Johnny passed out!!!😂 maybe now he will stop wearing all that black(that color absorbs heat🔥) This had me cracking up!!😂 poor baby. Nice update👍
Author's Response:
LOL! It was just too much for my boy. He literally was hot as hell and Raeann didn't help the situation by looking like that and kissing him.
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed
[Report This]Date: July 25 2017 01:24 pm
Yessss I love this already. Please update updat update
Author's Response:
Thank you! Update is on the way. :)
Reviewer: cullensjonas Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 09:42 am
I loved this story the first time it came out and you would not believe how excited I am to see them back in a new fresh story! I love your writing and can't wait for the installment! I was laughing so hard when he fainted, he is so cute! <3
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! :) Thank you for coming back and reading the new and last version of this tale. I hope you enjoy it.
& LOL! Johnny overheated out there. First, the heat and then Raeann. It was too much for my boy!
Reviewer: AlexandreaWrites Signed [Report This]Date: July 25 2017 01:00 am
Poor John. With all those clothes on and sweating so much, Rae's kiss just sent him over the edge. I howled.
Author's Response:
LMAOOOO!!! He got overheated. It was just too much.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: July 24 2017 09:17 am
I don't think you understand my joy right now! I'm soo freaking excited that you're back! I read this story the first time you published it and it was amazing and I'm reading your newer version of it and I absolutely love it already! Thank you!
Author's Response:
THANK YOU SO MUCH!!! I am glad you came back to give this story one last try! I hope you enjoy it. :)
Reviewer: weluvjb92 Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2017 07:23 am
Raeann really put it on Johnny! That scene was too cute but I hope they didn't get hurt when Johnny fainted, that poor boy didn't know what to do. Lol! Lovin this version of your story! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
LOL! He tried to hold on but it just became too much for him. He went down and took her with him so we'll see how that ended! ;)
Reviewer: jetzero Signed [Report This]Date: July 24 2017 01:38 am
MORE MORE MORE!!!
Author's Response:
Update is on its way! :)
Reviewer: AB Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 24 2017 12:19 am
It's nothing
Author's Response:
:)
Reviewer: Kimikae Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2017 11:06 pm
Wow! Apparently Raeann really laid one on him. I hope he can recover before the other students arrive! 😁
Author's Response:
She did too much for poor Johnny. I think she almost killed him.
Reviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2017 11:02 pm
Poor Jonathan, Raeann scared the hell out of him. Raeann just hit him in the face with the truth and he has to figure out what to do about it.
Author's Response:
HA! She didn't warn him or nothing.
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2017 10:51 pm
Johnny really fainted Awwww
Author's Response:
He got overheated I think. ;)
Reviewer: PurpleLover23 Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2017 10:02 pm
LMAO!!! Thats all I got!
Author's Response:
LOL!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2017 08:02 pm
I still like the story. The thing is I like characters like raeann especially being played by a WOC(livid at the entertainment industry, don't even get me started), but and the same time it bothers me because I have social phobia and I could never do that. I connect more to shy or troubled characters. I'm sure I don't share every opinion Raeann has, but she ask the way I wised I did. I guess people would just say I'm jealous, maybe, but plenty of people are jealous but doesn't have social phobia holding them since like first grade. maybe it is because I know if I didn't have social phobia I would not feel that way. I'm through babbling...post would be a chapter long with me over explaining things over and over. My brother know more than enough about me saying the same thing a bunch of times.
Author's Response:
Ah, I get what you're say now and I completely understand where you're coming from. She is definitely a different kind of character and there maybe be a lot of people who don't connect with her because she is so bold and outgoing and just out there. It's totally fine that you feel the way that you do because trust me, I get it! :)
Reviewer: Kimikae Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2017 07:54 pm
while I understand and like the story so far it kind of got on my nerves how she talked about how great the king family is nothing personal just my own issues showing up
Author's Response:
I don't really understand what you mean? Care to elaborate?
Reviewer: Kimikae Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2017 06:38 pm
Johnny fainted from Raeann's kiss. That had me laughing out loud! Raeann make the move on his birthday.
Author's Response:
LMAOOOO!! It was just too much for him.
Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 23 2017 06:36 pm
WHAT IN THE COTTONPICKING HELL WAS THAT?!
Jonathan *clap* seriously *clap* bruh?!
Falling out in the school parking lot like you a saint in church that caught the Holy Spirit?
You know I'm mad right now, CC!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
LMAOOOO!! I am hollering. It was too much for Johnathan to take and plus it was hot outside. Raeann almost killed him I think! ;)
Reviewer: Missus James Signed [Report This]Date: July 23 2017 06:21 pm
Girl... what? Why would you take a perfectly good story that everybody loved, trash it, and then put out multiple revised versions? Have you no loyalty or respect for your readers? As much as I loved the original, I'm tapping out. As the wishy washy writer you seem to be, I wish all the fans of this story good luck with what I am almost sure will be extended periods of absence with no story updates, more revisions, and endless excuses by the author for wasting your time.
Author's Response:
That's the beauty of this site. You don't have to read anything you don't want to. You don't have to pay for something you don't want and are free to move on without any regret! You calling me wishy washy and pretty much trying to insult me is fine because my skin has grown very thick during my hiatus from writing so it doesn't bother me. I must correct you on something, this story is already written, I just have to do some editing to it so there will be no extended periods of absence unless my work and outside life gets in the way. I am a real person outside of this site by the way. I've been gone for a year I think, so I've had a lot of time to write and get my stories together. ;)
P.S. That little crack about loyalty to readers was so ridiculous and you're coming across as someone who is entitled and that's not good. My readers know that their reviews and feelings are important to me and I'm not an author who usually leaves stories unfinished. Asked around, I've had stories, sequels and one shots that I've completed so you're definitely wrong there but I thank you for reading what you did and I appreciate the love you had for the first story.
-CC
Reviewer: CaliKid44 Signed [Report This]Date: July 21 2017 09:52 am
Just adorable. She fits right in with them. She's apart of the family, she just needs to make a move on Johnny so it can be official. I can't help but laugh reading about him at this party. I know its not funny but I all but died. Lol
Update soon.
Author's Response:
LOLOLOLOL! I actually laughed myself when I wrote that part about the party.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: July 20 2017 03:04 pm
Love it d84;d84;d84; please keep this story going.
Author's Response:
Will do! Thank you for reading! :)
Reviewer: ynise1 Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 07:12 pm
I must admit, I was a bit confused when I initially saw this online. I could have sworn I had read this before. LOl. I like the beginning, it helps to understand them more. Reading about what happened to him is still hard, no child should experience that. Raeann is funny to me. Big things come out of Texas they say. LOl. I love how her mom got her together real quick. You've had your moment, now get it together before I help you do it myself. Haha!!
Author's Response:
Ha! I am glad you came back to read this story again. It is going to be a fun ride.
Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 06:36 pm
I'm going to always LOVE YOUR STORIES... I ACTUALLY LOVE ALL YOUR VERSION OF THIS STORIES... I been there since the beginning.
Author's Response:
Thank you so, so, so much for sticking with me! I appreciate y'all for hanging in there with me. Y'all are the best! :)
Reviewer: Dymond Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 19 2017 02:02 pm
I'm definitely interested in this story😆
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Reviewer: Tre Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2017 11:06 pm
I'm a new FAN😍 I love the King Family💕
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2017 06:26 pm
Well, I hope we all don't get into another war concerning these two...lol! Is this what, the second or third go at this story? I love it and it evokes such strong emotions in the readers. You do such a fabulous job with it and i cant wait to read some of the changes you've made with it.
Author's Response:
Ha! I can't make any promises. ;) This is actually the third try and the LAST, LOL! I have it already written out fully so no more rewrites after this. I am so glad you came back to read this story! I hope you enjoy it.
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: July 17 2017 05:23 pm
As-usual-I-ADORE-this-story-so-much
PS---sorry-for-the-weird-typing-some-of-my-letters-do-not-work-along-with-my-space-bar---copy-and-paste-are-my-best-friends-right-now
Author's Response:
LOL! It's okay, thank you so much for reading.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: July 17 2017 10:59 am