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Title: Dead By Dawn

Enjoyed it!

Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/11/10 03:11 am

Title: Dead By Dawn

Lmao. evil dead was one of my favourite series and this was awesome.

Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/08/10 06:18 am

Title: Dead By Dawn

I've never seen this movie but it is officially on the netflix queue now. This was hilarious!

Reviewer: femmenoire Signed [Report This]
Date: 25/12/09 07:27 pm

Title: Metempsychosis

I would like a revised version of Metempsychosis!! Sil te plait! When I first read it I read it over again et again! Hehe, It was intense! Very intense! XD!. LIke what would have happened if she proved him with a Mental Disorder going on up there and he got out and they got jiggy with it after the conviction. How he would react to their love or something. That story was the bomb. Lol. Write more please! Bye!

Reviewer: LunarAngel Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/10/09 05:29 am

Title: Dead By Dawn

Oh, god this was awesome! I read the entire series in one sitting! After this, I moved straight onto the next one! This was funny as hell and I loved the pairing of both! Great tribute to the original Evil Dead, and I loved Shelby. Only wish she was real, that would be awesome.

 

Overall, just fun! Could not stop laughing through this, it was fantastic. Off to review the next one now, great work!

Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/07/09 03:25 am

Title: Dead By Dawn

lmao! i read this all backwards but the parting one-liners are killing me :)

 There's only one Ashley J. Williams.

And my mamma stopped fucking in '73.

Hail to the king baby.

Reviewer: jacobella41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/07/09 06:55 pm

Title: Dead By Dawn

What a great and funny story.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/05/09 03:06 pm

Title: Metempsychosis

I love this storyy!!!I wonder..could you make a sequel story without him dying and her proving he was crazy??

if so I would love to see how their love story would turn out...XD!!



Author's Response: THANK YOU!  Hmmm, hadn't given much thought to a part II but it might be cool having some sort of alternative universe story, we'll see thanks for the inspiration.

Reviewer: Mikkii!! Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/03/09 12:27 am

Title: Dead By Dawn

that was hilarious. And I like how it explained what happened with S-mart and why  black rock had zombies in the first place. very cool

Author's Response:

Hey Bree! Thanks for reading and for the review. So glad you enjoyed it. :-)

Reviewer: Bree Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/12/08 07:33 am

Title: Metempsychosis

freakin A. That was intense. I really really liked it. You did a great job

Author's Response: Thanks again!

Reviewer: bree Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/08 03:41 am

Title: Metempsychosis

freakin A. That was intense. I really really liked it. You did a great job

Author's Response: Thank Bree, I'm glad you liked it and it was intense, that was definitely what I was going for!  Thanks for reading and the review.

Reviewer: bree Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/12/08 03:35 am

Title: Metempsychosis

Love, Love, Love the cast.. Off to read.

Author's Response: Thanks Zeta, I'm glad you like!  The guys all seem to be getting a good reaction hahaha.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03/11/08 09:56 pm

Title: Dead By Dawn

Ok so I haven't seen Evil Dead.. Yes I know.. maybe.. a bit lame.. but there you go. anywho Ash was bit of beanik to me, but I loved him and this story nontheles.. It ws well written, you told a good story and it was filled w/too many funny moments. I can't mention them all.. but I will list thoes that made me LMAO in this story. Again job well done!

Things that made me LMAO

Dead by dawn! Dead by daaawwwn!!! I'll swallow your soul! Lady you're black goo-good luck swallowing anything with no face - ok that just made me LMAO

what the fuck is that?" "Lady, you don't wanna know," Ash said. Shelby lifted her gun higher and glared at him. "It's Special Agent-and yes-I do." - LOL

Yeah I was still horny-it'd been three months remember. Shelby glanced at me as she loaded the gun. She walked to the first twitching busboy and aimed at his face. "Special Agent," she said, before pulling the trigger and turning his head to jelly. That gave me a hard on. I'm not gonna lie. - LOL WTF

Just a whiff her pussy and I was ready to shoot my load-but there was no way I was fucking this one up. She had the best body I'd ever seen outside of cyberspace-and the fact that she was letting me touch it was an added bonus. - he was such a romantic dude. LOL

I cupped her head with my good hand - ok that was just wrong.. LOL

"That's cold," Ash said glancing at the wide eyed head beneath him. "But hot. Drop your panties baby." - LOL

Hail to the king baby. - indeed LOL Good Story! Kudos

 



Author's Response: Ha! Evil Dead virgin. I've realed you in with Ash's awesomeness.  Thanks for reading my friend.  You rock.

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/10/08 06:22 am

Title: Dead By Dawn

ok great.. this was much needed information..

Reviewer: zeta Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30/10/08 06:15 am

Title: Dead By Dawn

Ha!

Getting into Ash's head is a trip!! What a rush! LOL! You captured his essence superbly, I laughed my ass off. 

Charisma my friend-sheer charisma-that and an unnatural gift for keeping my woman satisfied and happy. Try to duplicate that and you'll be sadly disappointed. There's only one Ashley J. Williams.

And my mamma stopped fucking in '73.

Hail to the king baby.

 

LOL!! Damn right, hail to the king! Thanks so much! Can't tell you how much I live for this shit. Grindhouse Challenge is my fave so far! 

 



Author's Response: Hey Minx! thanks for reading! Great that you think I nailed him. REally wanted to get it right. And the Challenge has been awesome.  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Minx Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/10/08 07:57 pm

Title: Dead By Dawn

Genius! I laughed out loud so many times I can't even recount them here.

