Reviews For Sugar Mama
Title: Hot Soup

LOL...this is kinda new for Sugar. A MAN. A man who has has horrible things happen to  him, serve his country as a marine, been with and without a spouse himself, and came through it all relatively intact. I think he's comfortable in his own skin because he knows what's really important in life. He seems to know who he is and what he has to offer and its all wrapped in being a very alpha male. He's gonna make her feel like a real woman, not a wife playing part-time mother to a husband who never really grew up like she did with that other idiot! And can I say looking like he does and to get in her kitchen and burn there just curls my toes and makes me swoon! Annd....he's gonna through all of that at her!!!! Ha! 

He's gonna take care of Lance real good at some point because now Lance will be sniffing around where he has no business.

Watching Sugar blossom is going to be very interesting and fun.

Nice!!

 

P.S Work politics are the worst!!

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

With age comes perspective. You are absoultely right. Chef is comfortable in his own skin. He's not trying to find himself. He knows what he wants and he knows what he can offer. Chef knows that Sugar is his, but he's very patient.

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 08:42 pm

Title: Hot Soup

Loving this update. When Chef takes control ..he means it ! Swoon Loving Him!!! So Sorry Real Life is being a Pain. LOL if you need me to help you kick some ASS I'm here for You. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the love and support. It means the world to me. :)

Reviewer: Stacie Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 07:54 pm

Title: Hot Soup

Ha! Suck it Lance!



Author's Response:

Chef don't play! LOL

Reviewer: Janez91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 07:24 pm

Title: Hot Soup

We @The Chamber got your back...so...Grade Level Partner? Give her students sugar (Sugar LOL) on the DL. Hyperness should drive her crazy. Anyway, Loving the story can't wait for Sugar and Chef to get together...FIRE 



Author's Response:

LOL! Most of the time, kids are hyper without the sugar!

Reviewer: Stories Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 07:03 pm

Title: Hot Soup

I paused and almost threw my head back laughing when Chef told Lance clean tf off. Serves him right with that "hey big head" call to Sugar after treating her like trash for over a decade. Sounds like there's trouble in Insta Model paradise and he's angling for a standby. Welp, he learned today!

As for Chef - sweet Jesus have mercy, that man is something else. Especially that mouth. Sugar's finally met her match in more ways than one. She better prepare herself for when she gets better because Chef sounds ready to leap from the starting blocks.

I'm hoping and praying that you'll be free of the snakes very soon. A toxic work environment shortens lives from the stress alone. You deserve better.



Author's Response:

laughing

"Hey big head" call! OMG! HAHAHA! You are too much! But it's true tho! Chef gave Lance that dial tone TWICE! He wasn't having any of that. Chef is so much fun to write. He's a ex-Marine, so that mouth gotta be filthy. But you're right though, Sugar gotta watch her back 'cause Chef gonna make sure he make use of every single rule she laid down. She don't know what she just did.

Reviewer: Leo the Yardie Chick Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 06:25 pm

Title: Bittersweet

I love Chef******



Author's Response:

He is very loveable, but he is so calculating! LOL

Reviewer: maine956@gmail.com Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 04:59 pm

Title: Hot Soup

I guess we can expect a visit from Lance real soon.  I am sure that he is quite curious about the identity of the man who gave him the click twice.  Lance seems to be quite unfulfilled.  If he was so happy he would has wished Sugar the best and got on with his life.

My sister is going through something similar at her school with the lead teacher that she is to assist. She is already frustrated and school officially starts tomorrow.  I will keep you in my prayers.



Author's Response:

You made a great observation, Aiwen! It does seem like Lance is very interested in what's going on in Sugar's neck of the woods even though he supposedly got everything he wanted from the divorce. A young beautiful wife, a son, his career is still successful, and worldly possessions. Yet for some reason, he has to squeeze his way back to Sugar's life somehow. What he didn't expect was that a mystery man hung up on him twice. Lance is no doubt pissed about that because he still thinks that Sugar is his, in a way. But he's sadly mistaken because there's a new sheriff in town, LOL!

