Title: Afrodita

Is she seriously paying someone to be her husband... Finding someone else's soulmate doesn't have anything to do with finding your own. If you are good at what you do, that won't matter. I have never in my life heard of someone getting plastic surgery to look older. Now that's bizarre. And I wonder what's going to happen when she meets Andrew's soulmate? Will she recognize her? Now maybe she can take some time off to focus on finding her own damn soulmate and be happy forreal. 

Update soon! 



Author's Response:

Hey KeiKei! Yup she is hahaha

I haven't heard of that either so I thought why the heck not? Yeah, she desperately needs to take a break and find happiness!

thank you so so much for reading and commenting!! :))))

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: February 13 2017 09:44 pm

Title: Afrodita

She was so busy trying to stop him from meeting his soul-mate. That she probably meet her soul-mate and didn't recognize him because she was so busy living a lie. We love love love your writing style and your imagination💕😍

Author's Response:

HI Blessed Soul!! How's everything going? How's your mom?! Please send her my regards and I hope she's much better! 

Perhaps she did meet her soulmate...... *strokes chin*

Aww thank you so much, I'm triply touched lol. You're too kind xoxo

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 09 2017 05:04 pm

Title: Afrodita

She was wrong for that😤 now she's about to suffer the consequences of her actions😆 she's a fraud😬 excellent😍



Author's Response:

What would you do if you were in her position? Thank you so much Tre! You rock!!

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 04:57 am

Title: Lexi and Johnathon

Wow this lady is cold-hearted😡 that man didn't stand a chance😭 I like this😍



Author's Response:

ahhaha I know, but I love it! Thank you so much Tre!!

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 06 2017 04:53 am

Title: Afrodita

Brillant, love these vignettes.



Author's Response:

Thank you! You're too kind! <33

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2017 06:57 pm

Title: Rayna - Pt. 1 of 2

Brillant!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Bain!!! <33

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 05 2017 06:34 pm

Title: Lexi and Johnathon

Wow... I don't know how I would take hearing my husband's last moments like that. It would literally break me. I'm not sure if tough is the word to describe her though. She seems a bit selfish... Most people spend a lifetime looking for a love that what she had with Jonathon and here she is more worried about her damn beauty. I'm sorry, that just doesn't sit well with me. Not even 12 hours after his death you go and buy a damn hair dye kit?! Are you serious?!! There is nothing wrong with loving yourself more but come on chick. I figured that as soon as he said he was going for a ride that something was going to happen to him. Poor Jonathon.. Not Lexi. 

Update soon. 



Author's Response:

HI KeiKei!

lol yep, she's a selfish biotch who only carea about herself and her beauty. 

Yes I'll try! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 05:27 am

Title: Lexi and Johnathon

Girl... I don't like Lexi!! from the start it was all about her beauty. It's like she wanted him to die so she will stop aging ( how superficial ) and how ironic a day before Jonathon died Lexi help fix someone's car, but the next day her husbands brakes failed ( I'm side-eyeing this chick ) did she kill her husband? Thanks honey for this wonderful update.

Author's Response:

Hi jacqua43! 

I hate to say this but....she did kill her husband so she could stay beautiful forever.... She took the breaks out of his car. I didn't want to outright say it in the story, i wanted you to think about it. Remember, she loves her husband...but she loves herself more. 

Thank you for reading and reviewing! xoxoxo

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 28 2016 02:21 pm

Title: Lexi and Johnathon

Wow



Author's Response:

Is that a good wow or a bad wow?

Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed [Report This]
Date: October 27 2016 04:03 pm

Title: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

Wow... This is soo interesting. It makes you think about your own soulmate and stuff. Granted, things don't necessarily happen like that for us it's an interesting concept. I had to stop myself from checking for a scar before I thought about it. LOl. I feel bad for Sheila. But at least she knows that now rather than search for someone that isn't alive anymore. But to know that your soulmate has been dead since you were a baby is hard. She will never know what that love feels like. Truly sucks. Each story is soo different but finding real love is different for each person so it makes sense to share completely different stories. 

Update soon. 



Author's Response:

Aww hahaha the fact that you made sure to look made me smile way too hard! Yeah it is tough but she can always have a relationship with someone who is suffering the same way she is. Granted it's not the same but let's try to give Sheila a somewhat okay ending? Thank you so much KeiKei! I absolutely will!! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2016 05:54 am

Title: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

Marvelous!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much brown_mocha!! :) 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2016 01:21 am

Title: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

This is interesting with a cool twist.

Because Sheila's scar is healed and she continued to age perhaps she has another soulmate. Although no one seemed to notice Bret was a little salty at the end. Does he have a scar?



Author's Response:

Hi Presh! Sorry, i know that the Sheila situation is confusing thank you and jahchannah for bringing it up. I did fix it. If your soulmate dies before you're 18, you'll still age until you're 18! That was a mistake on my part that I oversaw so thank you guys for that! :)

And no, Bret doesn't have a scar lol! I promise if he did, i'd say!

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2016 11:38 am

Title: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

If you stop aging when your soul mate dies why wasn't Sheila stuck as a 10 month old?  She got the scar supposedly as a 10 month old meaning her soul mate had died...yet clearly she wasn't stuck as a 10 month old, so a big contradiction was made here...



Author's Response:

Hi jahchannah! Uhm, you stop aging when you turn 18 regardless of whether your soulmate has died or you just haven't found them. I mean, i did say multiple times that you stop aging at 18, so you age until you're 18, no matter what. Thank you for acknowledgin it. I will make a note of it so others can understand if they too are confused :)...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: October 08 2016 04:50 am

Title: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

Girl... this chapter was deep and I appreciate that. And you know that's so true, losing a soulmate does put a scar on your heart, losing anyone you love scars your heart. I'm so ready for the next chapter. Thanks honey for this update.

Author's Response:

Hi jacqua43! No no no thank you! I appreciate your review and your enthusiasm for the next chapter. You're the best! :)

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2016 02:02 pm

Title: Rayna - Pt. 1 of 2

I actually found this to be interesting. It's definitely a different way to look at finding your soulmate. A kinda scary way too when you think about it too. I find it interesting that in the beginning Rayna didn't care so much about finding her soulmate and then after hearing that story, she went to bed concerned that she might not. Quite the turn in opinions. 

Update soon. 



Author's Response:

It is scary when you think about it lol. And i've been doing a lot of thinking on the subject lol. My brain is fried from it. We all have a change of heart sometimes. Thank you so much and I will! 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: September 27 2016 04:31 am

Title: Rayna - Pt. 1 of 2

really liked it. Would love if you continued 😊👍



Author's Response:

Thank you so much and I will, God willingly. 

Reviewer: Loop Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2016 09:11 pm

Title: Rayna - Pt. 1 of 2

more plese



Author's Response:

sure thing:) 

Reviewer: misty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 17 2016 07:38 am

Title: Rayna - Pt. 1 of 2

I love the concept of this story. It's ao different and fresh. Reflection on your creativity and writing skills  (as your other stories  do). Please continue...looking forwardto read more :)



Author's Response:

Wow Pontsho_m. I am touched. Thank you. You are incredibly kind. Thank you so much! xoxo

Reviewer: Pontsho_m Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2016 02:17 am

Title: Rayna - Pt. 1 of 2

I love the concept of this story, it's very different and I like that. I believe there someone out there for everybody and sometimes you have to stop looking and let them find you. I'm so intrigued about this story, it has so many possibilities. Thanks honey for this new story.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much jacqua43! I really appreciate your support! That means so much to me :) 

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 15 2016 02:12 pm



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