Going to track this one, I really like your story. The typos aren't too bad, the Barrett to Williams did throw me for a moment. I love how u started this romance.
Reviewer: swirly_girl Signed [Report This]Date: July 06 2016 06:55 am
Just read your lovely, sexy story for the first time. In a single reading . Really great stroytelling...but this can't be the whole story. Won't you please finish it. Or if is finished somewhere else, please say where.
Reviewer: deejay57 Signed [Report This]Date: June 18 2016 05:39 pm
Bring this story back.
Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]Date: March 12 2016 12:30 am
Reading this story, I know you need to finish it.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 27 2016 06:42 pm
Please come back to this story.
Reviewer: Connie Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 14 2016 04:50 am
This is the second time I have read this story. The second time seems like the first time. Please continue this story I need to read an ending for this couple.
please update.
Reviewer: More Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 25 2014 06:12 am
Are you still writing? You are definitely a superb writer. I like the flow of the story.
Once I started reading this story I could not put it down. Unfortunately I discovered the story has not been updated since September 26, 2013. So if you still check you reviews, please give us readers an update on your intentions for this story. It sure would be good if you would finish it. This is an amazing story.
Please update this year!!!!!
Reviewer: Don't stop writing Anonymous [Report This]Date: December 12 2014 11:50 am
Oh Come ON!!!! I hope you come back and complete the story. I really enjoyed reading it. I understand that life happens.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: February 21 2014 11:37 am
Can we get an update!? A long one!? :))
Reviewer: britt Signed [Report This]Date: October 26 2013 05:29 am
Yes, yes, yes!!!
Dang I sound like I was about to have an orgasm!
Does that answer your question?
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: October 01 2013 06:52 am
I am loving this story and I wish and hope that there is more to come.
Reviewer: kimyso Signed [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 06:05 am
GREAT!!!!! Plesae update soon!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 30 2013 12:21 am
Love this story.
Reviewer: Astrid Signed [Report This]Date: September 29 2013 02:30 pm
Thanks so much 4 the great update, Keisha & Ethan were really missed!
Reviewer: skip2641 Anonymous [Report This]Date: September 28 2013 03:53 am
Oh I like a lot a lot. Ethan is sexy.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 05:02 am
Great update. The sex scene was awesome. Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: Sharise Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 01:03 am
glad you are back . love this chapter.
Reviewer: lady tee Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 12:47 am
Just started reading....I like a lot.
Reviewer: Trulyme35 Signed [Report This]Date: September 27 2013 12:01 am
Thank you for this update! I love Ethan and he loves Keisha! I still like Brandi she bares watching and hit in the throat if she steps to Ethan. So do make us so long for another update, please!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: September 26 2013 05:21 pm
Good for him, stepping up and letting everyone know their leaving, lol
Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed [Report This]Date: September 26 2013 04:30 pm
WOW!!!! I hope u don't take so long for the next chapter
update ASAP please... :-)
Reviewer: CAColeman Signed [Report This]Date: September 26 2013 12:02 pm
Well dam Ethan you go boy handle your business in and out that bedroom. Thanks for the update
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: September 26 2013 05:49 am
Good story....I don't condone violence...what the hell am I saying ......Yea, Darrin got his nose broke... Darrin got his nose broke...hehehe
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]Date: May 27 2013 11:13 pm
what a place for this story to end i hope you plan on completing it eventually
Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]Date: April 03 2013 07:43 pm
please update soon!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: February 27 2013 03:34 am