On a personal note, I am so sorry for your sister. People think that working at schools (public, private, daycare) are drama-free, but it's not. It's absolutely stressful. Adults working with children can be so petty and childish. A lot of the times, the children behave better than the adults. Tell your sister to take it one day at a time. God doesn't put obstacles in our way without reason. :)

Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 04:49 pm

Title: Hot Soup

Isn't that like a MOFO! calling to wish you a happy birthday like y'all still friends😤 I'll be like... It is now that your @ss  is gone😆 Chef is the man!! 😍 I bet b@tch boy was shocked😲 when he heard Chef's voice over the phone. Acting like he has the right to know who's in her life😕 I can't wait until those two meet face to face😆 Ms James it sounds to me like ole girl is jealous of you. Watch your back and pull out your phone an record her @ss every times she wants to act a fool😠 have yourself covered. Nice update😆



Author's Response:

Where's the lie?

you know you right gurl

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 04:06 pm

Title: Hot Soup

Not surprised Lance rolled back around just like the bad penny he is...Chef was sexy putting Lance in his place...wished Sugar would open herself to something more than physical intimacy but I think Chef wants more and will use her conditions to wear her down...good story...watch yourself around the snakes...walk in your integrity and all will be well...



Author's Response:

Chef definitely wants more than physical intimacy, but he's gonna play and bend Sugar's rules to get her exactly where he wants her: by his side. But while he does it, there is nothing wrong with having some physical fun along the way, especially if it shows Sugar the errors in her ways. And you are absolutelyright about keeping my integrity!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 02:55 pm

Title: Sweet Jasmine

I really like Chef. There needs to be more men like him. A gentleman under all circumstances, a man that can sweep you off your feet with simple conversations and have you ready to rip your own clothes off. LOl. I know it won't be an uncommitted relationship long, it only took him less than 24 hours to get there. Haha. 



Author's Response:

LOL, Sugar is stubborn. She thinks that by laying down her rules that she has everything under control, but Chef is smart, calculating, and utterly determined to bend to bend her boundaries, so he can get closer to her.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 02:25 pm

Title: Salty Reunion

LOl. I really like Chef, he is just what mama order. A charming hard-working Southern gentleman. What more could a lady want. Just say yes and see what happens. What's the worst thing that could happen? You enjoy yourself too much. 



Author's Response:

The worst thing that could happen for Sugar is the best thing for her.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 02:03 pm

Title: Sour Sisters

That is interesting. I don't think there is anything wrong with being recluse sometimes. I just think you have to remember that life is still moving and you have to actually live a little at times. I don't think it was cool of Roc to start putting her business out like that though, it was definitely not the time nor the place for that conversation. More like a private spa day or an in the house type of chat. I like that Chef caught her off guard, throw her off her game. She needs it. Not every man is Lance. 



Author's Response:

Rochelle was wrong for saying what she said in a public place, but Odette luckily put Roc in her place. As for Chef, he's always big on surprises. It'll be explained later as to why he likes surprising her so much.

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 01:35 pm

Title: Bitter Treasure

I wonder why whoever did that to him? What did he do to deserve that? Just being hot headed? I like this feeling she is getting too! I think she should play the piano sometimes during operational hours. I think the staff and customers will get a real kick out of it and it will allow her to get away from just being an owner all the time and enjoy the fruits of her constant labor. 



Author's Response:

Keep reading to find out why he got tossed out of the car! :) As for the idea about Sugar playing the piano, well ahead of you. ;)

Reviewer: KeiKei Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 12:43 pm

Title: Hot Soup

Chef seems to be patient enough the chip away Sugars bad memories.

Author's Response:

Chef is very patient is exactly what Sugar needs, but his impatience is good for her too. It lets her know that he wants her badly.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 12:07 pm

Title: Hot Soup

You don't know how mug I've anticipated this update. Damn girl if you didn't leave a clit hanger. I absolutely love the way he wants to love her, albeit the other side of me is battling with the idea that she's sick, but shit. Kitty cats should play, all day. What manner of man did you dream up? He is giving me girlish fantasies. Loving your work.

 

Ps snakes need to be stomped on, hard. Don't let vipers try to come for you. 

 

 



Author's Response:

I'm keeping my grass cut low, so I can watch out for the snakes. As for the story, kittycats shouldn't be exempt from playtime. Chef is my dream older guy. Mature, sexy, and confident. It is so much fun writing him, LOL. Thank you so much for your support!

Reviewer: HumorMe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 10:20 am

Title: Hot Soup

LOL!  I'm loving the way Chef handled Lance!  Brilliant! =0)



Author's Response:

It was a fun scene to write, but their face-to-face meet-up will be hilarious! LOL

Reviewer: Musicluva Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 07:59 am

Title: Hot Soup

I hope everything gets better at your job! Some people are so manipulative it's disgusting. Keeping you in my prayers that things will work out. Don't let her ruin your days. But off of her, great chapter! Loved it! Chef is throwing caution to the wind and laying out all the cards! Next chapter will be on fire and I'll have a glass of ice water on deck! 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your well wishes. I am just going to close my door and teach. As for Chef, he don't give a damn and do keep that glass of ice water on deck!

