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Title: Pack House

And Ethan continues the idiocy...



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Just stick with me. things will turn around soon! thanks for reading.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 11 2018 06:45 pm

Title: Fresh Air

Every story needs some drama. Their wouldn't be a story if there is none. But its so unfortunate that the main male character always has to be a as-whole , especially in the beginning. Doing some things to the female main character that are unforgivable and still end up having the girl in the end. I get that Ethan may have been trough a lot. But his behavior towards an innocent woman, who didn't even ask for this  is on acceptable. At this point I could really care less what he went trough that made him this way. He is not likeable. Nor do I think that anything will make me like him either as the story progress. Shawn I like. And I hope that he and Mia's friendship will turn in to love further down the line. 



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I totally agree but stick around and we'll see if Mia is so forgiving! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: March 11 2018 04:30 pm

Title: The Next Day

Ethan has no excuse for treating her that way. I understand that he was violated but still be is wrong. Living Shawn right now. 



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Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 03 2018 09:20 pm

Title: Fresh Air

Good start



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Thanks!

Reviewer: Michmom2 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2018 03:37 pm

Title: The Next Day

I'm glad his parents showed how disappointed they are  Shawn did hold back his opinion.



Author's Response:

Yeah Shawn has a lot more opinions where those came from. LOL thanks for reading.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 02 2018 04:26 am

Title: New Reality

I don't like Ethan or Beth! Running away solves nothing.



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yeah they have some issues! thanks for reading.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 02 2018 04:11 am

Title: The Next Day

Nice update😀

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Thanks

Reviewer: Blessed Soul Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 01 2018 06:25 pm

Title: The Next Day

Really? Come on, Ethan!



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LOL thanks for reading!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 28 2018 02:18 am

Title: The Next Day

Shawn😍 Ethan😈 Beth😕



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LOL that sums it up quite nicely.

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2018 06:41 am

Title: The Next Day

Loooved the update.  I hope our couple has a nice slow burn to love. 



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Thanks!

Reviewer: brown_mocha Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2018 04:18 am

Title: The Next Day

Poor Mia, she was bitten by a loser.  I think she should leave and continue on with her life...if Ethan wants her, he will come for her.  Hope she toughens up.



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Thanks for reading! 

Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2018 01:12 am

Title: The Next Day

So Ethan has some past emotional baggage. I wonder who traumatized him.

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Yeah he is holding on to some things! thanks for reading.

Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2018 12:42 am

Title: The Next Day

Nope. Not even if he was raped gives him the right or the excuse to treat Mia like that. I hope she tears him a new one and mates with his best friend. He literally ruined her like by biting then rejecting her.wtf!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Ethan has a lot of baggage to deal with. 

Reviewer: bookbutterfly Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2018 10:19 pm

Title: The Next Day

Violated how?  Did they capture him in wolf form and to experiments?



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All will be revealed in due time. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2018 10:19 pm

Title: The Next Day

I’d never read a Supernatual love story, so I did not know what to expect. I’m enjoying this story. I love the way you are setting up the story and providing depth to the characters. You are an excellent writer. Although I know it’s not in the cards I am team a Shawn right now.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. I think everyone is team Shawn at this point. Ethan is gonna have a hard time winning over everyone. 

Reviewer: anouk Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2018 09:59 pm

Title: The Next Day

Ethan is an idiot. Mia has nothing to do with anything that happened to him and now she's no longer human, which ought to make him happy.  This story is good but needs editing. 



Author's Response:

Eek! Let me go back through and read the chapters again! It’s so hard to catch my own mistakes! Thanks for reading!! 

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2018 09:58 pm

Title: The Next Day

Wahhhh she's going through the process alone (well I mean without her mate) which is just making everything 10x harder for her. I'm such a shawn fan right now. As in I love how supportive he is of her and he stepped up when his best friend wouldn't. I hope their friendship or sibling looking bond grows tenfold and makes Ethan crazy 😊 she is so strong i can't believe that her family is dead and fiancé. Of course she'd be having dark days! If she didn't, I'd be so worried hahaha now to add on to all her troubles, she's becoming a werewolf and has to cope with the changes. Ahhhh I love her!

ethan Ethan Ethan. See I feel a bit sorry for you knowing that humans hurt you someway. And I understand why you'd be so against them buttttttt if only you gave it a moment to actually feel or listen to her pain she's going through... he can make it more soothing for her and yet he needs to fight his own demons. I was actually eager to see how her react when he smelt her on Shawn! Hahahaha suckaaa! 

