Wow great chapter, but I'm upset with Dena leaving her date like that. It was rude and I would've made Clark call me tomorrow.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2017 02:42 am
Loving this story. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2017 02:06 am
I think that Dena meeting her mom was everything!!! I am glad that they were able to reconnect and start to form a true relationship. I wish her Dad was an authentic person. He lives in the shadows with his lies because he doesn't know how to be real with himself; until he learns how to be honest with himself, he cannot leave Tammy or really have a meaningful connection with anyone. His daughters may never talk to him again and unfortunately that is the bed he made for himself from the covers of his lies and passivity.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: April 23 2017 12:55 am
This was an important emotional chapter and I'm thinking what needs to happen in order for her to be fulfilled.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: April 22 2017 09:33 am
That's good about your MRI😃 i wish more women were like Maya and do everything in their power to get away from a bad relationship. To Tammy ( Girl 👧 Bye!! ) nice update😀
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: April 19 2017 02:36 am
Praise God!! honey I'm so happy your MRI came back good just continue to rehab that knee. Poor Maya she needs her family not that mother of hers. You let my children come to me and tell me they are being abused, believe me there will be hell to pay. All Tammy saw was dollar signs$$$ and not the safety and health of her child and grandchild. I'm glad she got kicked to the curb. I can't wait for Dena to meet her real mother. Great update honey!
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: April 16 2017 05:01 pm
Amazing as usual! The last happy ending for awhile? Oh no!
Reviewer: PetitteBelle Signed [Report This]Date: April 10 2017 02:51 pm
Thanks for the great update. It seems like this family has a lot of loose ends to tie together. I can see some suspenseful moments happening in the future. I hope everyone can weather that storm.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: April 09 2017 04:43 pm
This is a great story, why am I just now finding it? Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2017 08:17 pm
"Last happy ending for a while"? Girl you got me messed up.
Reviewer: Golden Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2017 05:10 am
Shit about to get real
Author's Response:
Oh, you have no idea ;)
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: April 08 2017 04:17 am
Tammy is a hater😕 why? Dena didn't do nothing to her but be born. Okay Jasper should keep divorce papers in his pocket, because that heifer is cray cray😂
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2017 02:06 am
It's time for mother daughter reunion😆
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: April 07 2017 01:59 am
I'm patiently waiting for another chapter. Keep writing.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2017 12:59 pm
Wow! Tammy has won to be worst mother ever.
Keep writing, well done.
Date: March 31 2017 12:58 pm
Keep writing, well done.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2017 12:56 pm
Keep writing, well done.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2017 12:54 pm
Keep writing, well done.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2017 12:54 pm
Dena is a work-in-progress.
Great story.
Date: March 31 2017 12:53 pm
Keep writing, well done.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2017 12:50 pm
Keep writing, well done.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2017 12:48 pm
Keep writing, well done.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2017 12:48 pm
Keep writing, well done.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2017 12:47 pm
Keep writing, well done.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2017 12:46 pm
I woke up at 4am and started to read this story. I'm hooked. It's a sweet and heart wrenching story. Well done!
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: March 31 2017 12:45 pm