Thank you for such a great story!! i like all your stories, especially those historical ones during slavery. It gives me such a different perspective of what we really went through as black women dyring that time, and that love conquers all .
continue writing.
Author's Response:
Hey Serenity,
Thanks for enjoying my little stories. I'm really a romantic at heart bc reality sucks especially for me, friends and family....LOL!! The historical stories were written especially for my readers for their dedication to reading my stories. I see them both as a gift from my heart to my fans even though I love one more than the other...LOLLLL!
As for continue to write for the Chamber, I'm sort of on the fence. Our membership was so small in the beginning but it has certainly grown and I believe we have changed as well. Most of my friends have moved on and I'm wondering if I should do the same instead of sticking around. I'm writing a story right now for another fanfiction site. Yeah I also need to finish my other story which I was so completely excite but for some unknown reason I lost my excitement for it or maybe I'm scared of writing. I think I do better if someone puts an ultimatum on me to write the remaining chapters...I don't know.
Once again thanks for the encouragement and interest in my little writings. Maybe you might give me that spark I need!
Reviewer: Serenity Anonymous [Report This]Date: 15/05/12 09:19 pm
JuST FINISHED THIS STORY AND LOVED IT. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER I LIKE THE SETTING IN AFRICA. I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT YOU WRITE NESXT . DON,'T TAKE LONG.IMI
Author's Response:
Sorry I took so long to respond Tia but just getting back into the grove since my sister died. Have story ideas in my head but haven't put hand to computer as yet but we'll see. Thanks so much for the review!
Reviewer: Tia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/03/11 12:50 am
Now catching up on this story. And loving it.
Reviewer: Tia Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 29/03/11 08:13 pm
Chocolate!! I'm sorry I haven't reviewed the ending sooner. I had major computer problems and just got the problem taken care of. What a wonderful ending and I'm so glad that Zuri and Peter can now live in peace and in love. Seeing all the evil ones get theirs in the end was sweet justice. We already had the talked about you retiriing for now. I'm going to missed you stories dear. :(
I'm going to PM you and see if I can send you a file about some of my little write ups I have written lately. Take care Chocolate and don't be a stranger when you can get online. *HUGS*
Author's Response:
Finally M, :-)
I'm writing this review with a heavy heart but I will PM you why. I wondered where you were and was concerned because I said that wasn't like M to leave me hanging so I told myself something must have went wrong and there's no way for me to find out but I believed within myself that wasn't anything too serious. I thought about writing another chapter with a hot love scene but I don't have the access and finding it would have been another story.
Thanks for all the support you have given me throughout my time at the Chamber it made me expand my storytelling and want to improve my writing. To this day I'm still shy about rereading my stuff because I know I will come across some type of error that I need to change :-). When you send me those stuff I will try my best to read them all. THANKS! THANKS! THANKS!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 06:48 am
Glad she got justice for her mom in the end. She and Peter can now have their HEA.
Author's Response:
Happy New Year baha_malo!
Thanks! A person could say that I'm a romantic at heart and believe in happy endings but its just because I've grown up around situations where I really haven't seen it for myself so forgive me...
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/10 06:10 am
Thank you for taking the time to finish this story. I love it. Very well written. I however have to disagree with you on one thing Chocolate470, your talent can not be replaced and hope that your creative juices will bring you back to Chamber very soon. Don't thank us, we thank you.
Author's Response:
Happy New Year Romance!
Awww...I feel humbled by your compliment. Maybe one day I will return to the Chamber but all the stars must be aligned as one would say :) It is too complicated for me right now to write this story and upload it and until I can solve this issue then I must leave the chamber behind for now. I love and enjoy all of those readers who take their time out to look in on my stories because I enjoy writing them but life sometimes breaks up the process. You're welcome!
Reviewer: Romance Signed [Report This]Date: 18/12/10 12:00 am
Yay - you're back! *happy dance* Great update, but I wonder if it'll be that easy for them, just go back to england...? Maybe the calm before the storm...? *biting the nails* Update soon, pretty please!
Author's Response:
Hey Aprilfool,
Happy New Year! That was the last chapter sorry... I'm glad that you enjoyed my little story and I'm also glad for all the reviews that you provided me throughout this year. I wish you all the best. Thanks!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/12/10 09:49 pm
Damn! - another well written chapter! While reading this story, I feel like I'm in the cinema and watching a great movie with everything - romance, action, exotic country and bad guys like Jengo and Juma - I so want them punished! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Hey aprilfool,
Thanks aprilfool. You've made me feel humbled by your review - comparing my story to great movie...WoW!!!! Thanks so much for such an awesome review!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/10/10 11:13 pm
Wow! Awesome story!
