You know the sad part about this is some women can't have children and they really want them, but you have women like Regina who has a beautiful child like Izzy and she could care less. Keny's mother and Regina are soulless sisters and there's a special place in hell waiting for both of them. Bravo!! Luc for kicking that @ss it would've took the jaws of life to get me off that slimy no good piece of sh*t. Girl... my grandbaby has me wrapped around her little finger too, I'm trying to teach her sign language she's a smart little girl. I plan on teaching the twins when they turn 12 months, they are so cute and they are so calm and content I'm just amazed by them. I think Kenya needs to talk about her life to Luc, because life is to hard trying to live day by day with your past constantly in your PRESENT!!. Thanks for the update MP!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed
[Report This]Date: March 06 2016 09:19 pm
More please, nice update
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: March 06 2016 08:31 pm
YOU CAN NOT BE SERIOUS!!! Why the fuck are both of them at this man's door? I can understand Regina but why in the hell is Keith there? Although I want him to kill both of them, he needs to maintain his cool. Let the legal system handle it and if they can't get it right then you kill them. I can only imagine what's about to happen.
Update soon please!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2016 03:28 am
I think having someone to help him with this business would be best. Especially with the way the story is unfolding.
Update soon
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2016 02:56 am
How can you do that? Your daughter's cries didn't even fucking faze you! This story is really making me mad. I hope they both get what they deserve for they did to that pure little girl. You clearly don't care about your child to even have all these damn men around her. That's not a safe environment
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2016 02:54 am
Ohh so Miss Clark/Kenya went through the same thing. Is that why she went into child psychiatry? That is truly sad. I'm glad that her dad is there for her. I hope she starts eating now, at least with her dad. I want him to put that disgusting fucker and her mother in the damn ground. She is just as wrong as the man raping his daughter. Mother or not, having a baby doesn't make anyone a mother. That is horrible.
I seriously had to step away mid-way through reading this post... It was hard, I wanted to jump in the story and kill Mr Keith and Regina my damn self. LOl.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2016 02:35 am
Wow.... This is definitely going to be tough to read but I'm definitely interested.
How can you hurt your child like that? You locked her in the room with a grown ass man? Fuck him yourself you disgusting whore! It's to the point where your child won't even eat. She would rather starve than eat opened food because you are drugging her. Rot in the deepest parts of hell..
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: February 26 2016 01:53 am
Girl... This chapter here!!. That baby went through pure hell!! with that so call mother and that animal. I thought the right thing to do was take Izzy to the doctor and get documentation of her abuse and then go to the police and have those animals arrested. The Salvatore men are just like the men in my life, I wouldn't change them for all the riches in the world. Wow! Kenya was abused too and she came out stronger!!. If anyone I know was to hurt my children then you would be talking to me from a jail cell ( because NO!! ONE HURTS MY CHILDREN, NO ONE!!). I'm glad Izzy has her nonna there with her. There's nothing like a fathers love, but little girls need female role models and the female gentle touch and to know that they are loved!! and cared for unconditionally in a good way. Not in the way Regina and Keith, I can't call him Mr. because he don't deserve the title, touched her. These two devils has the nerve to show up at Luc's and Izzy house, how low can this women go, It's on and poppin Now! Thanks for the update MP
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2016 05:11 pm
Don't whoop his ass too bad. Get a couple hits in after he attempts to hit you. Call the police first so they don't run and can get caught. Ya know how jail feels about child molestors. Remember Izzy doesn't need her father in jail.
Reviewer: lajack1 Signed
[Report This]Date: February 24 2016 03:07 pm
A beatdown is about to commence, Keith is going down Luc please call the police, hecause I feel that they came armed. Ho got some balls to show up at Luc's house like she's done nothing wrong. The prisoners ate going to love them, they will know what Izzy felt real soon!! Death to the child molester and his enabler!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 24 2016 03:00 pm
That's cold how you made Remy Ma that lil girl's mother.
Kinda wish there were no pics for tjis story... but when I saw Blair Underwood... I was like... yeah... I can imagine him as Keith. After watching him in that movie Asunder... yeah... you picking him to play Keith is legit. Ugh... I hate stories like this. Mainly because kids get abused everyday and in a lot of the cases the parent(s) know and don't do shit... or are in some way involved. Good writing. Horrible situation.
Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed [Report This]Date: February 20 2016 03:36 am
The pic of Izzy makes me want to cry!! I'm with you for this ride MP because I know Hurt is coming to the Devils.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2016 02:03 am
Take that baby to the hospital!! I got my gun!!!MP
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2016 02:00 am
moving alone.
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2016 01:58 am
1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10, Girl i'm a boxer I have been boxing for years I want to take this piece of shit out in my backyard and kick her ass untill my hands are bloody and then then get my husband hunting knife and skinned Mr. Keith until he is unrecognizable and carved into tiny pieces. This story MP is going to get to me I can feel it!!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: February 16 2016 01:55 am
I honestly don't think I can stomach it, it's a very well written story but I don't think I can handle it.
Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 05:10 pm
Give Luc a brother and best friend to help him run his gym and keep him sane
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 05:08 pm
I hate that bitch, Regina needs to die a horrible death. Keith needs his dick cut off and shoved up his butt!! Jail is too good for those two. People who abuse children deserve death!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 02:32 am
I was so hesitant to read this. It is very well written, but so hard to read. Poor Izzy. That monster of a incubator is destroying that little girl. I so hope she ends up in jail. Although, six feet under would be OK by me. This is really hard. Well done, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 02:29 am
Your story timeline doesn't make sense. Why would a father send his daughter back after he found out she was being molested.... You need to start over again.
Author's Response:
The the thrid chapter is a flashback I put in the chapter notes one month earlier. The first two chapters were present
time and Luc has not sent Izzy back since first few visits with her therapist who informed him that she was being
molested. So actually you need to read it over again and pay attention to the chapter notes.
Reviewer: choconilla89 Signed [Report This]Date: February 13 2016 01:10 am
That was terrible. Poor Izzy, Poor Luc. For Regina to think pimping out her child and not react to Izzy's screams is ok means that she was abused in this manner when she was a little girl as well. Regina seems to have become desensitized to it. That does not excuse her behavior, because she does know better and is benefitting from it selfishly. I hope karma comes back to Regina and "Mr. Keith" and they are punished for this crime.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 09:08 pm
Wow. I can't even imagine! 😡😤😪. The devil!!!
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 08:15 pm
Please make sure Regina dies in a firey EXTREMELY violent death.
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]Date: February 12 2016 06:32 pm
Thank you for having Kenya do her job!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: February 09 2016 05:17 pm