Garrett you went too far, Jonathan is only still alive because of Ravenn and you have triggered his lack of self-worth. That conversation was not constructive, you have broken your son down. Thank you for updating!! Candace, are you going to have Jonathan go into the Marines in this version?
Author's Response:
Garrett was very in your face and he really broke his son. Was it for the good or bad? That's the question! :) Thank you so much for reading! & I think you mean Navy SEAL and you'll just have to wait and see what he does after high school! ;)
Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous
[Report This]Date: August 20 2017 08:15 am
I can understand trying to toughen him up, but calling him a coward and bitch seems too far to me. I saw a video online talking about a woman was cursing out hers kids to make them behave. The lady talked about the affect that can have on the child and that when she said those same things to the mother she got mad. She was making a point that the kids feel bad being talked to that way. Not feeling his dad anymore. He could've gotten his point across without calling his own son a bitch. Yeah the Mom may baby him too much. Saying those could easily do more harm than good in some cases, especially someone who already suffer from depression... I know.
Author's Response:
I give this review two thumbs up! As someone who has battled depression, I know first hand what this kind of 'love' can do so we are on the same page here!
Reviewer: Kimikae Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2017 06:58 am
Hate to say it, but maybe he needed to snap. Take stock of himself like he needs to and get on with something in his life. He's stuck in limbo as it is now.
Author's Response:
Maybe! We'll just have to see! :)
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 20 2017 04:56 am
Please update
Author's Response:
Already up! :)
Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]Date: August 19 2017 08:49 pm
Love it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 11:59 pm
Thanks for the updates honey! an that was too funny! Great job!!
Author's Response:
LOL! I am glad you enjoyed it! :)
Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]Date: August 07 2017 01:04 pm
Well well well, it's seems like they came to their sense even if it's like Jonathan had lost his mind but he finally came to his senses. I like this version of the story so far because I can see the build up between those 2. Oh, Mrs King is so funny!
Author's Response:
They are working on it but they are on their way! ;) I love the Lucy character so much. She is really so much fun to write.
Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 04 2017 11:02 pm
So in love with these two! 💕
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: sunsetdawn Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2017 04:41 pm
That bump to his head gave Johnny the confidence to tell Little how he feels😲 an why stop there, ask her to teach you what she likes😆 teach him early girllllll😆 2 thumbs up👍👍 for this update😆
Author's Response:
HA! He doesn't know what the heck is going on right now, lol. & LMAO! Raeann might have really killed him if she taught him what she likes. ;)
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2017 04:30 pm
Yay!! I am so happy Johnny and Raeann revealed their feelings. I want certain aspects of Johnny's concussion (like him not being as self conscious and hesitant) to remain with him because confidence is sexy and obviously Raeann responded to that side of him. Lucy is a trip and is going to tease them forever. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response:
After that bump on the head Johnny is definitely going to show signs of 'something'. I want to keep him 'Johnny' as much as possible but this time around he will grow a lot more than he did in the previous versions so stick around. ;) & I love Lucy! She is so much fun to write!
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2017 02:31 pm
They're so cute together😍 I loved how he asked her to teach him how to French kiss 💋 an she was like...YES!!!😂 Mama King reminds me of my mom😍 Nice update😝
Author's Response:
They are something else. :) & Lucy is a trip. She just says whatever she wants and you'll just have to deal, LOL!
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2017 12:47 pm
Awww....that was so damn cute!! John needs to get knocked out more often if it relaxes him like that...hahaha.
Author's Response:
LOL! He was a mess.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2017 07:23 am
I'm obsessing over this version ? I don't know if this was in the old version but I gotta say I do love it!!! I hope Shauna or whoever the girl was from the other version doesn't exist. She made shit so bad I hated her zzzz
little is sooo cute hahahaha and Johnny sure a a fast learner 😉😉 loving itthank you
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! No, this chapter wasn't in the previous version. :) & I think the name you're thinking about is Genevieve, lol. A lot of folks hated her! ;)
Reviewer: Gordana Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2017 05:56 am
Awwwww
Author's Response:
:)
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2017 05:03 am
Thank you for the update, Candace I have been jonsing for another update and here it is. Johnny is so out of it, but his concussion has made him open about his feelings about Raenn. THE way that Raeann was lusting over JOhnny's body was funny especially combined with her inner conversations. YOu did that damn thang again Candace Caine!!!
Author's Response:
LOL! I had so much fun a writing this chapter. He was really speaking his mind and act a fool. ;)
Thank you!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: August 04 2017 04:36 am
awww, they cute or whatever 🙄😏😥
Author's Response:
LOL, thank you so much for reading! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: August 04 2017 04:35 am
Come on Johnny. Stop being a little punk bitch and grab your woman up and kiss the hell out of her back. He certainly will be embarrassed after he comes to.
Author's Response:
Dang, you're letting Johnny have it, LOL! ;)
Reviewer: SnowFever Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2017 11:23 pm
I don't think I have ever fully laughed like that reading anything in awhile. It's soo adorable it just has to make you sick!! He passed out from a tongue kiss. Raeann knows she wrong for that. She went completely bold. Heck her outfit alone almost gave this boy a heart attack and then you do that?! Jesus, that was one heck of a kiss.
UPdate soon!
Author's Response:
Johnny definitely felt the heat, literally. It was just too much! ;)
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: July 30 2017 12:01 pm
Please updat soon
Author's Response:
Will do!
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: July 29 2017 02:55 am
LOVE LOVE LOVE
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Kels_Bama11 Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2017 06:47 pm
I love this story, I'm so glad you brought it back. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 27 2017 06:11 pm
I'm shook!!
Author's Response:
LOL! AYE!!
Reviewer: TooMuchEnnui Signed [Report This]Date: July 27 2017 01:16 am
CC,
Honey I absolutely love this story, I'm so glad your back and that you continue to show us how talented you are. Keep doing you honey we all love you
100% true fan
Author's Response:
OMG, thank you so very much! :)
Reviewer: ynise1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 04:54 am
This guy, still a mess I see😂😂 glad you're back Candice!!
Author's Response:
LOL! Still the same ol' Johnny. & Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 26 2017 04:29 am
😂😂😂😂💏 fade to black😂😂😂😂 Love it!!!
Author's Response:
LOL!!!
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 04:32 pm