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Author's Response:
Hey Brandy,
Thanks so much! I'm happy that you enjoyed my story! Again thank you!
Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/10/10 06:19 pm
Wow, this was a powerful chapter Chocoate. I'm so glad that Zuri was able to confront her father and have her justic. I wish the nut had died, but death would have been too easy on him. I love Peter being to suppotive for Zuri. They are so cute with one another. And Damisi surprise me in the end. She was ready to blow Jengo away. :lol: Great job on the update and I look forward to the ending of the story Chocolate!!! *HUGS*
Author's Response: Hey M,
Glad you enjoyed the chapter M...Yeah I thought it would be funny to have Damisi with a gun ready to blow anyone especially Juma to kingdom come...LOL!!! Yep the end is near and I don't think I have another one upcoming soon...or maybe that update to Todd Knows Best but we'll see. Again and always thanks for your great support and awesome reviews!!!
[Report This]Date: 13/10/10 10:43 pm
Damn, poor Zuri how did survive all of that craziness? I am so glad that her father confessed to her, too bad she saved his life.
Author's Response: Hey pmgayles,
Well Zuri was able to survive all the craziness because of Peter being by herside. There was still that small part of her that felt she couldn't let him go like that without having him pay something in this world... Thanks for the awesome review!
Date: 13/10/10 05:30 am
My Choc,
I promise to act like a Zuri in distress if you can find me my own personal Peter. Juma is bad new, both Juma and Jengo deserve whatever is coming to them. Nice chap, I don't want this srory to end, but update soon.
dye
Author's Response:
Hey Hey Dye!
Hey thats not fair, I just write the stories. I was hoping that you can find me a man like Peter and some of the other men that are being written about. So what have you been doing with yourself. It's been too long and this board has exploded into something more than Evangeline, Todd, John and Christian. It's like everyone you once knew has been lost in the shuffle. Yeah I think its time for my fic to come to an end and I don't even know if I have another one on the horizon, things have changed so drastically that I don't know anymore but I'm glad I'm still on your mind because you are also on my mind amiga! Thanks so much for reading!!!!
Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/10 04:01 pm
MY CHOC,
Haaaaaaa!! Do you see me throwing my hands in the air wildly? I don't know why it took me so long to check this story out, but it's the boom yo.
Amazing first chap. Ohhh the trials of love...poor Peter.
dye.
Author's Response:
OH MY GOODNESS!!!! Chocolate falling flat on the ground....
OHHH DYE! MY DYEHANNA!
I thought you only went with Tangies so I didnt expect you to read my story. Its been so long...too long. Hey have you updated on your Tangie as yet...lol!!! I'm happy to see that you are enjoying my story. Thanks so much for reading and I really appreciate your support!!!
Reviewer: dyehanna1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/09/10 02:54 pm
I hope Zuri exposes her father and Juma! They are evil and violent. Also hope she and Peter get out of Liria alive and safe.
Author's Response: Hey baha_malo,
I'm leaning that way because clearly they need to be exposed and pay for their evil deeds but I want it to be a chapter that my readers enjoy as well...we'll see. Thanks for the awesome review!
[Report This]Date: 16/09/10 03:19 am
Damn!, this is really a exciting story - a romantic thriller! I was almost biting my nails when I read about that man trying to get her! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hey aprilfool,
Wow I've never even thought of it like that - I usually write what comes out of my brain at the time and go from there. I'm so happy that you are enjoying my "romantic thriller" so far. Thanks for the great support!
Date: 15/09/10 01:06 am
Wow, that chapter was thrilling Chocolate. I truly feared for Zuri life. Man, I want Juma and Jengo gone like yesterday. Playing with people lives they are because they want money. I feel that Peter and Zuri don't have too much protection with the British Embassy either. So I'm hoping that the information that Zuri's mother has given to her will be the key of her freedom to the likes of Jengo and Juma. Great update dear!! I look forward the the last chapters of this story. :D
Author's Response: Hey M,
Glad you enjoyed the chapter and yes they are somewhat on their own when it comes to safety. I haven't even started the last chapters because I'm tired and something else always seems to get in the way. Maybe I need motivation before its too late :) I promise to give myself a pep talk tonight. Thanks for the support amiga!
[Report This]Date: 14/09/10 01:55 am
Yay- you're back with this wonderful story! Me likey the chapter...wonder what said in the envelope? Sorry to hear about our monitor. Can't wait for the next update - soon!
