This was WONDERFUL.  Nikolai LOVES Sunny....and thankfully, she now readily admits that she LOVES Nikolai.  About time. LOL.  Since they will probably be in bed for several days, ...even in Paris,....I hope Nikolai has enough guts to ask her to marry him now...and perhaps they can start considering little bambinos...or whatever the word is in Russian.  LOL.   Nikolai will literally dote on Sunshine (like he already does (smile)) and their baby will be considered like a little prince...or princess.  Ahh...

What is going on in Royce's mind?  Why was Sunshine the only one of trip members to get her ticket upgraded to First class like Royce?

Look forward to the next update.

Nyeesha

Awe what sweet update!! Sunshine and Niki in Paris was hot!! Sunshine may not have said I love you but she did say she was his forever that was sweet. Awesome update. I loved it.

This is sage advice and so true...  “Sometimes we revel so much in the freedom of love that we forget the responsibility.” Royce says. “When you love and are loved in return we have an obligation to take care of ourselves, better care of ourselves for those we love.”

And this..  “Unfortunately, love isn’t something you deserve"... “It just is.”

 And this... ” He says harshly. “It does not matter at all when compared to you. Not at all. I love you, Sunshine.”   gives me hope that Nikki will be willing to give up the activities that could put Sunny in so much danger. 

Nikki is a man who has known little or no love in his life; so for him to freely say those words and often say them is huge. He is a man who not only is IN love but who loves. That is probably the biggest change.

I had to read this chapter multiple times. It was chocked full of tasty goodness. Each chapter seems to show Sunny and Nikki evolving more and more to who they should be separately and together.

Even though this trip was to an unsafe place, I now understand why Sunny needed to do it. But for this trip and the distrubance, she might not have had the conversation with Royce that I think clarified a lot for her. He was the perfect person to give Sunny a much needed perspective.

“Yes, Nikki.” She rolls her eyes. “you were right about many things. I’ll see you soon.”  

This had me grinning because it makes me wonder what awaits them in Paris; could it be that the words will come?

Omni, this is a story that I will read often. Just saying it's good doesn't seem to be enough. So, I'll just say, thank you for penning such an engrossing tale. You should be very proud of your child. 

Thank you for the update.  I'm having a difficult time admitting this, but I'm not a big fan of the African adventure.  Looking forward to her trip to Paris..

Lord have mercy! I just discovered this story and I LOVE it. Girl, you are doing the damn thang! Can't wait for the next installment! Chel

Great update! 

“Sometimes we revel so much in the freedom of love that we forget the responsibility.” Royce says. “When you love and are loved in return we have an obligation to take care of ourselves, better care of ourselves for those we love.”

 Powerful words.  Reread that part at least 4 or 5 times. 

Great update! Sunny's finally opened her eyes to what her heart already knew. She's gonna say the words when they reunite. She's got to! :) Can't wait for them to get to Paris...

loved it...loved it...loved it.  can't wait for paris!!

Ok this chapter almost made me cry!! I love Royce. I love the advice he gave her...you don't derserve love..it just is!!..that was perfect!!

Again it is so beautiful how their relationship has developed and how beautiful it is now. Perfect no it is not  and like Royce and his daughter , they still have things they need orking out but they love each other so much.

Sweetie...you can write...don't ever stop. This is a masterful, beautifully woven together piece of art!! You are so talented!! Beautiful...

The song pushed me over the edge and brought on the tears!! I hope they have beautiful renion in Paris the city of love..perfect!!!

Take of your self and muse..rest and take plenty of liquids!!

This story reads like one of the best movies I have ever seen. It is so full of wisdom, goodness and richness. You never want it end. The more I read the more I am drawn in to these people's lives. You want every good thing for them because they actually deserve it.

This chapter revealed so much. Now we know why Sunny is holding back her I love you. Based on what some silly woman said a long time ago..but Achan gave her some very good advice...not everything older people say is wisdom. You do have to trust , your heart and what you see. That fits them so well. Sunny has to trust her connection with Nikki to know how much he has changed and how much he loves her. She knows he does, in her heart she knows he has changed and is changing to be a better man because she has been the spark that ignited that change. She is the one person that has Nikki want to be a better man and he is really trying.

It is also amazing how much she needs him. How much she depends on him for her comfort,safety, peace and reassurance.  She knows he would never let anything happen to her or anyone she loved because he loves her that much. She knows he could not be her father, he would never allow her to give herself to annyone for his debt, I think he would die first.

Their relationship has come almost full circle. It is amazing how you have molded this relationship from something I found disgusting at first to something I find absolutely beautiful now. You are an artist. it just feels so natural..not forced or rushed or artificial but real. love relationship

It is so sweet to look back at Sunny as a child , how much she loved her brother and was his mom from the day he came home from the hospital. Her mother was right she is so full of love...how could you not root for Sunny!!

Segei I almost don't even want to mention. I just wish he would go away and never come back. He is a sick twisted person. I am always afraid of what he may do to our Nikki or try to do to Sunny;s image of Nikki. I want Nikki to tell Sunny everything so no one can use it against him to her.

I love Sunny and Nikki...just don't let them end up hurt..it would break my heart!!You are doing an incredible job with this story just incredible.!!

Nik

This story is off the charts!!! Keep doing your thing girl!!!

Okay, I take back what I said about Royce!  Can't be too careful these days! LOL.  Glad she's leaving there and meeting up with Nikki!  Can't wait for the next chapter!