This was lovely.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading!
Date: 12/08/10 04:20 pm
Perfect. Now I need to watch Smith and Jones again, but I already packed the DVD from Season 3 away. Good thing Season 4 is unpacked and has plenty of Martha goodness in it.
Author's Response: :) I'm sure there are episodes online somewhere, but thanks for reading!
Date: 09/07/09 10:26 pm
Very nice. I always thought that "genetic transfer" was rather thorough. I mean, he could have just licked her. But no, he chose to snog her senseless. Who can blame Martha for developing a bit of a crush after that?
Author's Response: :) Thanks for reading! And you're right, he took a few liberties. :)
Date: 09/07/09 10:22 pm
Very well done. I like.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading!
Date: 09/07/09 10:06 pm
Thanks for a great read.
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you for reading!
Date: 28/03/09 07:16 pm
Love it sweetie..very cute!! This is part of a series?? I need to go and read the entire series now!! I want more...
Author's Response:
Hi! Thank you for reading! Yes, it's part of a series, so just click on it in the summary box and you'll get to all of them, or you can click on my user name. I hope you enjoy them if you read them!
bana
Reviewer: neneburge Signed [Report This]Date: 27/03/09 03:11 am
I think this one just might be my favorite. Martha is excellent in this story, and I love how you captured her exciment at the recent turn of events and meeting the doctor. The mention of the kiss, the description of her first time on the TARDIS, was all just really, really well done. Love these. And I'm sorry it too me so long to read this one. I hope you post more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I have a huge lot more on my LJ. I appreciate it!
Date: 24/03/09 08:43 pm
Loved it. Realy like how you incorporated the images throughout. Excellent as always :)
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reading!
Best,
bana
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/03/09 07:02 am
love it so far
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 16/03/09 10:07 pm
This was awesome. Loved the alternating veiwpoints, especially The Doctors. I always love reading his perspective the most because it's so different from everyone else's. Ths was fantastic, I love the brief snippets from this episode that add more than what was seen.
Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! It's much appreciated, and the Doctor has 900 years' worth of experiences...GOT to be fun to tumble around in his mind!
best,
bana
Reviewer: tokenblackgirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/03/09 06:21 pm
Good use of dialogue combined with pic's of their first meeting. I heart this a lot.. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response:
I appreciate you reading the ficlet. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
bana
Reviewer: zeta Signed [Report This]Date: 14/03/09 04:04 pm
Great story. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
bana
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 14/03/09 02:10 am
I liked this very much. You could almost hear The Doctors voice. It was almost like seeing the episode Smith and Jones again.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and I'm glad you liked it!
Best,
bana
Reviewer: Caligirl65 Signed [Report This]Date: 13/03/09 08:37 pm
I Love Martha & The Doctor
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for reading!
best,
bana
Reviewer: Tori Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/03/09 08:37 pm
Okay, this was awesome and chock full of win. That last line? Classic. I smiled the entire time I read this, thanks for sharing Bana. These just get better and better...
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it! The last line...yeah...be careful what you wish for, eh? lol
bana
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/03/09 04:05 am
Hopefully, he’d make an appearance later that night and she could show him just how excellent a student she could be.
*g*
Loved it bana.
Author's Response:
Well, he DID show up...just not the way she'd anticipated lol. Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
bana
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 10/03/09 10:06 pm
Thanks for an interesting look into her life as a residence. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking out the time to read!
Best,
bana
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 10/03/09 03:27 am
I love this. Love these little peeks inside The Doctor's head. The "beating hearts" made me smile. Excellent bana. Can't wait for another :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! And considering he's got 900 years of thoughts...it should be very interesting to peek! :-P
bana
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/03/09 07:52 pm
Oh, I loved this. Especially the last few lines, the acknowlegement that Martha is in fact completely brilliant. :) And how he's drawn to her almost in spite of himself. I like how you focused on the holding hands moment, which is one of my favorites on the show. Excellent. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah, it was something I played on repeat when I first saw it, not gonna lie! lol And the TARDIS is completely to take credit for finding Martha, I maintain, yes. :) I hope you like the rest!
best,
bana
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/03/09 06:26 pm
Thanks for the post card...I enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: 06/03/09 04:19 am
Loved this. This was one of my favorite moments of the first season, which of course I thought was the best. If you've got any more Martha/Ten fics fell free to post them at will :)
Author's Response:
Hey, Black!
I'm glad you enjoyed it. I have plenty plenty more so do expect me to spam...I mean...post it up to The Chamber!
Best,
bana
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 09:41 pm
I'm glad the Tardis knows what the Doctor is obviously in denial about, he wants him some Martha Jones
Author's Response:
Well the TARDIS is quite kickass, she knows more than the Doctor, which I'm sure cooks his grits somethin' fierce! Thank you so much for reading!
bana
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 27/02/09 04:43 am
loved it. I love me some martha and ten. good postcard.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading!
bana
Reviewer: nycjoc Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/02/09 09:39 pm
Very enjoyable! And great call on his knees. There always something about his running that looked a bit odd to me.
Author's Response:
Tenth Doctor is a gangly sort of fellow, isn't he? He was lightheaded after that kiss, all right, and it had nothing to do with them being on the moon!
Thanks for reading!
bana
Reviewer: islandlass Signed [Report This]Date: 26/02/09 07:10 pm
*Squees over Martha/Ten*
Loved this! Oh, that kiss, it messes with your mind, doesn't it? I think you're making me ship them again...
Excellent!
Author's Response:
"Genetic transfer" my foot...he knew he was jonesin' after Ms. Jones from the moment he saw her...whenever that was during the space/time continuum! lol I'm glad you enjoyed it!
bana
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/02/09 06:12 pm