Reviews For His Own Cinderella
Title: Chapter 1

While I love to read and show support to the people who take time out of their own lives to give myself and others like us a feel of their craft. I can't understand why you would write only three chapters of this story and then sell it on Amazon for $0.99, when in my honest opinion you should have just submitted it on here first, to get a feel of what you could tweak in this story/series. 

Reviewer: ynise1 Signed starstar [Report This]
Date: February 03 2017 04:58 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Great start, but why the repeat of chapters?

Reviewer: alee92 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2017 01:32 pm

Title: Chapter 1

From what I have read:

romantic male lead is a hound dog, while his girl is your stereotypical skinny, popular blond and the desperate female lead; so desperate that she would still take on the guy wet and smelling like sex from his girl.

 I am sorry, but this is a turn off and it is tacky to attempt to use this site to sell a book by giving us a teaser chapter. 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: February 03 2017 06:15 am

Title: Chapter 1

So,  this about advertisement?  you have not written any story I have read on this site.   However, you want us to buy.  Not

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: February 03 2017 04:41 am



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