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Title: Blood Song in My Sister's Closetİ

I like that story, are you going to do a sequel?

Author's Response: pmgayles, thanks for reading.  I can't even begin to craft the words to suggest the possibility.  I have so many promises on the table.  But I will tell you this.  I will be returning and completing the stories I have begun.  It's been a long time and it's time to get back and complete!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/06/10 04:33 pm

Title: Pumpkin Milkshakes with Turkey Saladİ

Really loved this one.

Author's Response:

Thanks flickchick glad you did!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/09 04:11 am

Title: Pumpkin Milkshakes with Turkey Saladİ

Lawd those two are hawt!! Brian can make any girl feel good with that type of skill loving!!..

Ok he needs to give it up and just let Nic get Peyton and Johnathan together..no matter what he says ..she is gonna do it anyway..lol

I Love Brian and Nic..sexiness, playfulness and loving..they are so sweet together and their friends are just as caz as they are...I want more about them and the babies...they are gorgeous!!

Great job sweetie..just too short!Loved it!



Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it nene, thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: neneburge Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/12/09 02:56 am

Title: Pumpkin Milkshakes with Turkey Saladİ

wow  the hubby she knows once a  wife has something in her head no stoping her lol.  they might make good couple and looking forward to reading more of this thanks for the updated.

Author's Response: LOL wwefanforlife.  Nicole isn't going to rest until she gets her couple.  Brian should know that she's determined! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/09 05:09 am

Title: Pumpkin Milkshakes with Turkey Saladİ

That was sooo hot! I do hope Peyton and Johnathon will get together soon.

Author's Response: Christmas will bring lots of joy, comfort, and sex for those two sirens.

Reviewer: qualidee3 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/11/09 12:52 am

Title: Pumpkin Milkshakes with Turkey Saladİ

Loved it!! I love reading about those 2. They are a hot couple.



Author's Response: Thanks PAW for reading. 

Reviewer: Paw Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/09 05:58 pm

Title: Pumpkin Milkshakes with Turkey Saladİ

Dear SPAC, that was very sweet, filling, and delicious. The presentation (banner and cast, baby pics) was as enticing as the great flavor... a little sweet, some spicy and definitely HOT!!

What Brian served up to Nicole was far more substantial than leftovers, too. But the man's eyes are bigger than his stomach. Another baby so soon? No way, dude!Practice away, though!!

Little miss "matchmaker, matchmaker, make me a match" will not be deterred. I presume Chris and Peyton need a nudge?

I'd love to read a story about Nicole's gung ho efforts trying to set up Jonathan and Peyton. Maybe for Valentine's Day. Hmmm????

I'll graze on other creative gourmet fare until then.

Hey, got any ribs left from the BBQ at Sammy's folk's house??? <Hint, hint> 

;-{)

 



Author's Response:

OMG! Ok, thanks Blue for reading and reminding me that I'm neglecting "Sammy"...I got you!

Yes Nicole is all over that coup like a cheap suit.  Brian wants Nicole at home, and she knows this.  This story is actually functioning as a spin off of Dr. Feelgood, which will be continued and hopefully completed in the next two weeks.  I'm going to really push this one out, because it got delayed through my transferring of files etc. and other busy work offline.

Peyton and Jonathan are going to give us all quite a time, because not only are they thinking about the obvious, which is the fact their relationships with Brian and Nicole could be hampered if there's a fail, but their own insecurities, and past relationships doom. 

Thanks Blue, for reading again and again.  I love writing about my favorite musing couple.  They have so much story for me tell through them.  I wanted you to see the babies and how they've grown.  I love babies.   

 

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/09 02:22 pm

Title: Pumpkin Milkshakes with Turkey Saladİ

I really enjoyed the story.  I agree with Brian they need to stay out of other people's business.  As for the baby talk....Nicole has always been spoiled bu Brian and he lays it all out for her but he is willing to put up with her spoiled behavior I know because he loves her more.  Thanks for a great story.

