I love the story and the update. You have done a wonderful job of weaving this take. The characters' interactions and growth throughout the story are evident. I cannot wait to see what else you have in store for us. Keep up the great work. Props to your mentors for helping you express your thoughts and ideas.
You are an amazing mentor! <3Reviewer: Mavs0515 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2018 05:32 pm
I do a happy dance with each update! Waiting eagerly for the final/published version. Hopefully you publish on iBooks or Smashwords. If you do a paperback version, I might need to get a copy of that too.
Thank you so much! That means so much to me that you think I should publish this. I am really considering this.Reviewer: lgsl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 28 2018 03:48 am
So, something happened when Sugar was younger and it has something to do with Uncle Rusty. Whatever happened was devastating and Sully was there. That's probably why he's so intense and Sugar's self-esteem problems. Come with it! READY for the next chapter, I can feel the excitement.
These next few updates will be jam-packed.Reviewer: maine956 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2018 03:31 am
Something about the sitting on the lap of Rusty is not sitting right with me. I hope it means nothing, but personal experience with family and their secrets and still being allowed around family makes me uneasy. I hope I’m far off track. Either way. I love this story and I’m rooting for Shug and Miles.
All to be revealed in due time. Keep watching the hints.Reviewer: Eclectic Charms Signed [Report This]
Date: June 28 2018 02:33 am
I think it went well. Why would Sugar be worried about Miles getting along with her father when they knew Miles even before she did and they hit it off. Its all good!
Wonder what the secret is with Calvin and his brother. Is it money or a girl? Georgette possibly? Cant wait!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This] That is why Rochelle and Katrina teased her about spying on Miles because he was Cal's friend before she even knew him. Sugar was worried because it's the first time she has ever brought a man that wasn't Lance to a family event. So, she was nervous regardless. LOL
That is why Rochelle and Katrina teased her about spying on Miles because he was Cal's friend before she even knew him. Sugar was worried because it's the first time she has ever brought a man that wasn't Lance to a family event. So, she was nervous regardless. LOL
Date: June 28 2018 01:00 am
Why do I get the feeling that Rusty’s appearance is connected to Sully and Sugar???
All will be revealed soon!Reviewer: Chapter 22 - Bittersweet Past Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 27 2018 08:12 pm
I need a miles in real life. This book is becoming a favorite.
I am so happy that you are enjoying the book (and Miles)!Reviewer: ShortybyNature Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 27 2018 08:09 pm
Thank you for slowly undoing Sugar's layers. Looking forward to the journey as they get back... As always, I love Miles and her together. 🙏🏽
Thank you so much for coming on this journey! They are increasingly becoming one of my favorite couples I've ever written. I am glad that you are enjoying them as much as I do.Reviewer: Poppy Velour Signed [Report This]
Date: June 27 2018 06:20 pm
I love this book...families often don’t see or understand the damage done unintentionally by a failure to allow one of their own to just be who they are...Miles does this for Sugar even what her family doesn’t...
These next few chapters will explore why Sugar is the way that she is and it definitely involves her family. Lance definitely contributed, but there is a lot more to the story. I hope you stay tuned.Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: June 26 2018 12:49 am
Yep, this is totally how Miles rolls...lol! I'd be disappointed with anything else!
Sugar....yikes. Yes, therapy is at hand. Why is she suffering with these types of feelings and her sibling do not? What's the difference here?
Loved the chapter!
Those are very good question and there will be some hints in the next few updates. Everything will be answered in due time.Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: June 25 2018 03:12 am
Sugar needs to stop worrying about the "what ifs". All this unnecessary stress that she is putting on herself will not be good for her baby.
Miles is gonna make her pipe down.
Papa Bear don't play, LOL.Reviewer: Aiwen Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 25 2018 02:14 am
OMG! This was so exciting. i'm glad Sugar is recognizing she's broken and maybe she will get the help she needs. Miles is a real man (I love him) to know that the woman he loves need his strength. You rock!!
Aw, thank you so much! I hope you like the next update where she finally introduces Miles has her man to her family.Reviewer: maine956 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 24 2018 11:43 pm