Wow, Pearl is evil. James shouldn't hesitate to let Melvin take care of Trigger and Pearl. I don't get her reluctance to accept help. Maybe she will to protect Tristen because he definitely got to her. James and Tristen like each other...excellent storyReviewer: jahchannah Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/06/15 04:12 am
Oooo.....is that Gaspard Ulliel that I'm seeing as 'Tristen?' Hot, hot, hot!Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/09/14 11:31 pm
Very good story. Pearl is not the kind of mother I would wish on my worst enemy. Kind of reminds me of the mother in Madea's Family Reunion with a twist. Gald to see that Tristen pulled out a can of whoop a$$ on Trigger. Frankly wish he would have had a knife to castrate him (which would have been even better). Normally the guys parents are so welcominly funny in stories. Tristen mom is a total trip. Can't wait to read the sequel to this story.Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/02/14 04:48 pm
i wannntttt mooorrrreeeeeeeeeReviewer: cookiemonstah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/08/13 12:22 am
All I can say is 'wow'. I am really getting emotionally attached to your characters and the drama seems realistic and not overdone. Your development of the main character and her parents are very well done. I can't wait to learn more about Tristen! Great job!Reviewer: sha2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/01/13 04:41 am
I love her personality! It's probably because I have many friends with the same type of humor but either way, I really like James and I find it very refreshing that she wasn't blown away by him in the sense that her first impression wasn't that he looked like a supermodel- even if he does. It makes the story more realistic. I mean you don't pass every guy who's gorgeous and go 'that's my soulmate'.Reviewer: sha2011 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31/12/12 10:57 pm
James' mother is even more fuck up then I realize. To steal your daughters virginity for her boyfriend...
Why can't the twisted duo just go away? They seem so bound and determine to steal the light out out of James. When they find out about tge baby, I can just see them try to spin things there way. Those two need to be taken care of.
Date: 13/06/12 11:57 pm
OMG I absolutely loooooove this story and I am loving the characters of James and Tristan !!!! Don't wait too much longer to write "All of the Lights"...I can't wait to read what happens next!Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/12/11 10:53 am
Yeah! Tristen finally got a chance to get some Pay-Back! He beat that Snakes ASS! It's about Damn Time!!! Good chapter, some sex, some action, some laughter, lots of love! Who could ask for anything more.
LOL, I am glad that you enjoyed it.Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/09/11 06:56 am
I am glad Tristen was jealous, he was beginning to become too much of a nice guy! But anytime a man thinks his "property" is being threatened they will lash out! And he did, in the only way he could without being abusive. Pool sex has always been one of my favorites! And anytime an man can make you cum with his tongue is always a plus to me! Who hasn't had car sex? Been a long time for some of us, hopefully it brings back good memories! I hope James appreciates the LOVE Tristen has for her! Sorry Victor got caught in the cross fire, please write him a love interest other than James! Whew!Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 04:32 pm
They have awaken the monster that will destroy the creator! Pearl and Trigger have no idea, what a frightened person will do when backed into a corner. But, they especially Pearl will see what havoc James will unleash on their lives! Good, no Great writing! Keep it up!
You are absolutely right. Trigger and Pearl have unleashed the monster that might ultimately destroy them. What a sad way to go, but they deserve every bit of the punishment.Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 03:48 pm
Damn Good Chapter! I like that you gave your readers background info into James' pre-adult life, and how circumstances and her low-down, trifflin' momma shaped her life. I am glad James is trying to be more than your sterotypical ghetto girl, who would rather live in the muck and mire of bad early life, than to try and change her circumstances and become something more. I am glad Tristen did not take complete advantage of her in the drunken state, and was for the most part a gentleman! But that momma of her's I will never forgive for giving away her daughter's virginity to prove a point! I give you a 10 and 10 stars for that chapter!Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 03:19 pm
Your mistakes do not distract me from the meaning of the story. I can read past them to get to the point you are trying to make. I like the direction the story is about to take. I hope James can be strong and learn to lean on Melvin and accept his help with Charles and Pearl, because she is going to need it. Hopefully, Charles will not be able to hurt Tristen in his quest to break James. Is it just me or is "Trigger" jealous. I bet Pearl (during her crackhead years) let him have sex with James when she was a child, and now he thinks James is his property, just like that "Sorry Ass" Momma of hers! Keep it up, you write better than you give yourself credit for.Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 02:20 pm
The first kiss will always be the one to dictate how the relationship will either begin or end. If the first kiss curls your toes or is a "WOW" the relationship will get better and better. But if the first kiss is a lack luster performance or a "YUCK" then the relationship will crash and burn very quickly. I am glad Tristen gave James a "WOW" kiss, she deserves a little more "WOW" in her life!Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 01:47 pm
I think her personality is good for a person who has had a lot of disappointments in their lives. But with her "dry sense of humor" she will be able to open up and allow herself to find love and understanding. It will be a struggle for any man, but it will be worth it in the end. It also helps that she has friends that do not take her too seriously. Quinn and Xander are the glue that will keep her sane and help her through hard times....they will be her rocks!Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/09/11 01:05 pm