Reviews For Mercy
Title: Character List

I love this story. I want baby and bobby to make up.

Reviewer: Tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 19 2010 07:07 am

Title: Plan 2 Fail

Oh wow!! An Update. Thanks so much. This chapter was AWESOME!! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: CapitalPeach Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 15 2010 08:07 pm

Title: Character List

very good update, can't wait for next chapter.

Reviewer: Chell Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 14 2010 08:10 pm

Title: Plan 2 Fail

I loved it! Update!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 14 2010 06:42 am

Title: Plan 2 Fail

this chapter was the truth! It was about time she told him about their daughter. I hope baby doesn't get caught.

Updat pronto!

Reviewer: thetruth Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2010 08:08 pm

Title: Plan 2 Fail

After such a long wait it was very good and worth the wait.  I hope they dont get caught.  Hurry up Karina

Reviewer: Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 13 2010 03:37 pm

Title: Hero State of Mind

Oh my goodness is this story going to be updated, because I am definitely hooked. I imagined a similar story line for Bobby after watching "Four Brothers". It's nice to see it on paper.

Author's Response: Yes Ma'am. I'll be updating. I'm really happy you like it.

Reviewer: CapitalPeach Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2010 01:15 am

Title: Character List

add mroe great start

Reviewer: tiffany Anonymous [Report This]
Date: November 29 2009 08:26 am

Title: Hero State of Mind

OMG how could you leave us hanging like that, that was not right.... I thought that Baby and Bobby were about to break some furniture.

I so hope  that Baby said Terrence's name on purpose as part of the plan her and Sophia cooked up.



Author's Response: She did it on purpose... she had to figure out a way to get him to stop and that was the idea the popped in her head. Not so smart idea. Thanks 4 commenting chica!

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 17 2009 01:30 am

Title: Hero State of Mind

More! Now! I can't believe you did that to me! Add now please! I'm going crazy here!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2009 05:37 am

Title: Hero State of Mind

that was so wrong!!! but so gooood!!!! more updates soon

Author's Response: I know I'm just mean. lol

Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: October 16 2009 04:40 am

Title: Hero State of Mind

You had me on the edge of my seat with this one. Please hurry up and add! Bobby is so sexy I'm burning up! Everything Baby's doing for him is so romantic. She's stronger then me because I would have let me do me right on that counter. Add soon.

Reviewer: TamiekaGirl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2009 03:21 am

Title: Hero State of Mind

Baby! Why did you do that! Uh! Let him! Let him!

This was another great chapter. The argument between them got a little heated but I was loving ever minute of it.

Add when you can.

Two thumbs up!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 16 2009 02:35 am

Title: Bitter Sweet Dreams

It a great story. I love this movie favorite character was Jack though. But I still like it it's great and I can't for more.

Reviewer: Teasia005 Signed [Report This]
Date: October 14 2009 11:36 pm

Title: Bitter Sweet Dreams

Glad to see this story back... OMG that was some 5 alarm lovin witn Baby and Bobby, WOW.

Btw not cool to leave us hanging like that... please hurry with more/



Author's Response:

What's with the 3 1/2 stars then?

Just messing. Thanks 4 the comment.

Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 09 2009 09:00 pm

Title: Bitter Sweet Dreams

The emotion behind that night had me in tears. You're a great writer. I like how you have the characters sometimes express things without having to say whats on their mind. Fabulous!

Reviewer: Tamieka Girl Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2009 06:14 pm

Title: Bitter Sweet Dreams

You had me sweating by the in of this chapter. I need a cold shower! You most certainly delivered. Add!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2009 07:34 am

Title: Bitter Sweet Dreams

This is soooo good!! I love this movie! I love the Bobby/Baby relationship! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Tammy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2009 07:21 am

Title: Bitter Sweet Dreams

This was the best chapter yet! It was pure fire. You've got me on the edge of my seat girl!



Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 09 2009 06:41 am

Title: Character List

I enjoyed the movie. Looking forward to reading the story, thanks!!

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2009 03:02 pm

Title: Inadequate Truths

more...more...more please i have missed this story

Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: September 19 2009 06:09 am

Title: Inadequate Truths

This chapter was the bambiggity...

1. It showed just how much Baby cared for the Mercers, Evelyn and Bobby--Terrance is on the outside looking in.

2. Though something still hangs in the wings 'cut off' by the visitor that interrupted Evelyn's speech, there's enough information in her videodiary to lay things out for Baby to follow her warnings.

3. It picks up right off from where you left things...long time ciming, but it was necessary really for us to see the connection that baby has to her past--even with the footnote of her 'abandonment issues'

This chapter was Baby's bow...she is the anchor now for the family, and the torch was officially passed.

I loved it! With Evelyn doling out careful instructions that she not trust the police and basically keep the truth away from Bobby, I only see Sofia as her ally. Now, does Sofia have a familia she can go to when her back is up?

Or, will Baby be forced to lay it all on Bobby's feet?

Right now, I think she wants to trust Tee, because of her nature to stand on the word of his disgust with poepoe corruption. But Sofia has a point in this that Tee has to either be suspicious of Fowler and keeping him close or he's up to his ears in this shit.

I have no clue where you will be taking this, but you are doing the damn thing. I'll be around to catch the update. I hope it won't be too long, but as a writer I know how you feel about wanting to post the best you have to offer.

With that said...great update!

Author's Response: Cider, I don't know where to even start. You're review was to good for words. I love that you gave real feedback. Girl, thank you so much. That means alot to me. I can tell that you really do like this story.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 06:12 pm

Title: Inadequate Truths

Okay! This is my shit! And my shit is back! Girlfriend I love this story. You have to come back and give us another add.



Author's Response:

You're mad funny. I'm glad you love it.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 05:53 pm

Title: Debts, Lies & Video Tape

Oh this was good. I'm so sure now that Terrance still has a long way to go to compete for her heart. Bobby is back, and his presence creates a whole lot of drama for all involved with him or related to him, with Karina/Baby as no exception.

I can't wait to see how Terrance shakes her down about 'all night' with Bobby.

But more than anything this video...what does it mean. I want to say Victor is related to this somehow, but with the way you are writing...it's hard to be sure.

Great!

Author's Response: Read on chica! Read on! lol! Bobby is definitely shaking things up a bit.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 05:27 pm

Title: Inadequate Truths

This is VERY interesting....more Updates, please!

Nyeesha



Author's Response: thanks chica.

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed [Report This]
Date: September 13 2009 04:27 am



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