love it!... would've loved to see that prick go to the cleaners... ah well.. he'll get his comeuppance in due course lol
What I have in store for Lance will be well-deserved. ;) Keep your eyes peeled.Reviewer: Mary P Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2017 05:48 pm
Oh Dear! What an "intresting" way for Sully to find out about Sugar's new man. I am eagerly antiipating the conversation.
It was very interesting and that conversation between Sully and Sugar will be even more interesting, LOL.Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 04 2017 02:33 pm
Thank you for the update. Wow! I just...words can't describe your writing. I always maintain that there are only six great writers on this site (well seven if I agree with my sister). LOL. You have a great talent, no matter what anyone say otherwise.God Bless. Have a blessed week.
Aw, thank you so much! This review really made my day.
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Date: December 04 2017 06:53 am
LOOOOOL her brother won’t let her live that down! I like these two a lot! Hopefully we’ll see some development between the two relationship wise. Maybe even an interaction with the ex husband??
An interaction between Chef and Lance is coming up really soon. I am not sure if Chef and Lance are going to meet first or if Chef and Sully are going to meet first. Let's see where the muse takes me. :DReviewer: chatty504 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2017 05:52 am
That's half funny, half horrifying. OMG!! Well, this should be interesting, but I am sure Chef can handle his own. Could you do another chapter from Chef's POV? Great update as usual.
Chef can definitely handle his own around Sully, but Sully is going to testing him like crazy.Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 04 2017 05:44 am
I love this story and can identify with Sugar. At some point in our lives we have had a man like her ex. It is so great when someone life Chef enters your life to love you and help you heal. I hope they created twins or triplets. She deserves to share Motherhood with someone that loves her. Looking forwatd to more updates.
Thank you so much! I agree that we all have that one ex like Lance who just mess you up so bad that you have to rebuild your life again.Reviewer: Karmal Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07 2017 01:28 pm
YASSSS!!! to Chef and Sugar....this relationship is going to be a battle, but if he is willing to fight for her and with her to keep her, it will be worth it. I love that he is not timid about what he wants with her and how his strength will be the catalyst to pull her from this inability to believe she deserves a "Great Man" and she is a "Perfect Woman" for him. I really hope she gets pregnant just so she can see it was not her with the problem but her ex. She deserves the love of a child and a husband that adores her and I think that is what Chef will show her. I give you 10 stars not because of the sex, but inspite of the sex! (Even though it was pretty good writing!) I got a little misty myself! LOL!
It is fun to write male characters like Chef who are persistent when it comes to what they want. :D I am glad you are enjoying the story.Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 04 2017 09:08 am
It's a pleasure to say Missus James has done it again....excellent. looking forward to
To more updates...
Thank you so much! I am so happy you enjoyed this update. I hope you enjoy the next chapter, which will feature the morning after. :DReviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]
Date: October 30 2017 01:37 am
Poor Sugar has some work to do to get her confidence back. But with a strong, patient and committed Chef at her side she will eventually get there. Excellent update.
I hope that things have settled down at work.
Things have settled down. I keep my distance and try to shut my door and teach. Thank you for keeping me in your thoughts. :) Sugar has A LOT to work on, but Chef is a food man to have at her side. Definitely.Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: October 29 2017 10:31 pm
Welcome back! The update was on point. A=Awesome. Since Sugar's ex was always degrading her it's causing her to question herself as a person. Thank God for CHEF. He's going to get her straight.😄
Lance messed her up really bad to make her feel like she's less than, but one man's trash is another man's treasure. Sugar is Chef's treasure.Reviewer: maine956 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2017 10:30 pm
PLEASE,PLEASE let us readers (aka your FANS) name the babies. Yes, BABIES, Sugar deserves twins or triplets to make up for all the shit Lance put her through. And as for karma let Mariah's baby daddy be some trick she picked up and not Lance or the other wealthy ballplayer...and let Lance have sand in his balls; yes sand as we in the islands say...he can't make a baby
Reviewer: Stories Signed [Report This] Sugar is a twin and twins are known to have twins or multiples. ;) Three little Chefs running around. Heaven forbid! LOL You guys can totally name the babies. :D
Sugar is a twin and twins are known to have twins or multiples. ;) Three little Chefs running around. Heaven forbid! LOL You guys can totally name the babies. :D
Date: October 29 2017 07:38 pm
Sugar would benefit from therapy, no one in the this world is perfect but there is perfect person for you. Sugar get out of your head and take a chance on Chef. Chef is a real man!!
Sugar is so unsure of herself because of Lance. It's kind of sickening and sad. Chef will fix that though.Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2017 06:20 pm
Good LAWD!! That's some sex right there!
I feel for Sugar because she's taken other folks expectations and insecurities on herself and has made them her own. Its more important what HER expectations for herself are and if she can meet them, not others. She has to meet her own needs somewhere in all of this. Chef's gonna help her work that all out. She's only human and has to give herself a break here.
I saw that no glove bit. Thats gonna be interesting....
Glad you're back and thank you for the update!
When she figures out that no glove situation, ya'll better grab the popcorn. LMAOReviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2017 05:01 pm
Yes, Chef is the best. I look forward to more and i think you did great on the sex scene. I'm trying to get on your level. lol
Thank you so much, CrimsonBlaze! I'm trying to get better at it!. :)Reviewer: CrimsonBlaze Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2017 04:42 pm
MJ,BRAVO!! to you and the ladies that help get you muse back. Sometimes our thoughts are backed by so much insecurity, that they create lies we believe. It's sad that Sugar believed all the lies her ex threw at her. But Chef is breaking that chain... right here and right now. Chef was like " Hold up!, not today!" I love that man, he is exactly what Sugar needs. I do believe everything happens for a reason, an maybe God didn't want to see a child coming out of that union between Sugar and her ex. Great!! update honey! and the love scene was on point!!!!
LMAO, Chef wasn't letting her go anywhere. He was like, "Not today, Satan!" Thank you so much, Mrs. J.Reviewer: jacqua43 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2017 03:45 pm
I hate what that bastard did to her, I hope that Sugar will continue her relationship with Chef.
She'll fight it at first, but she'll give in! She doesn't have a choice when it comes to Chef! :)Reviewer: Janez91 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2017 03:09 pm
So great to see this update. I think Chef is just the man to prove Sugar wrong about her insecurities! Love him!
So sorry for the wait, but I am so glad you enjoyed it! :D Chef has many things up his sleeve to help Sugar out, but there's gonna be unexpected curveballs as well...LOLReviewer: Musicluva Signed [Report This]
Date: October 29 2017 06:48 am