Damn
Reviewer: SunnySideDown Signed [Report This]Date: 13/08/14 03:33 pm
awesome, can you please continue
Reviewer: dounome Signed [Report This]Date: 22/08/13 05:34 am
more
Reviewer: kimmy blue Signed [Report This]Date: 20/05/13 09:09 pm
All I can say is "DAMN"!
Reviewer: CMH Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/12/11 04:09 am
Loved it!! Ummm...do homeboy give private sessions?
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/11 09:41 pm
Listen...Elle doesn't have to participate in the workout. I will GLADLY take homegirl's place. (waving at Jason with a coy grin) Hey Jason...how ur dooiinn...
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/11 08:52 pm
OH!! Niiicccceee....Let me hurry up and get my popcorn cause I know that this will be good!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/11 08:19 pm
That was off the chain!!! Almost makes me wanna renew my gym membership! LOL!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/11 04:58 pm
whoo too early for this much heat damn make you want to takea trip to a gym!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 09/12/11 03:50 pm
cough cough...I need some ice cold water!!! LOL
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 13/11/11 10:21 pm
i really liked the fact that they didn't actually do anything but imagined it and showed it with their eyes. I think it does some follow up chapters or like a second part
Reviewer: Tiera Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/11/11 12:11 am
Please update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/11/11 03:35 am
I liked it. Would have made a great story!
Reviewer: IRJunkie Signed [Report This]Date: 11/11/11 01:46 am
Oh my Pen to Paper. You do not have the right to Remain silent with this story you need to wrote some MORE Pretty PLEASE.
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/11 11:29 pm
Wow, that was crazy, hot! I wanted one of them to say something!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/11 06:28 pm
That was hot! Got me jonesin for some Highway patrol action (swoon) Wish we had more cops like that than the donut kind.
Reviewer: Leelee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/11/11 02:28 pm
great great good damn that was hot please continue
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/11/11 02:00 pm
Oh, this is good.
Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/11 01:31 pm
oh no you don't. MORE! MORE! :)
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/11 07:05 am
I have a thing for cops this is perfect
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/11/11 06:51 am
I agree with others they should meet again. I would like to see this go some where between them.
Reviewer: IzzyLove Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/11 06:38 am
one word...hotttttttttt. haha
Reviewer: SeoulSinger Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/11 06:26 am
Really nice start. R u going to turn this into a story??? This has so much promise:D
Reviewer: MI97 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/11/11 06:02 am
I think your words were powerful and showed a vivid picture of what occured or could have occurred.
Nice work.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/11/11 06:02 am
too much unreleased heat whoo just hott!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 10/11/11 05:52 am