Damn! Admrial Marcus is going to get his. He better pray Khan kills him quickly. I hope Nyota will be safe with Spock until the war ends, but I know Carol is still around planning her demise.
I can't wait to read the next chapter!Reviewer: sheyahne Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2018 04:06 am
I am going to sound like a broken record but i completely love this story and the intrigue and background noise going on besides their denial that they are falling in love with each other. You have all your pieces in perfect position. Outstanding!Reviewer: TheMaelstrom Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 05:39 pm
Khan and Nyota are so mesmerizing. I can picture them. I am so into this story. Carol is so jealous and dangerous. Please do not let her hurt Nyota.... I don't want these two separated.... this is amazingly writtenReviewer: TheMaelstrom Signed [Report This]
Date: January 10 2018 04:28 pm
Oh my how I love this story you went way back with the Andorians! Lol. I love how Nyota is feeling hurt that Khan will not show that he at least likes her outside the bedroom. She wants more from him and he is still resisting somewhat. love all the drama and suspense surrounding them, trying to pull them apart....UPDATE!Reviewer: Water Signed [Report This]
Date: January 05 2018 03:04 pm
They are both fighting their feelings for each other. Khan doesn't want to appear soft or weak and she swore she didn't like him. She was upset when she thought he had been hurt. Really good, romantic story. Love all the deception going on in the background too.Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2018 02:40 pm
This is such a good story! Normally I will avoid reading stories on my favorite shows, but the way you have written story, I can actually see Khan being sprung by Nyota, and vice versa.
Can't wait till Carol gets hers, hopefully via Uhura. Knowing Carol, she will drink the drug Khan brought back, not realizing the potion has to match you body chemistry.
I fist read part of the last chapter and knew I had to start at the beginning of your story, because that little bit had me hooked. Please continue!Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2017 05:09 am