Title: Chapter 14 Some Dreams do come True

I loved it!😆



Author's Response:

Glad that you liked it Tre.  Thnx again for reading and reviewing.  🙂

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Date: October 05 2018 04:10 pm

Title: Chapter 13 Peace

👍



Author's Response:

Thnx.

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Date: October 05 2018 04:09 pm

Title: Chapter 12 The Truth Revealed

No😲 I didn't see that coming. But he did seem a little off😕



Author's Response:

Tre glad that it caught you by surprised.  I did say that not all things were as they seemed.  Thnx for the review.

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Date: October 05 2018 04:08 pm

Title: Chapter 11 At the Crossroads

A fresh start😆



Author's Response:

Sometimes we all need to do a reboot.

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Date: October 05 2018 04:06 pm

Title: Chapter 14 Some Dreams do come True

Thank you for the update. I must admit...you did good Smolley. You wrote this story well, although I predicted most of it, I liked your style. Johnny boy and Evangeline may work my last nerve (maybe because they remind of a real life couple, that I know), but I think the true greatness of a writer is shown when they can evoke their readers feelings and/or emotions. I think you guessed, exactly how I felt about them. LOL. I am a 'forward ever, backward never', type of person: I don't believe I have to take someone back, to prove that I have forgiven them. However, that's the storyline, and I had to go with it. LOL. 

I will never truly be a John and Evangeline fan (their chemistry is...well virtually nonexistent. That's just my observation) however, you have made me read their story and sort of enjoy it...trust me that's not an easy feat. LOL.

 

Have a blessed day. Take Care.

 

 



Author's Response:

Well Sarah Anonymous thnx for toughing it through the story.  You are a real trooper.  That you finished reading it not liking the characters shows true fortitude.  Your comments are always welcome and I do listen to my readers.  Although I can't change my story based upon readers comments I do listen nonetheless.  As a writer it shows growth to venture out on new directions so who knows what may come out of this fertile imagination of mine.  Only time will tell.  Thnx again for reading my stories and commenting.  Until the next time I remain, Smolley, at your service.

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Date: October 04 2018 10:24 pm

Title: Chapter 12 The Truth Revealed

Thank you for the update. Aha. Wow! That was no surprise. LOL. I called it from the time he was interested in Evangeline. He was either going to be rejected (which he was) or he was going to make John look good- slice bread to be exact (which he did). I knew he didn't stand a chance, whether he was a good guy or not. LOL.

Agent Baxter...where do I begin. I do feel some sympathy for you. You should have just left her alone. I guess you just had to go.

To answer your previous question John...yes she will take you back (that's what you call a surety).

This chapter made my day! I haven't laughed this much in quite a while. Thank you. 

Have a blessed and great day.



Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous, well I don't know what to say.  😉  Glad that the chapter gave you a good laugh.  Well let's see how things progress from this point on, do stay tuned.  


Just so you know, check out THe JOVAN Saga story the chapter titled "Face in the Crowd".  You just might like that one.

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Date: October 02 2018 09:39 pm

Title: Chapter 10 Friendly Discussions

Those girls nights be EPIC! 😆



Author's Response:

Good to see that Evangeline found a way to go out and have fun.  Everyone needs that release.  

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Date: October 02 2018 12:39 pm

Title: Chapter 9 This Was a Mistake

Justin wasn't going to give up his meal ticket😂😂😂😂



Author's Response:

Well at least Justin was truthful, ha, ha.  Thnx for commenting.

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Date: October 02 2018 12:36 pm

Title: Chapter 8 All For Evangeline

Friend... How many of us have them😆 Friends... Ones  we can depend on... Friends 😆 I do! I do!  I👀 love that song and this chapter 😆



Author's Response:

Tre thnx again for the review.  Yes how great it is to have friends.  

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Date: October 02 2018 12:34 pm

Title: Chapter 7 I'm Not Ready

I'm digging  this story😆



Author's Response:

More to come so stay tuned.

