Though interesting, the story seems disjointed and doesn't flow well...is Emiliy hesistant because of her history with Elijah or does she want him...this chaptert she's kissing him and in the next she doesn't know if she wants him...definitely interesting but strive for better clarity...
You are right. *sigh* I'm not doing justice to this story because I'm so distracted with other things.
It does feel bunched and put together.Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: June 20 2017 06:28 pm
I'm starting to blame these stories for my unrealistic expectations of men.Reviewer: intheroar Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 11 2017 09:39 pm
DAMN DAMN DAMN
im loving how fierce she is! She doesn't take no shit! And he obviously has been in love with her for years. The pairing is amazing. That last bit was so hot. I'm soooo excited for more! Make him work for you girl!
Loved it!Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2017 01:05 pm
Ok that last line, what he did. GAT DAMNReviewer: Lisa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 08 2017 01:25 pm
This sounds so interesting, I can't wait for more chapters.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 06 2017 06:14 am