Title: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

Wow... This is soo interesting. It makes you think about your own soulmate and stuff. Granted, things don't necessarily happen like that for us it's an interesting concept. I had to stop myself from checking for a scar before I thought about it. LOl. I feel bad for Sheila. But at least she knows that now rather than search for someone that isn't alive anymore. But to know that your soulmate has been dead since you were a baby is hard. She will never know what that love feels like. Truly sucks. Each story is soo different but finding real love is different for each person so it makes sense to share completely different stories. 

Update soon. 



Author's Response:

Aww hahaha the fact that you made sure to look made me smile way too hard! Yeah it is tough but she can always have a relationship with someone who is suffering the same way she is. Granted it's not the same but let's try to give Sheila a somewhat okay ending? Thank you so much KeiKei! I absolutely will!! :)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 11 2016 05:54 am

Title: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

Marvelous!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much brown_mocha!! :) 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: October 10 2016 01:21 am

Title: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

This is interesting with a cool twist.

Because Sheila's scar is healed and she continued to age perhaps she has another soulmate. Although no one seemed to notice Bret was a little salty at the end. Does he have a scar?



Author's Response:

Hi Presh! Sorry, i know that the Sheila situation is confusing thank you and jahchannah for bringing it up. I did fix it. If your soulmate dies before you're 18, you'll still age until you're 18! That was a mistake on my part that I oversaw so thank you guys for that! :)

And no, Bret doesn't have a scar lol! I promise if he did, i'd say!

Reviewer: Presh Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 08 2016 11:38 am

Title: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

If you stop aging when your soul mate dies why wasn't Sheila stuck as a 10 month old?  She got the scar supposedly as a 10 month old meaning her soul mate had died...yet clearly she wasn't stuck as a 10 month old, so a big contradiction was made here...



Author's Response:

Hi jahchannah! Uhm, you stop aging when you turn 18 regardless of whether your soulmate has died or you just haven't found them. I mean, i did say multiple times that you stop aging at 18, so you age until you're 18, no matter what. Thank you for acknowledgin it. I will make a note of it so others can understand if they too are confused :)...

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: October 08 2016 04:50 am

Title: Rayna - Pt. 2 of 2

Girl... this chapter was deep and I appreciate that. And you know that's so true, losing a soulmate does put a scar on your heart, losing anyone you love scars your heart. I'm so ready for the next chapter. Thanks honey for this update.

Author's Response:

Hi jacqua43! No no no thank you! I appreciate your review and your enthusiasm for the next chapter. You're the best! :)

Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 07 2016 02:02 pm



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