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Date: September 27 2018 01:25 am

Title: Chapter 7 I'm Not Ready

Thank you for the update. Where do I start? Evangeline, Evangeline, Evangeline. Why won't you at least pretend to move on with your life. You do know that you can go out with him and nothing happens. You might even make a new friend. Why are  you even bothered by John's feelings of being hurt? He sure didn't care when he was walking all over yours. "I'm not ready", code for...as long as John's in the picture, I'll never want someone else. Hey the Tin man wished for a heart...why shouldn't you wish for John.

Agent Baxter the truth is you never stood a chance...she's used to douchbags...sad but, true. She filled  a need for him and whether  she wants to admits it or not he did the same for her. Like most women, Evangeline has a type. If you asked, they'll deny, but most times actions speak loud and clear. They can never explain it to you and in most cases, neither can they explain it to themselves. Count your blessings...you just dodged a bullet, believe me, you did not want to get caught in that storm.

I had such...well to be honest not high, but still a bit of hope for Evangeline. Oh well.

Good story. Enjoy your week.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Don't know why this review posted twice but since it did I will respond twice.  Only 2 1/2 stars wow Sarah I get the message.  Disappointed I see but you read it and thnx for the review.  Don't know if it so much that Evangeline still wants John or she just doesn't want someone else making decisions for here.  I am sure someone has met a guy like Baxter and kicked him to the curb just like Evangeline did.  He had plans for them and she was not at that stage in her life for such.  Oh well the story goes on let's see what happens.  Fortunately or unfortunately we'll have to wait and read if Evangeline and John unite.  The story has not finished.

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Date: September 24 2018 06:08 am

Title: Chapter 7 I'm Not Ready

 

Thank you for the update. Where do I start? Evangeline, Evangeline, Evangeline. Why won't you at least pretend to move on with your life. You do know that you can go out with him and nothing happens. You might even make a new friend. Why are  you even bothered by John's feelings of being hurt? He sure didn't care when he was walking all over yours. "I'm not ready", code for...as long as John's in the picture, I'll never want someone else. Hey the Tin man wished for a heart...why shouldn't you wish for John.

Agent Baxter the truth is you never stood a chance...she's used to douchbags...sad but, true. She filled  a need for him and whether  she wants to admits it or not he did the same for her. Like most women, Evangeline has a type. If you asked, they'll deny, but most times actions speak loud and clear. They can never explain it to you and in most cases, neither can they explain it to themselves. Count your blessings...you just dodged a bullet, believe me, you did not want to get caught in that storm.

I had such...well to be honest not high, but still a bit of hope for Evangeline. Oh well.

Good story. Enjoy your week.

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous so you didn't like the boot given to Agent Baxter.  Well the story goes on.  Thnx for reading it and reviewing.  Have a blessed week.  Can you believe it is Monday again!

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 24 2018 06:04 am

Title: Chapter 5 New Possibilities

Thank you for the update. Antonio made my day with that 'treasure ' comment. Thank you for that laugh, Antonio. Agent Baxter...what can i say...I really had high expectations for/from you. However, I gather that you'll either be rejected, or somehow make John seem like the best thing since sliced bread. Although, I'm thinking you are having a laugh at John's expense, trying to get him to realise what he lost and to go after it.

Looking forward to seeing which of my theories are correct. LOL.

Have a blessed and wonderful day.



Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous have you been looking at my notes again?  You naughty girl.  No John is not the best thing since sliced bread but neither is he the scum of the earth.  Maybe Baxter is here to put a fire under John to get his act together, who knows.  OR maybe neither.  The road diverges will it ever meet again?  If you take the left lane what adventures lie before you?  If you take the right lane what dangers lie before you?  Then when the road converges are you the same or are you someone you used to know?  Read on the find out.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 20 2018 11:36 pm

Title: Chapter 4 Things Must Change

Well bring on the charm Baxter, show Evangeline what you working with 😂

 

So what does Baxter look like, is there an actor, model, singer,  someone you know or a stranger you saw on the street who he might resemble? Give me the deets 🤓



Author's Response:

Moonie Anonymous, no Baxter is a mixture of a lot of men who I have seen and/or heard on tv, movies, in real life.  Things are not always what they seem.  Stay tuned.

Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 20 2018 12:59 am

Title: Chapter 3 Sarah Takes Charge

I glad Evangeline is doing better, not to knock doctor's but I trust God's word over theirs and I'm glad I did... It kept my father alive when they tried to say otherwise.



