I love this story. It is so different from other stories in which the guy always wants his "mate" to have him "hate" her on sight for something she can't even control gives the story some meat and bones. It won't and shouldn't be an easy process to get together it makes for a boring story. Anyways I say all that to say wheres my next chapter crimsonblaze ;-) ?
Author's Response:
It’s on the way! 😄 thanks for reading
Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: June 01 2018 04:48 pm
Every story needs some drama. Their wouldn't be a story if there is none. But its so unfortunate that the main male character always has to be a as-whole , especially in the beginning. Doing some things to the female main character that are unforgivable and still end up having the girl in the end. I get that Ethan may have been trough a lot. But his behavior towards an innocent woman, who didn't even ask for this is on acceptable. At this point I could really care less what he went trough that made him this way. He is not likeable. Nor do I think that anything will make me like him either as the story progress. Shawn I like. And I hope that he and Mia's friendship will turn in to love further down the line.
Author's Response:
I totally agree but stick around and we'll see if Mia is so forgiving! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]Date: March 11 2018 04:30 pm
Good start
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed [Report This]Date: March 03 2018 03:37 pm
Yeah! Just found a new story.
Author's Response:
Woohoo!! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: 1nadali Signed [Report This]Date: February 03 2018 09:20 pm
Excellent start! I can tell this is going to be good!!😊👏
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes i think this is going to be an interesting ride.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: January 27 2018 04:11 pm
Me likey!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: January 22 2018 11:10 pm