Obviously I'm obsessing over this book! So please know I'm eagerly waiting on the sideline and rereading chapters hahahahah loved it! Thanks for you update :) 


Author's Response:

thanks so much for reading!! Shawn is going to be around for a long long while. he really is the best.

Reviewer: Gordana Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2018 12:19 pm

Title: The Next Day

I'm glad that Mia talked to Beth in a reasonable and calmed manner. It just made what she said that much more devastating. Beth needs to internalize what Mia said in a real way. I'm not seeing it yet. Hopefully, Beth will be able to put herself in Mia's place and see how she would feel. That's something that it's not clear to me that she's done yet.

Ethan, still an ass. Will continue to be one in the forseeable future. I'm looking forward to his first interaction with Mia.

How is he even surprised at the response from his family. I'm with his father, he is not ready to be alpha.

I still want to hit him in the throat, after I've cut off his naughty bits. :)

Loving this story.



Author's Response:

LOL not cut off his naughty bits!! thanks for reading.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2018 05:47 am

Title: The Next Day

I think that maybe he should be called out on his bullshit and Mia should hurt his ass like he did her. And I  think they should find out he was spending time with Jenny. He hurt her because of some mess he allowed to happen to himself. He really doesn't deserve Mia right now. Hell if anybody deserves her it's Shawn.



Author's Response:

Right! I agree I love Shawn so much! thanks for reading.

Reviewer: SnowFever Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 26 2018 05:05 am

Title: The Change

WOW! Its all pretty much been said, but I'll add my two pennies anyway....

Ethan has suffered a horrific ordeal at the hands of humans, he said. Then he goes and does something horrific himself. I see two reasons for this. One; he obviously hasn't dealt with what happened to him, and he desperately needs to! And two; he gives his wolf free reign, and that clearly isn't a good idea, overall. Dealing with what happened would help him and maybe he'd display some basic compassion! And if he'd had more control of his wolf, he might have been able to prevent this. His wolf just lunged for her when he recognized his mate without any restraint from Ethan. Total lack of control from Ethan and that should NEVER happen. For a so-called alpha, thats totally unacceptable! A leader has to show at least a measure of control in all situations, if possible. At least in the serious ones, like this was.

Also, while Jenny may have been giving him the only advice a decent person would, she loses major points for going ahead and screwing him anyway! Its like yeah, you did an awful thingm but sure, im down for some nookie. I'm only human after all. Really? WTF?! Not sure yet if I'd want her as a friend in a pinch!

And Mia...poor thing! Shawn is her friend and ally. She's going to need that. Someone willing to tell her the truth, no matter what. Beth can either keep her growls to herself, or direct them at that fool of a brother where it belong!

Punish them HARD Mia! Then move on because life is different now!

Excellent update!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! Yeah Jenny has her faults i guess she cant be perfect. Yes Ethan has a lot going on and he could probably benefit from a therapists couch!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 20 2018 02:33 am

Title: The Change

Mia is damn near fighting for her life😢 an this dog 🐕 in heat is out trying to get his weenie wet😠 He needs a spell put on his weenie😆 that every time he sees his mate it gets hard as a brick an the only relief is her hand, mouth or Va-jj😆 👏👏👏👏 Let her take a bite out of his ego😆



Author's Response:

LOLLLL!! I like the way you think!

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2018 06:29 pm

Title: New Reality

Damn!😢 that poor woman😢😠😤



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Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Tre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2018 06:18 pm

Title: The Change

Love this story arc. Please update real soon! Mia is a character that makes you feel for her and although this is a hard change for her she should put her Alpha mate in the dog house so to speak. Shouldn’t he not be able to get it up with anyone other than his mate?



Author's Response:

thanks for reading! He probably shouldnt be able to but I am trying to do things a little different than whats considered traditional when you consider the mate relationship.

Reviewer: Charly43 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 17 2018 08:31 pm

Title: The Change

I’m ok with first person for now.  Keep going.

And hope you make Ethan pay for the shit he just put Mia through....make him and his wolf grovel.  Hell I think Beth needs to do some as well



Author's Response:

Ethan is gonna have a lot to do dont worry!

Reviewer: lgsl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 16 2018 08:10 pm

Title: The Change

I don't like Ethan. What an insensitive jerk!!



Author's Response:

Agreed. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 16 2018 02:25 am



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