Submit a Review
Title: Chapter 1

I'm not loving his attitude. I wonder what will spark his change; will it by Sydney, Natalia, or will something bad happen to make him change his ways?  Looking forward to more.  Thanks for sharing. 

 Reviewer: idriveavitz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 08 2017 08:54 pm
Title: Chapter 1

I like Laceya86;some women can be so mean to other women when someone else comes into the picture. She's more mature than Jesse. Nice update😌

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 08:37 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Someone as a crush

 Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 05:38 pm
Title: Prologue

It's going to take a lot for me to like Jesse, he's acting like such a douche. He's going to have a hard time redeeming himself. Great job so far with this story!

 Reviewer: kinkyncurly Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 04:43 pm
Title: Chapter 1

What the hell is his problem?

 Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 03:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Jesse is acting like a little girl who lost her playmate😡 he needs to grow some ballsc17; 👍

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 02:20 am
Title: Prologue

👍

 Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 07 2017 02:09 am
Title: Prologue

Great start. How are we ever going to like Jesse? as a grown man shouldn't he be a bit more involved in hiriing his daughter's caregiver?

 

 Reviewer: bookbutterfly Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 06 2017 01:09 pm
Title: Prologue

I love the plot, hope to read more soon. Thanks!

 Reviewer: Bel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 06 2017 04:35 am
Title: Prologue

Jesse is an ass!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 05 2017 01:32 am
Title: Prologue

Great start..could do without the 'if I was a white girl' part but intriguing none the less.



Author's Response:

Could do without the dusty irrelevant backhanded comment 

 Reviewer: intheroar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: April 05 2017 12:08 am
Title: Prologue

Jessie Stone is going to be a problem for Natalia but if he wants to be a jackass treat him like one. I know he's her employer but she's there for the child not her disrespectful daddy😀

 Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2017 08:56 pm
Title: Prologue

This is going to be so good. Please continue with it. I'm very interested, good job!!!

 Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2017 04:51 pm
Title: Prologue

Can't wait for the next update!

 Reviewer: Janez91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 04 2017 04:18 pm


Enter the security code shown below:
Note: You may submit either a rating or a review or both.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.