This story was amazing, I loved Nick's interaction with Derek and Marcus. And there are no words to describe how much I laughed when Angel peed on Justine. Awesome writing!!Reviewer: kurious kale Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/02/15 01:27 am
With all the adventure between David and Jackie we readers need to be on the engagement, honeymoon and the making of Janet's and Grannie's grands. This story does not need to end with speculations😟
I would love to know what happen when David left the firm and taking his clients with him along with the damage it caused meathead Hellger.
Keep the updates coming😎Reviewer: Another chapter or epilogue needed Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/12/14 09:32 pm
I just finished reading this, which i started reading at work yesterday. I really like this series and I'm looking forward to Derek and Chloe's story. I noticed that you've written other stories after this so I hope you haven't given up on them!!! Looking forward to more from you...I've read everything so far haha.Reviewer: Mariposa-12 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/01/14 05:03 pm
Fantastic story and I really got into the characters. Did Grannie's just desserts suceed and did Jackie and her man get married? How did his career go after the opening--did Jackie still work for him? Will we ever get an epilogue on this couple?Reviewer: Penelope Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/10/13 12:36 am
awesome story ..Reviewer: Ashanti. Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/08/12 09:43 am
What up with chole and derek? why would he get upset for getting married? Good story girl enjoy it and did david asked jackie to marry him? Thank for the update.
Thank you wwe! More of David and Jackie will be featured in the next story in the "chi-town shenanigans" series. This is the story of Chloe and Derek. I keep getting sidetracked with other projects. But, haven't forgotten my friends in Chicago.
Thanks for reviewing!Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/08/12 03:34 am
Ok when he started crying at that pic with his mom broke my heart. His aunt is right she not your mother and it not his fault that she left once he let that go he able to give his heart to jackie all the way. thank for the updateReviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/08/12 02:05 am
It sad what David went thu with his mother and his ex but he can't treated women badly because of their mistakes. Jackie is a good woman who no matter what would had stay with him because she love him but no he goes and mess up. Hopeful his aunt can help him out. Thank for the updateReviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/08/12 01:55 am