Great update Chocolate. My heart ache when Zuri was dealing with the fact that her mother was dead and her father may have been the cause of it? Scary and sad. I'm glad Peter was there to comfort her. I know it was hard for Mama Wimbo to tell Zuir the truth about the possiblity of her mother's death, but it needed to be done. I wonder how Zuri and Peter is going to get the evidences to proved the her father had something to do with it. It should be very good. Plus I love Peter and Zuri passionate affection for one another. It was so sweet, but cut short because of repect for Mam Wimbo. Hopefully, Zuri and Peter will be able to express their love for one another soon. Thanks for updating Chocolate!! :)

Author's Response:

Hiyah M,

Are you trying to tell me that I need to add some sexual content to my story Ms. M....LOL!!! Glad to see that you are enjoying my non-Tangie fic although it takes some time to write out the scenes. A part of Peter thought it was cold of Mama Wimbo to tell Zuri about the possibility of Hisani's death but she felt compelled to do so especially with Zuri going away. It was sort of hard writing this scene - my mother is 77 so you get what I mean. All I can say M where there is a will there is a way and I already gave you guys part of the evidence. It's all connected *wink* As always thanks so much for your support!

That was an excellent update.  I believe that Zuri's father killed her mother, he is evil.  I don't like her father or his wife.

Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles,

Thanks for reading my story and I'm happy you still enjoy reading. Indeed Jengo is a very evil man but he can't get away with things forever.

YAY! Great update! It's funny how easy I can imagine Federer in these kind of surroundings when I read you're story, but not while watching him playing tennis..strange, -  must be you're great writing skills!

Author's Response:

Hey aprilfool,

Thanks for the great review! You really made me feel very humble because I don't think of myself in that way. I'm still learning. Oh Wow! I feel the same way with Federer...which is very strange as well...wow!

Her granny thinks that Zuri's mother is dead, I think that her father killed her myself.  I don't like that man, and I think that he should get hit by a bus along with his second wife!!!

Author's Response:

Hey pmgayles.

LMAO!!! Your review is so funny. I guess I achieved my goal when it comes to your perception of Jengo...lol!!! Hey thanks for my laugh for the day!

Great update. I hope they make it to safety!

Author's Response:

Hey bayoumomma

Thanks for the great review and I'm glad to you are enjoying my little story!

I don't think Juma is to be trusted. Loved the update!

Wow, I didn't expect for Zuri to run into her grandmother. Now I'm very interest in why Zuir mother left in the first place. Peter, you romantic, he moved so he could protest Zuri. But it's in vain because they will meet each other gain and then it will be on!! Juma makes me sick. Of course he had her followed. I wish Zuri didn't have to deal with these 'tradtions' but things will get better. Hmm, I wonder where is Zuri's father is at? Thanks for the update dear and read my pm to you. I got some info you will enjoy!!! *HUGS*

Author's Response: Hey M :) I had her run into her grandmother for a reason and you will see. Well I believe my story is almost coming to an end unless I can whip my mind into shape lol!!! Yeah things are finally clicking in Peter's mind that he is not in England and Zuri has some serious consequences to face if he persues her. Let's see what my mind can brainstorm over the weekend ;) Is this PM on Todd and Evangeline bc it seems I'll be in a tiff again since this internet cafe is moving to a seedy area. Will I ever get a break...arggghhh. As always thanks for supporting. I see you were first this time around....*hugs***

Don"t like Juma, he knows that Zuri doesn"t really love him.  But he wants her anyway for her fathers connections.  I am glad that Peter punched him.  Zuri don't marry that ass, he's just like your father, evil!!!

Author's Response: Hey pmgayles, Like I told another reviewer, in Asha men have the power and that's why Zuri wished for an understanding husband. It's hard to change a society's way of thinking after so many centuries. Zuri can never really love him but that's not the point...really. Thanks for posting a review!

Juma doesn't sound like he is marrying her for the right reasons. What consequences will she have to face? He doesn't have any power does he or will he if he marries her. Loved the update.

Author's Response: bayoumomma, In Asha, the men have the power especially when they get married bc the women's father give them the blessing. First part of women's lives are controlled by the father's, the second part by the husband and that's why Zuri wished for an understanding husband. Thanks for the awesome review!

Wow, another great chapter Chocolate!! I'm feeling Zuri and Peter pains of regret, anger, and loneiness, and heartache. They are both trying to move on, but their hearts won't allow it. That's because they are still in love with each other thought Zuir is focing on becoming a wife to somebosy else and Peter is just slipping way with sex on relationships. I find it intersting that Zuri's father is ordering Zuri to move out and Peter is in assignment in Zuri's country. I was wondering how you were going to get them back together. Great way on doing that Chocolate. I love the setting and this story rocks!! I can't wait to read the next part soon!! 

Author's Response:

Hey M,

You know how I do it...You know sometimes I don't know how I do...it just comes to me...LOL!!!! Zuri has accepted her fate to live in Imamu and be married. Those goals that she had for herself in England have all disappeared. I'm glad you are enjoying my story especially since its not a Tangie...LOL!!! Tell Jordana I'm reading her story in parts...basically when I have the time...lol! Usually by days end I'm dead tired. Always look forward to your reviews and thats why I had to PM you...*hugs* Thanks for your awesome support always!!!!

I'm not liking Zuri's father much. He used her like a slave to his wishes even with the new wife around. She has definitely been a good daughter to him and he has never acknowleged that. That stepmom needs to back it up abit. Glad she will be having a change of scene and hope its for the better. Peter, Peter.....He has issues and he needs to deal with them. Can't wait until they meet again.

Author's Response:

Hey baha_malo,

Well Jengo is in a country where the women are in servitude to the men which includes the daughters so he would never acknowledge that Zuri has been good to him because he expects her to do so or else :(  The change of scene wont mean much because she will be entering marriage life...well unless the writer does otherwise ;)...lol!!! Thanks for the awesome review!

So,they will meet again. Why did she have to stay on and work  for her dad if the boys moved on. Dad re-married and now has a new wife, so why can't she? Thanks for the update!!

Author's Response:

Hey bayoumomma,

Until she gets married then her father can still assert that control over her life. This is the reason why she misses being in England because it showed her a different way of life where women can do and think for themselves instead of waiting around to get married. Thanks for the awesome review!