Author's Response:
Hey aprilfool,
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and hopefully I can update the story shortly.. Thanks for your support and awesome review!
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/08/10 04:43 pm
Great update. Wonder if that waiter is a set up or coincidence??!!! Hope Zuri gets out of there alive.
Author's Response:
Hey baha_malo,
I love how your mind is operating about where my story is going next...I'm complete enjoying it! Thanks for giving me such an awesome review and an opportunity to think about something...hmmmm.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 27/08/10 03:13 am
Chocolate!!! :hug: I missed you and I just love the update. So Peter's higher ups had known about Zuri and his past. So basicly, the both of them were use as scapgoats. Pff, but no matter. Peter and Zuri are together, in love, and about to get married. I just fear for their safety and I hope they get out of the country soon. But Zuri has to take care of some business with the evil father of hers. I hope her mother's friend has the infromation Zuri needs to great rid of the man for good. And the love scene Chocolate..... SO HOT!!! I love every minute of it. You can clearly see how much they love one another. I can't wait to see the next update and don't worry Chocolate. This update was great.
Author's Response:
Hey M...hugs...
Yes they had a file for a while due to Zuri being Jengo's daughter (foreigner in a strange land, tracking her movements sort of deal) :) Well you listed the three great things that came out of it..:) Hey M my love scenes pale in comparison to your Tangie hotttttt love scenes...(I still hate writing the stuff...lol!) As always M thanks for your awesome report in everything and I mean that from the bottom of mi corazon amiga!!!!
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 26/08/10 06:00 pm
Please let Peter and Zuri get out of the country safely. What made her father so evil? I am loving them together and thanks for this update.
Author's Response:
Hey pmgayles,
You've given me an idea about given me readers an idea why Jengo chose this path...I'll sleep on it. I'm glad you are still around to read my story :)...Thanks for the awesome review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/08/10 04:16 am
Great update! Well written and can't wait for more! And while reading that love scene, fun imagining Roger Federer all naked...LOL!
Author's Response: Thanks so much aprilfool for the fantastic review!
You're right about Roger naked....AHHHHHHHH!!!! LOL!!!!
Date: 18/07/10 08:17 pm
Chocolate!!! What a wonderful update!!!! *HUGS* Wow, I love the Peter was concerned for Zuri, but Zuri wasn't going any place without him. Peter marriage prospal in front of Mama Wimbo was so sweet and I flet the love between Zuri and Peter. And their first time...... HOT!!!! It was lovely dear! I just hate they are in such danger, but I hope they will make it out safely in the end. as for Juma and Jengo, I hope those two get theirs in the end. I can't wait to see the next update dear! :)
Author's Response: Hey M,
First off, I blame you for writing that sex scene...LMAO!!! or I wouldnt have done so. Glad you felt the love between these two. I wonder what my two evils deserts will be, haven't come up with anything concrete as yet ;)
Well I have finally sorted out the problem with downloading your story and so far so excellente. Although I cant read the hot stuff at work bc the security guard is right over my shoulder reading it too...LOL!!! To prove I've been reading...I loved when Evangeline told Blair off, Todd grabbing her hand and Spencer getting arrested...poor stupid Blair now she has no cake...LMAWO!!!
My great friend thanks for leaving an awesome review! *HUGS* back atcha!
[Report This]Date: 18/07/10 01:34 am
Wow, Juma and her dad's true colors are revealed. They seem to be living double lives. Hope Peter and Zuri be careful. Loved the update.
Author's Response: Hey baha_malo,
Yes it has all been a game to them...they have been toying with Zuri from the beginning and she is just starting to figure it out. Thanks for leaving an awesome review...stay tuned!
[Report This]Date: 17/07/10 04:34 am
I know that it's wrong to to feel good Zuri's father backhanding that woman, but I do. It made me chuckle then smile especially after she said, "I am not Zuri! Don't yell at me or tell me what to do!" It was poetic justice!!! I can't wait for the evil people in this story to get their just deserts. Starting with Zuri's father.
Author's Response: Hey pmgayles,
Although I don't condone it myself, I feel like she was asking for it. The stress of Jengo's situation coupled with her attitude brought this about. I also want to show how dangerous Jengo can be (the two faces of Jengo). Of course I'm all about giving evil people their just deserts stay tuned ;) thanks for leaving a review!
Date: 17/07/10 01:23 am
I can't wait for her father to pay for the all of the wrong that he has done!!!
Author's Response:
Hey pmgayles,
Yeah this author is contemplating this as well but we'll see ;).. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/07/10 03:53 am