I'd forgotten all about Bruce Campbell/Ash J. Williams until last weekend when I was channel surfing and came across one of the Evil Dead movies. Fun times.

You captured the tone perfectly plus threw in a little Black Mamba. Fantastico!



Author's Response: Hey lovemboth! Glad you liked it and so happy you thought I nailed the character. I can't count how many times I've seen these movies. Bit obssessed as you can tell. Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: lovemboth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/10/08 02:23 am

Title: Metempsychosis

Also, just wanted to say again the cast...perfect fits, particularly with Seth and maybe it's just my love for Sam/Jared, I don't know... And funny how they never saw each other...could it be that Rachel was a shut-in when she wasn't at work? And had been since meeting up with Nathan? Her behaviors probably began to change after her encounter with this particular patient. God, this was really just so good and I'll probably have something else to say about it LOL Just awesome. Again, you ladies are wearing Grindhouse down and it's nothing but lovely LOL

Author's Response:

Yeah Jared is my hot boy crush of the moment!  This cast was so much fun for me, I have to give credit to BlackMa for Billy Crudup and Noah Wylie those were great calls for what I wanted to do.  For me in my head I saw Rachel as being a recluse and unable to see anything beyond being obsessed with Nathan and these either real or imagined notes she was literally trapped in this world and I didn't want the reader to be 100% sure which part was real and which part was imagined.  Anyways thanks again for reading and the stars and the review and the thoughts, I'm a total review whore hahaha.

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/10/08 05:15 pm

Title: Metempsychosis

greatO,

Ummm....can I say this was fucking AWESOME! Seriously, you are a storyteller! I love the wrap-around; first Nathan then her, ALL these characters subject to Metempsychosis; all slave to it, even. This was such a good piece! You guys are killing it with the Grindhouse stories. And loved your mention of Man Ray...dude was weird, but had some interesting pieces. I'm recalling one with fur or something...Did he do the sculptural piece called "Seven Brides" or am I thinking of another artists. Man Ray...something with a sink....anyhoo, this was just so good. And the scene in the alley...HAWT! Poor Rachel was going crazy and had been it seemed since first 'meeting' Nathan. Maybe metempsychosis occurs through osmosis LOL She didn't seem to really begin flipping until they touched hands. All in all, great story, excellent storytelling. More please? Do it again, please? LOL ;)



Author's Response: Thank you Madame Z!  I enjoy Man Ray but actually I was inspired because I was watching a tv show about a famous unsolved hollywood murder (the black dahlia) and one of the theories was the killer was a fan of surrealist work and the way the body was left was an hommage to Man Ray.  So when I started writing the story I immediately thought about that and it continued from there.  I don't know as I was writing the story I wasn't really sure at what point Rachel lost it, if she ever lost it at all and whether this idea of Metempsychosis was real or imagined so it's really great hearing other people's thoughts about it.  I had a lot of fun writing this story on my list of to do pieces is a story based on the show Poltergiest the Legacy and I think there will be more of this kind of thing in it so I look forward to doing it.  Anyways thank you so much for reading and the great review and the pretty stars!

Reviewer: madame z Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/10/08 05:12 pm

Title: Dead By Dawn

wow intersting cast lol thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: Thanks wwefan. :-)

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/08 11:20 pm

Title: Dead By Dawn

I freakin luv Ash...you got him dead on in this story...

i luv that movie...it was so comical and creepy back then....now i luv to watch it to lmao....

Great Job Black.... :D



Author's Response: Hey Cma. Thanks for reading and happy you enjoyed it.  One of my favorite movies of all time. Love Ash.  Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: Cma Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/10/08 09:30 pm

Title: Dead By Dawn

I honestly don't believe I can sing your praises enough. This was so well done! The humor, the wit, the timing, the pacing, the description, all of it meshed so well together, fitting nicely into a done-up, horror-adorned thriller. Very, very, good. *sigh* Really can't say much else...oh yeah, Ash seriously had me cracking up. I read this on my lunch and found myself laughing out loud...LOTS. And the sex scene...delicious as usual. You are awesome. That is all. :)

Author's Response: Ah, MZ, thank you so much.  So glad he made you laugh--Ash makes me laugh all the time.  When I watch the movie for the thousandth time.  So cool you laughed out loud. Makes me happy.  Thanks so much for the review. 

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/08 09:14 pm

Title: Dead By Dawn

Oh this was too good Black. Here you are writing a great story about Ash. I love the introduction to Shellby and they make a great team. Thanks for writing this funny, yet badass tale.



Author's Response: Hey Megumi! Thanks for reading.  Love Ash, so I was so excited to do this one. Glad you approve. :-)

Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/10/08 06:50 pm

Title: Dead By Dawn

Okay that was freakin hilarious such a perfect dead on Evil Dead fic, you completely nailed Ash and love the addition of Shelby to the mix.  The metal hand sex was also a nice touch.  That was great excellent grindhouse piece.



Author's Response: Hey greatodin. Thanks for reading and makes me happy that you say I got it right.  And I couldn't not go there with a the metal hand. So freaky. I love it. Thanks so much for the review.

Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/08 03:39 pm

Title: Dead By Dawn

Nice.

Author's Response: Thanks :-)

Reviewer: greatodinsraven Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/10/08 03:21 pm

Title: Dead By Dawn

I enjoyed your story!

 



Author's Response: Hey hopieland. Thanks so much for reading! Glad you liked it. :-)

Reviewer: Hopieland Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/10/08 07:21 am

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