Reviews For Sugar Mama
Title: Sour Surprises

Loved this update... Sugar makes me want to Slap her, I know shes's kinda scared to get back into another relationship, but don't make Chef pay for her Louse of an Ex, he's Twice the man that Douche is... and if she don't want him, then Pass him to ME LOL.

I love that Chef is a man that won't give up and doesn't let Sugar push him away.. she's fighting a losing battle

I kinda figued Sugar was pregnant... the right Father was waitibg in the wings

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response:

I know reading about Sugar can be frustrating sometimes, but the payoff will be sweeter in the end!

Reviewer: liberty lady Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 12 2018 08:59 pm

Title: Sour Surprises

So happy for this update. Chef ain' playing around when it comes to courting Sugar. She's going to have to surrender soon, but she'll be so much happier when she does. And I have a feeling he's going to spoil the hell outta her now that he put a bun in the oven... I can see her getting annoyed and starting a fight... which will lead to great sex 😂😂😂😂



Author's Response:

LMAO! Your predictions are very accurate!

Reviewer: Jordy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 11 2018 07:49 pm

Title: Sour Surprises

A baby!!! Yay!!! I love this story, I can't wait for Sugar to FINALLY move forward with her whole heart with Miles. I love how wonderful and strong he is for her, I hope she can get her happiness and enjoy the little family she has.. Her dream of a loving husband and child.

Great job, please post again soon. 



Author's Response:

This baby definitely changes things. They will definitely have to overcome a lot of obstacles to get to their happiness. 

Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 10 2018 09:26 am

Title: Sour Surprises

👸🏾Yassss, I needed that. Thank you 👏🏽. I love his persistence...

Author's Response:

You know Miles not backing down! LOL

Reviewer: Poppy Velour Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 09 2018 06:30 pm

Title: Sour Surprises

Yaaaaay! Glad to see a new chapter. Chef still has his work cut out for him, but I know he'll get through to Sugar one way or another



Author's Response:

He's got some tricks up his sleeve. 

Reviewer: Jordy Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2018 02:45 pm

Title: Sour Surprises

"Sugar shook her head, casting her teary eyes downward. “Forgive me for not being optimistic about this, Miles. Every single one of my pregnancies ended in a miscarriage or a stillbirth. There’s something wrong with my body.”"

No, Sugar. Something was wrong with her pos first husband. He was likely stressing her out the whole time but she haven't put those dots together yet.

This is a blessing, both the baby and Miles.



Author's Response:

Miles about to go protective papa bear. Make my words.

Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: May 08 2018 02:28 am

Title: Sour Surprises

Girl, there is nothing in this world sexier than a man that can speak French, Italian or Spanish. I got a little moist myself! LOL!

Sugar needs to lighten up and stop being so hard on herself, and believe she is WORTHY of MILES' LOVE!

She deserves to be happy and stop pretending she does not love this man already...just because that last Butthole of a husband treated her badly does not mean Miles will.

Thank you for the update it was great! I gave you 10 stars and 2 thumbs up because you desrve it.

This story is good even without sex! LOL!



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you! This review really made my day.

big heart

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 08 2018 12:27 am

Title: Sour Surprises

Sugar us tap dancing on my last nerve .



Author's Response:

LMAOOOO! Please, hang in there. She's gonna try and do right!

Reviewer: Pmgayles Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 10:43 pm

Title: Sour Surprises

Yasssss been waiting for this phones on 1% but it was worth the update 🙏🏾 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the next update.

Reviewer: toni174ever Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 07:23 pm

Title: Sour Surprises

I'm digging this update😆 now there's no turning back😆 Chef done claimed her as his future wife😆 and now that she's pregnant😆 this man is  going to be all up in her business😆 she just got to get out of his way😆👏👏👏👏 I'm so digging this 😆



Author's Response:

You right! He is going to be all up in her business. He's gonna protect his blessings.

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 02:40 pm

Title: Sour Surprises

YAY! I'm hoping that Chef is right. I hope that they are pregnant and that she carries to term. Your dialogue is so clever, funny and poignant. Brillant job, Chica.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! You know I love playful banter!

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 06:14 am

Title: Sour Surprises

Great update, now I need more though! I hope this pregnancy will not end by a miscarriage or something. 

As for the French part, good job but some little things can be corrected, send me an email I'll be glad to do it for you. 



Author's Response:

I will definitely take you up on this offer, lleendaah! There will be lots of French spoken when they visit his family in Louisiana and I've got a new story idea that is actually set in 1950s France. I will need your expertise if you are interested. 

Reviewer: lleendaah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 05:28 am

Title: Sour Surprises

Helena really needs to take that stank ass attitude somewhere else! Don't attack Mallory for sleeping with him when she was expressly told NOT to and why! By his own sister no less. I'm not sure Mallory was trying to be malicious about it at all. He's young, handsome and talented with a stake in his sister's business venture. He's enjoying the ladies right now. Nothing is about forever at the moment. Plus, Mallory already thinks she's crazy as hell, so I don't even know why he'd do it! Not even for sex! Now look at her petty ass!

Miles...no surprise there. Now that she knows, its begun!

Sweet moment between the twins! And the sisters.

Nice!

 



Author's Response:

You right. Mallory wasn't being malicious. Mallory was just being Mallory, but they were both wrong 'cause he knew how Helena was and she knew how he was. 

"No surprise there" LMAO

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 04:49 am

Title: Sour Surprises

Where did the time go?   I can't believe that the school year is almost at an end.  I am happy that Sugar has nowhere to run to.  She needs to stop pushing Miles away and live in the moment.  Great update.  



Author's Response:

YES! The school year has flown by so fast, but I am so glad because it was a crazy year from start to finish. Now as for Sugar and Miles, he isn't going anywhere no matter how hard Sugar pushes him. 

Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 07 2018 01:39 am



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