Reviews For Aynira
Title: Chapter. 4

I liked the revamp of this and I hope this story continues. 

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2017 11:33 pm

Title: Chapter 0

Lmao. This chapter was absolutely hilarious!!! So she found an egg that hatched into this horrific creature but she's supposed to be happy because it means she's a high ruler? It could have just been a rare gem or something. Why a nasty looking and acting creature? Does it grow up to be this amazing thing that protects her for all eternity? Will she become one of those ghost things when she dies because of that thing? I don't blame her for being disgusted by that thing. It sounds sickening. 

Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: November 02 2016 05:03 am

Title: Chapter 1

lol I would have freaked out and threw that little slime ball too... I wonder why it's so important great update looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Indigo_bluee Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 23 2016 07:32 am

Title: Chapter 2

I definitely thought it was the spirit of that dead guy and had set her up to kill her and take over her body or some craziness like that. Glad it wasn't that at all. LOl. But still, who and what are these lights that mysteriously turned into glowing people? And what do they want with Aynira? What exactly did she find? I'm going to guess these are the ancestors that you mentioned in the summary. I wonder what they have in store for her and why they chose her in the first place. 

Update soon. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2016 04:28 am

Title: Chapter 1

Interesting... She's so young. And she can see random balls of light flying around that no one else can see? Freaky weird. One might call that crazy. LOl. But then again, these lights were able to fly into her teacher's head and for a moment, take over her body. Interesting indeed. 

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: October 22 2016 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 2

Ok im officially hooked! Hope to see more soon. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! There'll be another chapter up by Saturday

Reviewer: Keyajackson Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2016 07:42 pm

Title: Chapter 2

I'm intrigued. It seems like its going to be a really good fantasy read.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I hope so! I've been world building for months and I'm currently resisting the urge to info dump

Reviewer: nikol Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 15 2016 04:17 am



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