loved the chapter!
add soon.!
Reviewer: tamieka Anonymous
[Report This]Date: September 13 2009 02:43 am
you reall know how to work a story out. i love where this is going. the movie was hot but this story is on fire girl! karina stood by her man as she should. terrance always seemed a little shady to me, even in the movie. we will see what you do with him. i hope he his the enemy so bobby can kill him. oh, and which part where you talking was boring. i must of missed that part because that chapter was the truth. can't wait for the next add with some bobby/baby interaction.
Author's Response:
Yay! It wasn't boring! That's loads off my shoulder.
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 13 2009 02:26 am
There was nothing wrong with it...take your time. I can hear them spatting at each other. Lovely. I miss this story. I really need to catch up! Thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks 4 the 5 stars chica. Let me know when u catchup.
[Report This]Date: September 13 2009 01:18 am
Loved this chapter. It was worth the wait. Now I want to know what's going on. What is Karina hiding from Bobby. Was she pregnant? Who really killed their mother. How she knew it was going to happen. So many questions that I hope can be answered soon. Looking for an update hopefully soon.
Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you think it was worth the wait. I wasnt' very sure about this chapter. I wrote it very quickly. Thank you so much!
[Report This]Date: April 28 2009 05:35 am
Hey what's witht he two an a half stars. this girl deserves ten stars?
Author's Response: That's so sweet. I know I've been keeping y'all waiting. Bare with me ladies. I have to update Heaven Can Wait, Then I'll get back to this one.
[Report This]Date: April 26 2009 09:18 am
This story is a beast and I love it and hope you update soon.
Author's Response: Really? Thanks
Date: April 25 2009 05:37 pm
This chapter was good, this story is still leaving me in suspense.
Author's Response: it's suppose 2 lol.
[Report This]Date: April 24 2009 09:40 pm
Wow! I don't know why you weren't sure about this chapter. It was great. I especially like the end when Baby had to figure out if she was was gonna like or not. This is one of my favorite stories.
Reviewer: Tamieka Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 24 2009 06:10 pm
So glad that you are back with this story!!! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: thanks
[Report This]Date: April 24 2009 03:12 pm
So glad to have this back, awesome part, can't wait to 'see' how Terrance takes his woman being with her ex all night. Also what is baby hiding, was she pregnant and lost the baby or some thing like?
Author's Response: Sorry I was away for so long. I'm sure it's gonna be really interesting to see how the the scene plays out with terrance. As for the secrete that Baby's hiding we'll have to see.
Date: April 24 2009 06:39 am
I'm completely in love with Bobby! He his so freaking hot! Hot! Hot! Add please! Please!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 24 2009 05:53 am
I'm happy to see this back and with force! This was an awesome chapter! I can't wait for Baby to watch that tape. Add soon!
Reviewer: kim Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 24 2009 05:52 am
glad for the update and as before it was great! i hope the updates come more often, i've missed this story.
Author's Response: Sorry 4 the hold up. I'm glad you liked it. Reviewer: vmck Signed [Report This]
Date: April 24 2009 05:41 am
cool
Author's Response: cool lol
Date: April 22 2009 05:59 pm
Great installment to the story. Interested in seeing how this trios plays out.
Reviewer: indycoolchick Anonymous [Report This]Date: April 20 2009 08:11 am
Really enjoying your story so far. This is a great movie and I like seeing Bobby showcased in his on story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: April 20 2009 07:50 am
Miss this and hope to read more soon
Author's Response: Sorry chica. I'll update asoon as I can.
Date: April 16 2009 04:44 am
There isn't much you have to do to get me to like...um...Detroit themed movies...a tight cast that includes BEY and Marky Mark!!! You could have spilled ink on the paper and I would have been shouting hot damn!
BTW...I love it...as a movie buff I strive to spin arcs myself and rewrite...that's the creative birdie in us. Reading right along... ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you. I hope to update this soon. Reviewer: SparkApCider Signed
[Report This]Date: March 26 2009 12:18 am
I really like this story, all the 4 brother fics I have found were either slash or all about Jack, it's good to read an Interracial Bobby fic (love Mark Wahlberg) hope you come back with more.
Author's Response: I feel you girl. I looked long and hard to find a good four brothers fic and couldn't do it. That's why I chose to write my own. I'm gonna try to start working on the next chapter. Sorry for the wait.
Date: March 24 2009 12:30 am
I liked this chapter, its going to be fun watching Baby try to deny her love for Bobby, she need to get out all that anger she was holding in for 3 yrs.
Now to find out whats in the will and who killed Evelyn.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 12 2009 11:50 pm
Ok, so my last review was kinda dry, but in my defense I was at work and was rushing through the story before my boss came back, and just as I was finishing the last chapter I noticed he was a few steps in front of me! So I just wanted to write something quickly and all that came out was "its good"!
What I meant was that its very entertaining and If this story line was in the movie I probably would have watched the entire thing, lol.
Author's Response: lol it wasn't dry it was just very funny because i really did sound like you wre in a hurry. Thank you 4 coming back and explaining. Reviewer: lol Anonymous
[Report This]Date: February 12 2009 01:31 pm
this movie was just on tv the other night. it's one of my favs but i like your version better. can't wait to read the rest. so, my answer to your question is NO don't dump it. continue please!!
Author's Response: Yeah it's one of my favorites but i'm glad you like mine better lol.
Date: February 12 2009 05:09 am
Hey it's ok if it's about Bobby and Baby. I'm loving the way they are with each other anyway. But I know you have to develop your plot. So I'm looking out for more of this story. I know there's going to be some real drama,
Author's Response: Yes ma'am, and I love bringing the drama! It's what I live for.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2009 01:05 am
its good.
Author's Response: lol thank you
Date: February 11 2009 11:53 pm
love this chapter it gave a lot of light on what happen please update soon
Author's Response: I'm glad you dug it! Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed
[Report This]Date: February 11 2009 10:12 pm