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Title: Chapter 3: Outta Here

Oh, please, Suzette! If blood does not make two women behave as sisters are supposed to toward one another, then, of course, marriage is not a contender either. And Thaddeus does not like Serena because he does not like her. There is little to like about her, if there is anything at all, from what I can see.

Evidence? Lol. She's on her Chris Hansen game.

I noticed this last chapter and I now feel like like I should say something. “Honey” is repeatedly misspelled as “Huney.” Also apostrophes are missing from words like you're, don't and it's.

As far as Ella goes, she is playing the victim. Her situation is one of being bullied and it will continue if she does nothing to stop it.

Sasha's drug habit and her consequent outburst should confirm for Ella what we already know, those three women will never be her family. Thaddeus seems like a good guy, I just hope there are more layers to him than we have seen thus far. I want to know more about him. 



Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Love your review!!!!

Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/09/10 07:39 am

Title: Chapter 3: Outta Here

I'm with Thad, why doesn't she quit??? Look for a job elsewhere??? They're not her true family and obviously don't like her. Doesn't she have a little money saved??? The stress of dealing with her "family" isn't worth it. She's just their maid. Loved the update.

Author's Response: I feel the same way and Ella is starting to see that now. We'll see what happens! Thanks for all the feedback!!!!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/04/10 04:29 am

Title: Chapter 3: Outta Here

Who knew that Suzette would turn evil.  I am liking this story, thanks for the update.

Author's Response: Thanks for all of your feedback! I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/04/10 02:33 am

Title: Chapter 3: Outta Here

I'm so glad Thad is there for Ella, she really needs a friend like that.

Author's Response:

Me too! Such a Prince Charming aint he?

Thanks for the feedback!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/10 12:07 am

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