A super great story. What about the honeymoon and of course babies later?
Reviewer: Soooo good Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/12/14 05:53 am
I wish they had at least one boy😀
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/12/14 04:37 am
Good story overall, finished it now I can go to bed. Loved this story. Wanted to shot Miguel and Eduardo myself. Cannot wait for the rest of this saga. I read is out of order All of it was good.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/02/14 06:54 am
Aww, really good story. Too bad about Rachel though. I did not see where Chad and Dani fit into this story. They did not appear to have any interaction with Donovan or Kendra.
Reviewer: d3stin2l0v3 Signed [Report This]Date: 25/02/14 04:09 am
Love It, Love It!!! That propsal was priceless!!
Reviewer: MONTEY7877 Signed [Report This]Date: 17/02/14 01:31 am
im realli glad your taken your time a lot of author rush things and at a blink of an eye everything is forgiven and everyones in love. loving it so far
Reviewer: septembernights01 Signed [Report This]Date: 23/11/12 09:40 pm
Awesome love story! ^_^
Author's Response:
Thank you. i'm glad you enjoyed it...
Reviewer: Jamilla Signed [Report This]Date: 01/04/12 09:12 am
i loved reading this. His reasons for calling off the wedding was utterly straight bullshit. how could he listen to that racist? and how could he choose his career instead of the love of his life? i dont understand men who chooses their careers over their relationship. but i have to say there were times where i was like you blew it... the kids got her. but in the end he definetly won over my support. glad he got his second chance and they got their twins. look forward to reading more of your works.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. This story was my favorite of all time...
Reviewer: Vava Signed [Report This]Date: 17/03/12 09:41 pm
I loved reading this. that head trainer had it coming for him & that garrett whatever his name is too. glad those two are together and were able to set them up and be together in the end.
Author's Response:
Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.
Reviewer: Vava Signed [Report This]Date: 07/03/12 05:06 am
I love this it is way too cute
Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]Date: 21/12/11 06:55 pm
wow you made me like him despite knowing the reason that he left her you are so good
Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]Date: 21/12/11 05:02 pm
Perfect!!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks so much....
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/11/11 07:20 am
I feel like a proud Auntie, knowing that her favorite two people in the world have found each other and will be happy together. Yeah Dream Team! Donovan Williams and Kendra Davis!
Author's Response:
sorry it has taken me so long to reply. But thank you!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/11/11 05:55 am
Tender and beautiful!
Author's Response:
sorry it has taken me so long to reply. But thank you!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/11/11 05:42 am
Oh hell, Surprise your on Candid Camera? That was classic! I love it! I laughed out loud! I am happy they have David by the short and curlies! Good! Donovan and Kendra the Dynamic Duo. They will kick anyone's ass who messes with them! Yeah, sounds like a movie trailer huh? I will give you a ten just for the fact that David's stupid ass did not catch onto Kendra and his ass has gotten caught, and the fact that Donovan put his size 15's into Garrett's Bitch Ass!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/11/11 05:28 am
Be careful Kendra.....don't get bitten by that snake! He is out to destroy you, and you will need to be brave and strong inorder to defeat him! Besides Donovan would kill him if he thought David was trying to put the moves on "his" Kendra!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/11/11 05:13 am
I know he is not trying to blame Kendra for this whole mess? She trusted the Head trainer, she had know idea he was a snake and is trying to ruin her reputation. But now it is out there what will she and Donovan do about it? And will this trial/test be just what they need to show everyone including themselves that they are serious about being together and will fight to do it!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: 11/11/11 04:58 am
Dayam....as in Damn that was hot! Good deal, you have a nack for writing the erotic it was just sexy enough to not be sleazy! Good Job.
Donavan is in Love with Kendra....they will weather what ever the storm that comes their way. He will be there for her as she will be for him. Let them watch each others backs!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 11/11/11 04:49 am
Yeah! Finally she has let her guard down and is letting Donovan in! Yeah I am happy for this story, but I know "the madness" is just around the corner and I still feel like that crazy ass David is behind the stalker/spy person!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 09/11/11 05:00 am
Well damn! I knew them leaving the city was too good to be true! I wonder who is behind this spying and picture taking? I bet it's that damn David! I hate him already! I hope when the results of that cream come back he gets fired for trying to set her up!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 09/11/11 04:47 am
Donovan has home training...he was being a perfect gentleman. That is a good thing! Now, Miss Kendra needs to be careful around David....she needs to have this cream tested as soon as possible.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/11/11 07:42 am
Oh no, she put that steroid cream on Donovan....now he is going to think she is trying to ruin his career....please don't let her use it again.....or better yet help her find out that it is not safe.
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/11/11 07:32 am
Oh hell, it is on now! I know this is going to be good! Williams -vs- Garrett.....stay tuned!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/11/11 07:20 am
Is she afraid or just cautious? I know she loves her job, but is it just the job that is making her put the breaks on or is it she likes him more than she cares to admit?
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 08/11/11 07:06 am