I hope you're going to finish this story I really love it! Please come back
Reviewer: IzzyLove Signed [Report This]Date: 10/06/14 09:40 pm
Woah, that was intense, I cried.
Reviewer: venomqueen2002 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/01/14 11:41 am
Hey I think you should coutine writing this story miss reading it and hope you update soon.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 25/09/12 11:45 pm
please come back!!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/01/12 05:42 am
Hell to the fucking yeah!!! Go Mark!!
Reviewer: 1booneyb Signed [Report This]Date: 23/12/11 10:39 pm
ok this story is almost overy why don't U finish
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/04/11 06:58 am
I freaking love this story. There was not a character that I didn't like or like to hate. I can't wait to see what happens with Dave and Phil, will he take her back? How will Ana comfort Mark re: Claire? Update soon please.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: 04/03/11 07:36 am
This story is hilarious!
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/03/11 10:50 pm
The pictures are gone!!!
Reviewer: Logan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/02/11 09:05 am
Each time I read this chapter I get more and disgusted. Sophie is an evil hobag concubine and she should die a painful and long death. Please update soon.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 23/01/11 02:41 am
*crying* She KILLED that man's baby....poor little Claire....that trick left her with some junkies....SMH
Reviewer: Dirtydiva Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/01/11 03:42 am
AWWWWWWWWWWWWW MANNN!!! Cold busted.....GO GIT YO' MAN!!!
Reviewer: Dirtydiva Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 03:28 am
Somara and Sophia are poster-children for how having working uterii doesn't make some women mothers.
On the upside, Mark finally quit that bitch for good. Yes, 'bitch'. She doesn't deserve to be called a woman.
Reviewer: Leo Princess Signed [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 12:20 am
Wow Great Story!!!!
Reviewer: Carmel Beauty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/01/11 08:25 pm
Sophia, what a biotch..
Leaving a child, pretenting like the child never existed. Selfish.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/01/11 05:24 am
...... Total speechless.
Great chapter, so many emotions. I feel so sad for Mark, I wouldn't wish that on anybody. Wow, please update soon!!!
Date: 20/01/11 04:43 am
BLOWS ARE ABOUT TO FALL!! Mommy should have had the first blow to her head. She is so twisted with her "LOVE". I rather not have love like that Thank You very much. Loved the drama and tension. Can hardly wait for the fur to start flying Grrrrr. Loved IT!!!
Now UPDATE!!!!
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/01/11 04:21 am
Damn, now that's an update.Finally, the shackles on Mark's feet have loosen. It's Ana & Mark time now ! I'm holding out for Dave to find his true love, not Phil (needs to go away for few years, marry a the her black ideal man who isn't so ideal, and feign for love of a good man,Dave, lost) and move on with his life as well.
Reviewer: Zetacrave Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/01/11 03:35 am
THIS CHAPTER WAS FIRE!!! IT WAS HOT!!! When Mark told that SOFHO off was just brilliant. LOVED IT!! All of her secret were out there no more hiding. Yippee, he should have planted his foot up her behind!!! Loved it !!! NOW MORE PLEASE,MADAM!!!
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/01/11 12:34 am
Omgoodness, this chapter had me in tears. Sophia is one messed up character. Wow, Im speechless really but another great chapter, thanks.
Reviewer: QuetQuet Signed [Report This]Date: 20/01/11 12:25 am
S/ophie is not only stupid, evil and crazy but in denial as well. Sophie doesn't have a clue about what love means how to even really someone. I am glad that he didn't kill her, although she does deserve to die. Great chapter!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 10:59 pm
I don't advocate men laying hands on women, but if he would have molly whooped her one good time, he'd be forgiven. Sophia, is a piece of dog doo doo. Next up Ricky, needs to get his comeuppance. Denita, you did your thang girl!!!
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 09:09 pm
omg poor mark to find out your child was alive and then to find out someone killed her too only one year old. he never got to know her my heart break for him. I don't belive in a man kicking a woman butt but i would mind he kick that bitch ass for what she did to him. Ann and david going to need to be there for him to help him get thu this ruff time. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 08:43 pm
hmmm....this chapter almost redeemed Mark although I don't think Ana will take him back so easily but she might be more understanding.
You know I'm waiting for more, right?
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 07:54 pm
I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!! I cant wait for another chapter!!!!! I feel so bad for Mark... he lost his litlle baby girl... Great chapter ;)
Reviewer: aqua09 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/01/11 06:04 pm