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Title: Chapter 3: The taste of coffee and the power of gravity.

Great update. I suppose I understand Morena's reservations, but I wonder why she decided to go the, "we're just having sex" route before giving things a chance?



Author's Response:

I promise I'll explain that. Have already written it!

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2016 11:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

Love it. Brilliantly written and sizzling hot.

 Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2016 02:40 pm
Title: Chapter 2: The picture on the wall

Girl, I hope Travis is no stalker! that picture on the wall will freak me out!!. Thanks honey for this update.

Author's Response:

LOL! HE IS NOT! I promise. 

He's just got some issues! I promise he's not a pervert, though.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 26 2016 01:06 pm
Title: Chapter 2: The picture on the wall

Travis don't hurt Mo, don'the just use her for sex. Mo  isn't a trick so show her some respect.

 Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 24 2016 10:46 am
Title: Chapter 2: The picture on the wall

Yeah, the both of them are truly gone!  Hot update! 😄😍

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2016 03:37 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

Excellent start! 

Can't wait to see how this story unfolds. 

 

 Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2016 03:34 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

Travis is hot but he'said a ho.  More please I am intrigued.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 23 2016 12:51 am
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

YES! !!!

 Reviewer: intheroar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 09:13 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

I have not started reading yet. But let me tell you. Your cast looks great! I hooe that the 'next' story is someone for George because he is cute.

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 09:01 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

I have not started reading yet. But let me tell you. Your cast looks great! I hooe that the 'next' story is someone for George because he is cute.

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 09:00 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

I have not started reading yet. But let me tell you. Your cast looks great! I hooe that the 'next' story is someone for George because he is cute.

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 08:57 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

I have not started reading yet. But let me tell you. Your cast looks great! I hooe that the 'next' story is someone for George because he is cute.

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 08:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

I have not started reading yet. But let me tell you. Your cast looks great! I hooe that the 'next' story is someone for George because he is cute.

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 07:33 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

Like it so far. Can't wait to read more. Travis's pic is hot!!!!

 Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 07:31 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

I like it!! I can't wait to see what happens next. Travis is a HOTTIE!! with his man bun.

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 06:34 pm
Title: Chapter 1: The elevator's hall

I already follow your story on literotica! So glad you brought it to the chamber! Can't wait for the rest of it!

 Reviewer: Keys72095 Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2016 04:31 am


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