WOW! So Hanna is a little bi-sexual but, I strongly believe her major leaning is toward men and that's good!
Baal is a dirty disgusting lesbian and I wasn't surprised at her agressiveness to dominate Hanna. I'm so glad Hanna let her know she would beat the skin off her funky ass if she didn't leave her alone. But, I'm sure Baal has no intentions of giving up.
Unfortunately, dangerous violent consequences could result because Baal has the character of the sewer.
I think Boon will be the real help to Hanna if Baal ever returns; Aster is too self-absorped and never really around.
Seems Hanna may have a slight mental problem, that hatred she screamed at Baal included association with her mother in that she used the word mama, one time.
I'm starting to feel worry for Hanna!
Thank you Puertaobierta for the great Updates and looking forward to more installments!Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/12 02:08 pm
I'm glad Boon and Hanna are together, he's finally won a place in her heart, along with others of course, especially Aster. But, somethings better than nothing, LOL;
Their lovemaking was really HOT!
I love the flow of this story (both Parts one and two); it is smooth and actions, thoughts, reactions are quick like life, but still filled with meaning important to the character.
Dialogue is also good, and natural.
Date: 02/02/12 01:43 pm
Also, I think both Aster and Hanna know that Boon watches them fucking on the patio.
I felt so sorry for Boon when Astor came to the gallery and took Hanna's attention immediately; Boon became non-existent to Hanna!Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/01/12 12:35 am
I want to add this comment to my previous review: I loved the description of creating a wood sculpture synonymous to how you mold your hearts desire into the type of lady you want her to be and that she also loves only you.Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/01/12 11:40 pm
I loved how his watching the couple was told, I joined in voyeuring with him and it was intriguing. Also, it was highly erotic the voyeur's reaction to his watching! So i wonder all sorts of questions about why he peeps, does he have a problem with the ladies and what is the problem? I'm not condemning is voyeurism, just curious about him!
I am just dying to know who each of these three characters are!Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/01/12 02:00 pm
Great start. Hanna an Aster are still way creepy to me, but gosh I love Boon.Reviewer: Peach Martini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/04/11 01:45 am
ended too soon - look more than forward to the continuation! there's more to this story. a mystery that needs to be solved, thanks for sharing - hope you update soon!
Well then, its time to start it back up! The new part is waiting for you. Thank you!Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/11 12:45 pm
Great cast pics! And that Aster is...mmhmm. Anyhoo I really can't wait for the next installment to this series cause there's still so many more questions I have but won't ask cause I know they wil be answered soon.
YAY!!! Boon's no longer a voyeur. I was cheering for him.
Thanks! Well the second part has arrived. Hope to get to those questions soon. Lastly, Boon may need your cheers.
:)Reviewer: Music Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/11 06:58 am