I enjoyed reading this story even though it was diifficult reading with paragraph spaces. Ohter than than it's a GREAT story and I hope you update soon!
Chel
Reviewer: miquerida Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/06/10 02:55 pm
Yes! I'm excited about this story. All the artists you use I'm a fan of. I'll be soon to add this to my favorites and start reading this tomorrow.
Reviewer: shiree022000 Signed [Report This]Date: 14/04/10 05:21 am
I love this i'm a huge jay fan so its nice to read a fic about him the only ones out there are on Beyonce forums(not a Beyonce fan). I have read stories here that are not ir this community is about woman of color so I don't think you will get any hate. I do agree with the other reviewer it is difficult to read with no spaces between the paragraphs.
Reviewer: ellenangel69 Signed [Report This]Date: 12/04/10 06:32 am
Interesting start. Difficult to read as lots of words and no paragraphs/separation but appreciate your efforts.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 12/04/10 03:48 am