Title: Epilogue

this story was amazing!!! I couldnt wait to get to work just so I could read the next page...the characters felt like they were alive and right here as if I knew them and their pain!!!  Good writing, keep it up I love just about all your stories!!!!

Reviewer: whitni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: May 28 2016 03:09 am

Title: Epilogue

I really enjoyed reading this story.  The inspirational theme is so refreshing!  I love it! No profanity, no taking the Lord's name in vain, etc.  Great! This story remindes me of the classic movies where you know the people had sex but you would never see them in bed together.  I liked your choice of words and was surprised when Cindy and Andre did have sex; however, I realize as Christians we do sin and especially in this area.  Your story was beautiful and so well-written.  I am so happy the couple finally wedded.  Again a very well-written and positive novel of friendship, love and forgiveness.  I look forward to reading more.

Author's Response:

Alphaangel, I'm absolutely thrilled that you decided to read My Lover, My Friend. Although I love when readers enjoy ANY of my stories, I especially love it when they find enjoyment among my Inspirational stuff. I guess its because their subject matter (God and spiritual nuggets) is so near and dear to my heart.

As for the story itself, I'm glad you liked my choice of words. I try to be mindful of my potential audience as I write and so you remarking on that does my heart good.

Although I allowed Cindy and Andre to stumble in this story via fornication, I did it to show a touch of reality in this work of fiction, to paint a truer picture of what often happens in real life. Like you said, Christians do sin in that area. It was my extreme pleasure not to leave Cindy and Andre in their sin, but to bring them to a place of forgiveness and their very own happily ever after.

Thanks for reading yet another story of mine, Alphaangel, and for leaving such an encouraging message behind.

 

Reviewer: alphaangel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2009 03:20 am

Title: Letter To Readers

glad you shared your stories with us they are a treat to read.

Author's Response: You're welcome!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 11:24 pm

Title: Epilogue

well good thing charles change for better man. I just love the family moment him cooking she doing a puzzle with her child cute.

Author's Response: Yes, everything did end on a good note, even for Charles. Glad you're not as mad with him as before. :)

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Date: July 15 2009 11:23 pm

Title: Chapter 22

nice ending to the story girl cindy and dre are great couple togheter and gald that julie didn't stop them from getting married.

Author's Response: Julie wasn't strong enough to stop something that was God-ordained. Cindy and Dre BELONGED together.

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Date: July 15 2009 11:20 pm

Title: Chapter 21

lol that family is a trip but love the bond they have. they got married yes and good that they gave back to the kids.

Author's Response: Yay! I was so pumped when I wrote this part. I love when families pull together and make something positive happen.

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Date: July 15 2009 11:18 pm

Title: Chapter 20

glad he got a plan to get the love of his life back. lol punch him right in the eye nice. love it.

Author's Response: LOL!!!!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 11:16 pm

Title: Chapter 19

i can't belive that sorry s.o.b coming back to her home town to win her over. hope she gives him a good kick in the nuts lol.

Author's Response: Here's going to get something special there...lol.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 11:11 pm

Title: Chapter 18

 Girl need to relize that he cares for her and only her and on one else. some one need to kick julie ass.



Author's Response: Julie going down, too.

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Date: July 15 2009 11:07 pm

Title: Chapter 17

that a good thing they doing for the sick kids. and wonder how dre going to get the love of his life back.

Author's Response: He's going to get some help (spoiler).

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Date: July 15 2009 11:04 pm

Title: Chapter 16

well hope her sis can talked to her and make her relzie that he would never do that to her like her ex husband did.

 



Author's Response: The sister can talk, but will she listen?

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Date: July 15 2009 11:01 pm

Title: Chapter 15

dumb ass he should had told her before he ask her to marry him.

Author's Response: Sometimes people don't think clearly when certain situations arise.

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Date: July 15 2009 10:59 pm

Title: Chapter 14

hope dre tells her what happen in that house with jule befroe she get the wrong idea.

Author's Response: He definitely should. But will he?

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 10:58 pm

Title: Chapter 13

see i know cindy is a respectfully woman a smart girl but me would took that chick out side with no witness and beat the crap out of her.

Author's Response: LOLOL!!! Somehow I believe you would. You ain't a WWE fan for life for nothing. lol.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 10:54 pm

Title: Chapter 12

Well he going to ask her to marry him I hope she says yes of course she is lol.  I just love this couple so much cute and the base ment sex hot.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying yourself.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 10:51 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Dam that crazy ex of his. he was going to tell her that he love her always and that nut case shows up.

Author's Response: Nutcases usually show up at the wrong times.

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Date: July 15 2009 10:44 pm

Title: Chapter 10

cindy girl you smart use that brain he dont' love you like lit sis he loves you like he wanted to sex you up and down that pool love lol. i like the kids asking the questionn.



Author's Response: Yeah, I love to use kids to see things adults won't allow themselves to see.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 10:39 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Good her business doing so well and that she falling in love with her man dre loving it.

Author's Response: I'm loving that you're loving it. lol

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 10:35 pm

Title: Chapter 8

wow about time they gave into each other feelings. I like the kid party her sister right she better go into business. make me wanted a party lol.

Author's Response: I know that's right about them finally giving in to their feelings. I want a party, too.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 10:28 pm

Title: Chapter 7

wow event planner that would be a good job for her maybe dre hire her to help plan a event naughty one lol. i like the sister colser it very nice.



Author's Response: I see where your mind has gone. lol. C & D are going to help each other.

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Date: July 15 2009 10:23 pm

Title: Chapter 6

wow that was one hell of welcome home lol.  dre should listen to cindy she right music will be great for his buniess.  his father right he better make sure he show her true love.

Author's Response: I used to welcome my hubby home from his travels the same way. It makes a man look forward to coming home again.

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Date: July 15 2009 10:19 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Aww that so cute the kids her and dre going to movie eating together laughing aww. the old couple right he better make her his wife.

Author's Response: Yep!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 10:13 pm

Title: Chapter 4

i know dre talking about use to go to church all the time and now dont' go any more. think need to go back. Love the parent moment they being their for the baby girl and the sis there too. love the story girl.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're loving this story. Thanks for reading it.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 10:07 pm

Title: Chapter 3

That so good to have a big sis looking out for you. Some slblings are not that close.  I hope the parents dont rub it in her face about her ex husband.

Author's Response: The siblings in my ongoing story (T.A.D) aren't close at all, so I'm glad to show you a story with siblings who actually get along.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 09:58 pm

Title: Chapter 2

So cidny and andre like each other. it sucks they both were in crappy rethships him with julie and her with that sorry fuck face ex hope he balls fall off slowly lol.

Author's Response: LOL!!! Wow, Charles has sure rubbed you the wrong way already. Did you say 'fall off slowly"? lol. Never mind. I don't want to get you started.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2009 09:53 pm



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