Reviews For What If
Title: Chapter 1

No doubt about it both were hurt by the breakup.  

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 23 2016 12:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Some people don't miss the water till the well runs dry. It was his decision to leave that relationship, and it was her decision to accepted it. She's happy now and I don't think seeing him or hearing about him will stop her happiness. Now the tables has turned, he's on the outside looking in, regret is a b*tch!!!

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2016 09:08 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Redemption!!!!! This is what every woman wants the guy who left her to feel. I'm glad you gave her a happy ending. I don't think you need another installment to this series. This is an awesome place to end it. If you do and they do run into each other please let her happiness with her life and husband shine through and not what could've been if he hadn't thought the grass was greener. Excellent writing! Thank you. I'm looking forward to your next series.

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2016 02:41 pm

Title: Chapter 1

A small part of me feel sorry for his loss, but a bigger part feels he should simmer in his sadness.  He found out the grass on the other side was just grass.  

Dara's friend was hurt badly and probably made the new man in her life work double hard to earn her trust and love.  Her husband is giving her what the ex could have, but refused.  

I really don't know if Dara should mention seeing him or not...probably not, he is insignificant now (Colin will tell anyway).

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2016 07:23 am

Title: Chapter 1

You are a very talented writer!  

Reviewer: pearlcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 17 2016 04:59 am

Title: Chapter 1

These one-shots are great. Short but filled with some many emotions. I want to throttle the main character for how he hurt the other, especially for feeling as if he's entitled to know how she's coping after so many years and being selfish enough to even ask that Dara tell her she saw him. That's just wrong and if he truly wanted her happy he wouldn't have put Dara in such a position.

Yet, after saying all the above I hope you do another oneshot where they come face to face after so much time apart!

 

Reviewer: annienathanson Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 17 2016 01:41 am



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