Whew Hot!!!
Reviewer: Cindi47 Signed
[Report This]Date: 07/01/15 04:05 pm
Loved it!
Reviewer: HarperSinclaire Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/13 04:01 am
So look. I don't ship Rachel with Raylan but... I kinda like it here. KINDA! I want her with Tim!!! Don't break my heart.
Guh, love this.... :D
Reviewer: femmenoire Signed [Report This]Date: 28/08/11 04:04 pm
"Raylan don't do anything stupid."
Yeah, not gonna happen.
Reviewer: Hetairai Signed [Report This]
Date: 17/08/11 11:43 pm
You know I'm usually Team Givens, but sometimes Ol' Raylan doesn't have the sense the good Lord gave a bad dog. I'm all for Tim on this one (plus he's hawt)
can't wait for more! (per usual)
Reviewer: alices Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/11 06:42 pm
Wow, I admire Raylan for letting Rachel know I'm fighting for you. It's going to get messy both in his personal and professional lives. Very good chapter!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/08/11 03:54 pm
oh. snap. i can't . . . wow. mmhm.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 15/08/11 05:05 am
First, great update, loved it! Second, I am definitely team Raylan + Rachael, hard! (I adore Tim but he is not the one for Rachael IMHO). Third, I am not happy with the turn of events. Winona pregnant! Please no! Seriously! Finally, Thanks for a great read! You are super!
Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/07/11 02:14 am
Raylan, I like you but keep yourself away from Rachel. I just keep liking Tim more and more and more. I mean, someone who is dependable, gets you hot, and loves you dearly is clearly a prince. And then there's Raylan...I mean, he has a history of hreat breaking and yet there's something about him, ugh.
And Winona, I can't stand her but I do feel bad for her. She lost not only her husband but a friend who she still loves but he's caught up with someone else and now she's pregnant [maybe]. sucks to be her.
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
I know. I really like Tim too...I'm so torn...I'm so torn...
Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]Date: 02/07/11 04:59 pm
Damn, at this rate Rylan will never get Rachel. I don't like that heifer Winona and I hope that she isn't pregnant.
Author's Response:
PM you're killing me...hilarious...I don't care for Winona either...just now it's not over...
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 02/07/11 01:50 am
aw, c'mon! i'm still on the Raylan boat, i don't care how nicely you wrap Tim up.
though he is so sweet and thoughtful and almost perfect.
ugh. damn you for making this realistic!
Author's Response:
I know...I know...I'm almost down to tossing a coin and writing the last chapter based on which man was heads or tails...
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 02/07/11 01:36 am
Love the update! Things are really heating up.... very interesting!
Author's Response:
Thanks darling. Working on the update to get the next piece out.
Reviewer: read a lot Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/06/11 11:46 pm
I really do like this story and I am so glad to see an update, I wish they would really use Rachel in the show more. I like this histroy you've given her. Excellent job. I just wish the chpaters were a little longer so I could have something to sink my teeth into before the next update. LOL. It's that good!
Author's Response:
I'll try and fatten up future updates. Glad you're enjoying it Bovi. Thanks.
Reviewer: Bovi Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/06/11 03:25 am
I really am enjoying what your doing with these characters. Great update.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm excited to hear that you're enjoying the progression of the characters.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/06/11 12:34 am
Uh Oh. She's been warned! Who's going to win Rachel? This is getting more and more interesting! Really good chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much jazz. Wait and see, that question will be answered very soon.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/06/11 12:04 am
Hooray for a super update!
I'm loving all the nuances to your stories; your chapters are short and sweet but packed full of subtle detail.
I can't wait to read the next chapter; I'm dead curious to see what Raylan has planned. At the beginning of your fanfic, I was Team Raylan because Timothy Olyphant is all sorts of fine lol. But, you've managed to raise Tim to equal, and, at times, higher esteem than Raylan! I'm intrigued to see how you'll play this out. Another great update. Thanks!
Author's Response:
Thanks Val. I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Fingers crossed, next chapter should be before your eyes on Monday. Yes and the Team Raylan vs. Team Tim battle is on.
Reviewer: Valhalla Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/11 10:29 pm
I wish you were a writer for the actual show; you've managed to make Tim super sexy lol. Great job.
Author's Response:
I wish I was too...the show needs a little life in a few areas. Thanks for reading Val. I'm glad to know I'm not the only one with a tiny crush blooming for Tim.
Reviewer: Valhalla Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/11 10:25 pm
Thank you so much for this because i always had a thing for Timothy Olyphant but when i saw him in Justified i wanted him so badeverything about him screamed I will give you the best fu** of your life.
Reviewer: Tiera Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/06/11 09:33 am
I do like Tim, I really do. And I think Raylan needs to get his shit in order before he talks about her hiding behind Tim and whatnot when he has how many women just hanging around.
Author's Response:
Not trying to give too much away but I'll further explore the chemistry and connection she has with each in the second part of this update. That's the difference between the two and you're right. He's the last one that can back her in a corner with the state of his life
Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/11 07:33 am
Cute short!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/11 05:00 am
dude, Tim's a sweetheart, but Raylan . . . there's no excuse in the world for that man to be that damn hot.
::shudder::
Author's Response:
I know...I know...I just don't even have an explanation for it...
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/11 01:57 am
Most excellent chapter!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/11 01:08 am
Very hot! Being caught was funny lol!
Author's Response:
Thanks Jazz. Glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 05/06/11 12:42 am
EEEEE! Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thanks doll :)
Reviewer: peach martini Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/06/11 11:45 pm