ooooo, im liking this!!!!!! this cast is sex!!!!!! lol
onward to the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: Interracial4Prez Signed [Report This]Date: 23/09/10 06:58 pm
ooooo, im liking this!!!!!! this cast is sex!!!!!! lol
onward to the next chapter!!!
Reviewer: Interracial4Prez Signed [Report This]Date: 23/09/10 06:53 pm
Interesting update but I don't think I like Evie that much. She's so shady. Aidan needs to wake up and smell the roses. Lillian used her and she's using Aidan. In this love triangle however, its hard to figure who the bad guy is or was.
Author's Response: Thank you for your review baha! It's sort of a new twist on the adam-eve-lillith story. I didn't use those names out of fear of offending so I sort of modernized it with some more darker tones. I think all of them are good and bad, I'm glad that came through.
Date: 20/08/10 04:43 am
Didn't see that coming, intersting twist!
Author's Response: Thank you april!
Date: 19/08/10 07:46 pm
Clever, Original and downright interesting. Thank you for Genesis. I liked it a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words, Cassius. :D
Date: 19/08/10 07:26 pm
What the heck??? What's Aidan doing??? Evelyn should realize that she crossed the line especially if she's cying over Lillian and that she hurt him. If she doesn't love him, she needs to move on out of there. Hmm, if this is a love triangle, its sure messy.
Author's Response: I'd say it's everyone using everyone for their own selfish purposes. These characters will appear in stories soon which will reveal more with time. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: I'd say it's everyone using everyone for their own selfish purposes. These characters will appear in stories soon which will reveal more with time. Thanks for the review!
Date: 18/08/10 09:43 pm
Very poetic!
Author's Response: Thank you april, Im glad you enjoyed it :) Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 18/08/10 05:43 pm