I love this story, I only wish you could have elaborated on what happened when they took the boys to see Vicki and the rest of the family and what they thought. I love that you had imput on Layla and Hugh that was an awesome coupling. Awesome story!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much kimyso. I'm glad that you thought it was an aweome read! I don't write these stories too often but from time to time they pop into my head and I'm happy when people enjoy reading as much as I do writing them. Again thanks so much!
Reviewer: kimyso Signed
[Report This]Date: February 01 2020 06:32 am
You write these two so well. Their chemistry was amazing as was Evangeline with most of the guys on the show but she would have made a great partner for Todd. The writers did not know what a jewel they had in her character. More stories please.
Reviewer: smolley Signed [Report This]Date: October 17 2018 09:07 pm
Evangeline and Todd had such chemistry and really supported each other.
Author's Response:
It come natural for them. Their relationship just flows from one step to the next. Of course he got there before her :) but he understood that eventually she would do all he had to do was make the move at the perfect moment. Too bad that OLTL failed to captilize on the acting skills of TSJ and REG :(
Thanks so much for enjoying the read and leaving a wonderful review!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 11 2018 11:02 pm
Thank you for the update. I will miss you and your stories. I know it will be some time before you return. The ending to this story was beautiful. Victor gets his happy ever after, or close to it as he can get. He's in a healthy, wholesome relationship, as apposed to the toxic, train wreck that was disguised as love, that he and Blair shared. I always thought that the writers on OLTL were idiots, for not giving Todd/Victor and Evangeline a chance to shine. Showing what the love of someone without ulterior motives can do for you.Many authors and writers tend to romanticize dysfunctional, toxic, even borderline abusive love, and we as the audience, fans and readers tend to do the same.Your stories are a twist to the norm in my opinion. You have the woman rescue the man. Your male characters are 'damsels in distress' , whilst the female are 'knights in shining armour.' I like that, it's different.Thank you for all your stories, past, present and future. Writing is a gift and talent, you truly have it in abundance. Have a blessed week. Take care. God bless.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much to the amazing SARAH!!! I'm always looking forward to your reviews because you make me so appreciative and mentally stew over your comments. You have certainly done it again. I never thought that I was making my male leads 'damsels in distress' I'm like wow I really like that. Perhaps its a reflection of my country as it stands right now, the women have to take on the leading roles even if we want to or not.
Another thing that you do is that you make me feel it was worth writing this story and completing it. My computer system has been giving me so much trouble and this little lenovo is a mess to operate for me personally I don't like laptops because I grew up on those ancient typewriters LOL!!!! It was discouraging and that's why this last chapter took so long. My system is still not fixed yet but hopefully it can get done sooner rather than later.
You recalled I dedicated my story Celia to my best reviewers at the time and perhaps my next period piece story will be dedicated to you as a token of my appreciation. I tried my best for them at the time and hopefully I will be inspired to write this as well.
God Bless You too and THANK YOU! YOU ARE THE BEST!!!
Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 18 2018 06:32 pm
The best. Thnx for such an engrossing and enjoyable story. Will put on my favorites list.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed. Wow added to a favorites now thats amazing!!! Again thanks for enjoying the read and leaving a review!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 17 2018 09:51 pm