seek this woman out for sex just because she is there ( then we are going to have some problems ). I understand about her image, but this is his job!. Her image is not going to hold her at night, make love to her in the moring, or talk to her in the evenings. She better wake up before her image is all she have. Thanks for the update!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2016 10:49 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Wow, I guess she is an important attorney but she's judging him. She was happy last night and even seemed to get over him having kids. Wow, ok so he'll obviously come looking for her. I think she should give him a chance. She was tired of boring and wanted passion now she's getting too much spontaneity. Wow, can't wait to see where you're going with this story!! :)

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2016 09:23 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Nope, she did the right thing and left. He has too much going on. Two kids with a mom that he may end up impregnating again depending on how the wind blows or just screwing just because. No, Alana does not need this in her life right now. Yes, he'll be good for quick ***** with plenty of condoms but that's it. Besides she's right she has her image to protect, which may already be at risk because of pictures already taken of them together. 

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2016 07:21 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Omg!! I knew it.  Cheating old coot! Well I'm loving how this story started.  I can't wait to see where you go with it.  good job.

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 14 2016 05:35 pm

Title: Chapter 3

Yes, I would have stayed because it's business.  Great update 

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 14 2016 03:48 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Amazing!

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2016 07:41 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Way to start a story 

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2016 07:20 pm

Title: Chapter 2

Hmmmm....this should be interesting

 

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2016 05:42 am



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