Please continue. This iss off to a grat start.Reviewer: Cajun Beauty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: December 15 2010 10:11 pm
Love this! Update please.Reviewer: Ebonee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 21 2010 09:29 pm
Yeah, great start, love these kind of stories, som I hope you update soon!Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 26 2010 11:16 pm
Great start - will be loojking forward to more!Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 10 2010 01:13 pm
great more soonReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 31 2010 08:17 pm
i loved it. i cant wait until he meets the one girl who will make him work his butt off and only to fail. if he does that and i wonder if he does know that ava has a thing for him but just doesnt want to say it.
wonderful post; hope you update more soon!Reviewer: branded_beauty Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2010 10:18 pm
Hmm, this sort of reminds me of Cruel Intentions.
I enjoy it, and I do hope that you continue to write it. This story feels like it could get pretty messy down the road. Ava in love with Nic, and him later on having feelings for Keyana.
I really hope that you continue to write this story, because I will continue to read, and review it.
Thanks for sharing :DReviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2010 08:44 am
A good start, please continue.Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: January 30 2010 07:49 am
I think he knows she likes him bu don't want to go there with her.
I like your choose for Ava because Myle have that good girl look but look like she would be sneaky when no one is looking. I wonder if her dad's girlfreind is Kyanna's mom.Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: January 30 2010 07:07 am