Please continue. This iss off to a grat start.Reviewer: Cajun Beauty Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/15/10 03:11 pm
Love this! Update please.Reviewer: Ebonee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/21/10 02:29 pm
Yeah, great start, love these kind of stories, som I hope you update soon!Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/26/10 04:16 pm
Great start - will be loojking forward to more!Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/10/10 06:13 am
great more soonReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/31/10 01:17 pm
i loved it. i cant wait until he meets the one girl who will make him work his butt off and only to fail. if he does that and i wonder if he does know that ava has a thing for him but just doesnt want to say it.
wonderful post; hope you update more soon!Reviewer: branded_beauty Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/10 03:18 pm
Hmm, this sort of reminds me of Cruel Intentions.
I enjoy it, and I do hope that you continue to write it. This story feels like it could get pretty messy down the road. Ava in love with Nic, and him later on having feelings for Keyana.
I really hope that you continue to write this story, because I will continue to read, and review it.
Thanks for sharing :DReviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/10 01:44 am
A good start, please continue.Reviewer: bookacholic247 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/30/10 12:49 am
I think he knows she likes him bu don't want to go there with her.
I like your choose for Ava because Myle have that good girl look but look like she would be sneaky when no one is looking. I wonder if her dad's girlfreind is Kyanna's mom.Reviewer: Dimples Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/30/10 12:07 am