Reviewer: MiaIsabella1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 06:19 am

Title: Hot Soup

I am really enjoying this story, as I do all your stories!  Poor Sugar has really been through it, and when someone betrays your trust it's hard to let go and trust again.  Thank goodness for Chef; I like it that he is a real man that knows what he wants and will not give up until he gets it!

Love the way he handled Lance...he totally deserved that treatment lol. 

Will say a prayer for you about your school situation; there are always those that wanna try your faith and act the fool.  Chick really needs to get a life...smh.



Author's Response:

I had a good laugh when I wrote the phone conversation between Chef and Lance.

Thank you for keeping me in your thoughts!

Reviewer: Amiefuzzy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 05:25 am

Title: Hot Soup

I love and hate the slow build. I love your writing, but I hate not having the entire story now. Great work.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your support. As an avid reader, I completely understand the frustration about not having the entire story in front of you. It's always a mixed bag of blessings because the stories are free, but it takes a while for an author to update and complete the story. I'll try to update as best as I can.

Reviewer: intheroar Signed [Report This]
Date: July 30 2017 04:40 am

Title: Salty Reunion

Why can't I find a guy like Chef? He will keep you on your toes. My favorite kind. Loving this story. Can't wait to see how this will enfold.



Author's Response:

He is a handful, LOL!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 11:36 pm

Title: Bittersweet

I like the story line. It's mature and realistic. I think sugar doesn't really realize what she's agreed to. Men as determined as chef will always cross the line. Let's wait and see:)

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! More to come!

Reviewer: freader Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 12:38 pm

Title: Sweet Jasmine

Monogamous no strings attached agreement seems like the beginning of a relationship.

Author's Response:

Basically, but Sugar doesnt think that! LOL

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 09:01 am

Title: Sweet Jasmine

MJ you are doing your thing with this story!! I absolutely love the dynamic between Sugar and Chef, especially after this chapter. I loved the question game. The raw emotions talking about the loss of children is one that the readers can feel. Chef laid everything out on the table for Sugar to know and "see" his scars and that he wants to be the man in her life that her husband wasn't and couldn't be. Sugar, I know she's cautious and wants to break out of the shell and experience life. Kind of like the book "Leo the Late Bloomer." Chef is just the person to do that. It helps that her mom and dad already love and trust him. I like Gizzard and her mom's dynamic. That's what true friendship is about. Excellent work!

I completely understand about the co-worker you are forced to work with you, but you have aboslutely NO desire to. Just remember the kiddos are who you are there for. Last year was a trying year for my supervisor and I. This year should be slightly better. 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! The questions game was a lot of fun to write because it really brought out their personalities and allowed them to see a glimpse of each other. I actually cried a little when I wrote the scene about Sugar's miscarriages and Chef understanding because he thought his daughter, even comtemplated suicide himself. Sugar is just very cautious because she devoted 18 years to a man and it was all for nothing. She suffered and lossed during that time. She doesn't want to dive back into a serious relationship. She wants to find herself through having fun. Though Chef has some odds in his favor. Her parents approve of him, which is a bonus. I enjoyed writing Georgette and Gizzard's friendship. I like building side character relationships. 

As for work, I've been going to my classroom before school starts to get it ready and that chick tried me this week and thought she would come out on top. Ha! I am so disgusted with her. I am going to close my door and teach. That is the only way my school year will get better. 

Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 04:39 am

Title: Sweet Jasmine

Ooooooohhhhh we wee!

There is nothing like a man who stakes his claim on a woman and make her feel like the Queen that she deserves to be.

Oooooh I can't wait to see when she finally realizes that he is her King!

 



Author's Response:

Sugar is stubborn, so it might take her a while, but when it hits her, it will hit her hard. 

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 28 2017 02:50 am

Title: Sweet Jasmine

"How do I feel?"

"Like a goddamn blessing," he admitted huskily.

"Then just show me a peek of what you've got. I'm a low-maintenance man, honey," he said. "I don't ask for much. I can survive off whatever crumbs you throw at me."

"No one has ever put your needs before their own like they should, but if you let me in, Sugar, I'll always put you first. I'll give and you'll take until your heart's content."

"There will be no other man in your life except me. Do you understand?"


Panty drop. LMAO.



Author's Response:

LMAO!!!! Chef knows how to lay down some words. 

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 27 2017 04:27 am



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