Author's Response:

Moonie Anonymous thnx for sharing.  

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Date: September 18 2018 12:01 am

Title: Chapter 3 Sarah Takes Charge

I'm glad Evangeline is doing better



Author's Response:

Thnx Moonie Anonymous for the review.  Yes Evangeline needs to continue to improve so that she can have the life that she deserves.

Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 17 2018 11:55 pm

Title: Chapter 2 The Aftermath of the Studio Attack

Thank you for the update. This chapter packed quite a punch. Evangeline got attacked! I never knew the details of her attack, just that she was and eventually died from the injuries. Oh, please, please let Steven be the one.

I guess what irks me most with John and Evangeline stories, is the irony of it all...John who is supposedly the emotional cripple tries to move on with his life...emotionally. He at least dates Natalie, before his grand epiphany...He still loves Evangeline! Whilst Evangeline is stunted. She does breakup with him then may proceed to leave town, however she never really makes any conscious effort to try and move on emotionally. She never dates (she doesn't have to have a sexual relationship with the person) and usually comes off as if she's willing to wait for John, albeit subconsciously.

Maybe it's my interpretation of things, but sometimes it comes across as if John is the one who had the most growth during the breakup. 

I do enjoy your stories, you usually catch me with..'by Smolley.' LOL. Oh, I do know an Ivan... My sister's former cousin in law. LOL.

Have a great and blessed week.



Author's Response:

Sarah Anonymous once again your kind words humble me, "you usually catch me with 'by Smolley'".  Evangeline did have a date with Dr. Jamison, a relationship with Christian and the start of a relationship with Todd.  Realize that Llanview was definitely short on good men. I don't think that she waited around for John but she did still love him.  On the other hand John had a long way to go to arrive at any semblance of emotionally fit.  John wanted Evangeline back but she told him that until he learned how to say what he felt that they would stay 'broke up'.  Since he didn't learn how to express his feelings she left him alone.  You did say in another review that you believed that there is one person for one person.  Maybe John is the one person for Evangeline.  Who knows?  Let's continue to read and find out how this story shakes out.  You too have a blessed week.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 09:10 pm

Title: Chapter 2 The Aftermath of the Studio Attack

Well wwhat do we have here, looks like Johnny might have a rival 😜😝



Author's Response:

😜 Moonie Anonymous it looks so.  John needs to up his game or get out of the way.  Agent Baxter has dropped the gauntlet on this challenge.  He has given John notice that he plans to stake a claim on this gold.

Reviewer: Moonie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 08:21 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Talk With a Friend

Thank you for this new story. Ha. Ha. I was smiling as I read this story. Sarah is a hoot (she reminds me a little of someone)lol. I do disagree about the soul mate discussion. I believe there is always that one person, who you will love above all others, someone who no matter what, you were destined to be together. 

Having stopped watching OLTL on Tele around 2001, when i moved abroad. I did lose interest and knowledge with some of the characters. I was kept update - reluctantly - by my stepsister and via YouTube thereafter. What happens to Evangeline? I gather from your end notes, it's quite serious. That being the case...she should stay away from Christian's studio.

I'm guessing John comes to the rescue...bloody hell...who is he? Wonder boy?

I have to say...reluctantly... I am growing rather fond of your John and Evangeline stories. Keep it up.

Have a blessed and wonderful week. Keep safe.



Author's Response:

So you noticed Sarah A.? 😉  We will agree to disagree on the 'soul mate' part.  As to whether John comes to the rescue as I said to another reader of Chapter 1 you have to read the story to find out.  'Growing fond' of my stories is the highest compliment and I thank you for it.  Not all things are as they seem so read on and I hope enjoy reading and don't forget to comment.  Thnx always for your review, Sarah Anonymous.  By the way, do you know an Ivan?  Ha. Ha.

Reviewer: Sarah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: September 16 2018 12:06 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Talk With a Friend

I'm with Sarah about her not going to the studio but I guess you'll have her go anyway huh 😑😕



Author's Response:

🤐  Moonie Anonymous you have to read the story to find out.

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Date: September 15 2018 11:19 pm



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