Hor Hot Hot I love both of these characters and I can soooooooo see this being a real storyline on the show!!!!!!!!Reviewer: Monique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/11/09 04:00 pm
more like the two of themReviewer: neeenee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/09 04:20 pm
I love it! I want more!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll do my best to deliever :)
Date: 05/01/09 08:18 am
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 05/01/09 07:35 am
Okay, this was awesome, yet made me sad at the same time. Because you took two medicore to bad shows, and showed me how they could be great again. *sighs* Damn you Black.
Loved the interplay between Mark and Naomi, now and then. How he walked away before, and wanted to right a wrong. Though I question if staying the first time would have been a wise choice, knowing the man he turned out to be. But I loved that their sexing was done in the now, when they were both so battle worn from their relationships. Maybe even needed each other more.
I love how you write Naomi, it makes me want to hug her and be her friend. And you had Mark's arrogance down, and that coupled with those hints of vunerablity he shows. Makes you completely understand why she would go there. Who the hell wouldn't?
Awesome fic Black. Loved that you brought back this couple. Hell, I love your PP fics period. :)
Thanks Token. Yeah, both shows have been stinking it up big time. I'm glad you liked their interaction, that was fun to play with. Naomi is one of my favorite people to write :)
Thanks again!Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/09 09:46 pm
I loved it...the traveling back and forth between time periods so similar and familiar it is easy to blend them together only this time the man stayed and took what he left behind before!! Yeah...
It was kinda sweet and nice but ended hot and passionate..I wish there was more...loved it sweetie..excellent job as usual!!
Author's Response: Thanks nenburge! I'm so happy you enjoyed it :) Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/09 08:40 pm
Damn! That was so HOT and SEXY! I'm glad he walked away from her the first time, becuase he was not ready at all, but he is now. I could feel the regret when he talked about the party and his need to know if it could have been him she loved.
Author's Response: Thanks Sweet Pea! I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 04/30/09 05:54 pm
Dam you have to do another dabbler btween these two. The sex was hot hot hot hot supper hot. I love the talked btween these two and how he never stop liking her. love it girl. thanks for the updated.
Author's Response: Thanks wwefan. I love writing these two, so I'm happy you enjoyed it.
Date: 04/30/09 04:21 pm
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 04/30/09 02:52 pm
I really liked this Black.... I loved how the past and the prestent flowed together, it was well written.
I would like to see a full fic with Mark and Naomi one day.
Author's Response: Thank you Shina! I love writing them. If I can think of a longer story I'll make sure to write it :) Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/09 02:16 pm
I don't even watch Grey's Anatomy and Private Practice and I loved this. I was confused as to who the secondary characters were, but luckily Google exists.
I love the structure of this, the back and forth between then and now. They're in almost the exact same setting but there are so many differences now. Naomi isn't a virgin and spends her time reading Zane. It seems as if Mark's in the same place character-wise, but there are small differences, the most notable is the one leads him to make a move instead of leave as he had before.
From what I've gleaned from previews and a glane at the show from some online sources is that Naomi is the pretty in control woman. She always looks well put together, but there's a secret yearning for more (correct me if I'm wrong). Archer would be the perfect man for her at first glance. They'd make a pretty bride and groom on top of a wedding cake, but Mark makes things messy, more real. I think that's why I liked this so much. It's my favourite type of pairing, the difficult man and the in control woman who needs a spark in her life.
Great work, Black!
Hey lucky. Thanks for reading this one. You're right about Naomi being pretty tightely wound for the most part. But she does have this innocence about her when it comes to men and relationships. She married her first lover on the show, and is currently exploring her wild side. Archer was messy too, but with a shiney surface. Mark's surface is as messy as the inside, which makes him a little more human IMO.
Thanks again for checking this out. I really appreciate it :)Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/09 01:36 pm
Great story. I just finished reading your first and thought this must continue. They make so much more sense than the pairings that happened in cannon. Really great work I hope you consider indulging all of us reviewers and consider a full length with Mark and Naomi. Pretty please with abundant amounts of sugar on top make this one of your brilliant full length fics.
Thank you! I agree, they do make a lot of sense, particularly after that crossvoer episode. Will def write them again, longer if the story is there.
Thanks so much for reading!Reviewer: read Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/09 10:34 am
Oh my, this was so lovely!
"To fix what I broke a long time ago."
Black! This was so good! Perfect one-shot. I feel like I know these characters (I don't but I feel like it!) I enjoyed the other one-shot you wrote starring these two, too. But yes, this was...really liked this lady :) I have no other words LOL Just good stuff here. And SEXY HOT! *sighs* Lovely.
Author's Response: Thanks Madame Z. I'm glad you liked it :) Reviewer: madame z Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 04/30/09 10:13 am
Very Nice and Sexy . I wish the two shows would do a story line like this . Very good story . 10 stars for you .
Author's Response: Thanks stacie. I'd love it if the show did this story too. :)
Date: 04/30/09 09:41 am
I think I was at a disadvantage reading this as I have never seen either of the shows, but I got the point and that is all the matters.
It was a nice story. Soft and understated. Though I have to say, I couldn't believe he walked out on her after she told him she was a virgin. Wrong! He came back tough.
You say you did another story with them? What was it? I'm a have to look it up. Thank you for a lovely story!
Hey Niclapy. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it. The other story is posted here and I wrote it long before this one. Different take on the characters, but kind of similar (and a bit freaky) ;)
Thanks again for reading!Reviewer: Niclapy Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/30/09 09:08 am