Author's Response: Nicole is a meddlesome girl.  She sees the life she has with Brian and wants the same for her best friend.  Brian and Jonathan aren't the same guys, but they do love.  Yes, Nicole is a brat.  Thanks for reading.  I'm glad I got it out because I intend to advance the story, once I'm complete with Dr. Feelgood, which should be in a couple of weeks, at most.  :::Keeping fingers crossed!:::

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/11/09 02:13 pm

Title: Blood Song in My Sister's Closetİ

I see Beverly is still in denial...figures but at least the sisters dynamic has changed. Even though Emogene showed up at the Thanksgiving dinner drunk (never look a gift horse in the mouth) at least when Yolanda put her shit out she accepted that indeed she was an alcoholic.

This is a really touching because it shows Yolanda always having that heart and love for her sister even through all the shit. Beverly's blind love was killing her daughter but thankfully her sister was willing to face up to her and she admitted that she needed a change.

LOVED IT!



Author's Response: Thanks for reading.  Yep.  Parents can be in such denial can't they?  Em has so many issues and needs help.  Yolanda cares for her sister beyond the glitz, glam, glory.  She's there to help her against all odds.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/11/09 10:56 pm

Title: Blood Song in My Sister's Closetİ

Just got back the internet up here and I looking for my password is not on the agenda right now so I'm in but not in..lol!

LOVE THE CAST!

First off I'm the youngest and I'm not annoying...I'M NOT ANNOYING! LMAO!!!

Emogene is a real BIATCH! for being so cruel to her sister, wanting to steal her husband. But I guess what goes around comes around...seeing that she is getting a kidney from that same sister. She is being the bigger sister but Beverly is in such denial about the sisters relationship. Sometimes my mom can be the same way feeling that women can't do the same things as men (she comes from that generation) So far Yolanda is really being the bigger person in the situation to both her sister and husband.

GREAT READ!



Author's Response: Thanks chocolate...I've wondered where you'd been.  Glad to see you back.  I'm such an internet geek I can't stand to be around people if I can't connect.

Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/11/09 10:45 pm

Title: Blood Song in My Sister's Closetİ

Thank goodness she decided to make that change. After all that I'm happy YoYo didn't turn her back on her. Mom neeeds some help herself!! Great story!!

Author's Response: Thanks.  Mom is seriously in denial.   Sometimes you realize that you just need to get your shit in order or lose your center of gravity.  Yolanda is definitely the gravity for Emogene.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/09 01:06 am

Title: Blood Song in My Sister's Closetİ

Wonderful beginning. With all the sister has done to her she is still willing to help her in her hour of need. I hope when she wakes up she will have a new attitude about her life and her family.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading bayoumomma.  I really appreciate you reading.  It's a story that is hard, and tough to tell, but Yolanda is so much stronger than what everyone else perceives Em to be. 

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25/11/09 12:52 am

Title: Blood Song in My Sister's Closetİ

Wonderful story!!

You can pick your friends, but must deal with the folks given to you as family, and, help us, they can be a trying lot at times.

Such was the very complicaed relationship between Emogene and Yolanda. And poor Beverly, the perfect ostrich with her head deep in the sand.

The really ironic thing about the dynamics of family, is that despite the tormoil, slights, favoritism, and infigthing, they are still, at times,  the ones we shelve years of animosity to make sacrifices for in a crisis.

What an insightful story. Thanks for sharing, Dronellar.

Happy day giving thanks for those we have and hold dear!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks Blue for reading. I always appreciate your feedback.  Surely can't pick your family.  Yolanda has become the one harness that Emogene requires to keep from sinking.  Yep, Beverly the Ostrich analogy was spot on.  She doesn't want to see.  You have a great holiday.  

Reviewer: Bluegardenia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/11/09 09:47 am

Title: Blood Song in My Sister's Closetİ

I absolutely loved this story. A pity it was so short but it definitely had a great story line.

Author's Response: I know, sorry baha_malo.  But glad you took a glimpse, and love that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: baha_malo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/11/09 06:04 am

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