It's more personal for me in first person.i feel a better connection with the characters. I like this so far. Is different. I won't bug you with requesting updates, but know that I look forward to your next chapters.

Mia is damn near fighting for her life😢 an this dog 🐕 in heat is out trying to get his weenie wet😠 He needs a spell put on his weenie😆 that every time he sees his mate it gets hard as a brick an the only relief is her hand, mouth or Va-jj😆 👏👏👏👏 Let her take a bite out of his ego😆

I’m ok with first person for now.  Keep going.

And hope you make Ethan pay for the shit he just put Mia through....make him and his wolf grovel.  Hell I think Beth needs to do some as well

I'm not feeling Ethan😡 I👀 really hope Shawn is her mate😀 Nice update😀

Author's Response:

thanks for reading! I agree on both points!

Your first person narrative is just fine. Very moving.

I think you dragged this chapter out  bit too long. I can't believe Ethan let her go through this alone! The fact that he changed her negates his blabla bullsh*t about not wanting to deal with humans. He's such a lowlife. How'd he ever get to be Alpha? Please don't tell me she will then be bound in any way to this fool's pack!

I think writing this chapter in mia's pov was a good choice. And she has so much right to be mad at Beth! Such a dangerous place to be in and all without no warning? Tsk,tsk. 

And as for Ethan, I can tell it will be chapters upon chapters until he'll be forgiven...if ever...maybe she'll end up with Shawn? 

While I'm willing to give Beth a pass on events PRIOR to Ethan losing his damn mind, the way she handled Mia AFTER, NOPE, she's making decisions what she tells Mia without any regard to what Mia might want. It seems to me it's more about Beth than about Mia. Beth being uncomfortable with how Mia will react. Mia seems to be a strong person, yet Beth seems to want to treat her as if she's this fragile dove. At some point, after this change is done, Mia needs to have a talk with Miss Beth.

Now for that so called alpha, I hope that once Mia goes through the change that she becomes a force to be reckoned with. I hope that she rips Ethan a new one, in more ways than one. This woman is going thru hell because he can't control his behind and then runs away like the coward that he is. And he can miss me with the growling because Shawn might be taking care of what is his responsibility.  Shawn is there and helping Mia as best that he can. He's more of a mate to Mia than Ethan is at this point.

Ethan has me heated. hee

Thank you for the good update. It just makes me want the next one even sooner. No pressure. :)

Your 1st person pov is fine. Ethan is a worthless alpha.  Hope he gets rejected ultimately...

Also I don' think it' a big deal that Beth didn' tell Mia about being a werewolf. Nothing was supposed to happen and how was she supposed to know that she was her brother's mate?there was no need to tell her about it til then

Maybe I'm a meanie...or just realistic but please do not let her do the I'm a human and a wimp thing and forgive her so called "friend" for putting her in that position. A real friend would not have done that. So far all I can see is one female who thought she was "superior" to her human "friend" and did everything she did all in the name of "she knew better". I'm liking the storyline, but there are times when the werewolf/human story lines get redundant and we get tired of werewolf=smart/superior; human=dumb/inferior/need a keeper to run their life. I'll keep reading as I hope this story is different and it shows a heroine that does not take crap from anyone; human or werewolf or vampire (as Ian seems to just go along with what his wife is doing with no opinion of his own). What Beth did was wrong and I'm feeling as if she had an ulterior motive; she did what she did for her brother and her people with no consideration for her so called "friend" and employer.

Gotta dsay high five to Shawn way to be a friend and I don’t blame home girl if she has a steamy wolf moment or two with him , Ethan Ethan Ethan smh your an alpha you pack begged you to stay after you changed someone and you still bounced he deserves everything hoop he’s gonna have to jump threw. Can’t wait for your next update