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Title: Calm Before The Storm

He really loves her, they haven't even talked yet and he is ready to forgive her.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 09:10 pm
Title: Taking Charge

What a way too hear about the woman you love, cheating on you.

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Date: 08/05/10 09:00 pm
Title: I Doubt It

Mark better have sense enough not to listen to her.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 08:45 pm
Title: Either Or

I am so glad Dave finally spoke his mind. She is treating like trash.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 08:18 pm
Title: Devlin Speaks

Too many lies!! I don't see how this is going to end well for anyone.

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Date: 08/05/10 07:52 pm
Title: Confessions

She is not a true friend, if she expects them to lie for her and hurt Mark. I was surprised to see she didn't say anything about Sophia being in Dave's office, even though it wasn't what she thought it was. Unfortunatley something tells me she will be sharing that bit of info pretty soon.

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Date: 08/05/10 07:13 pm
Title: Meetings

Somara and Ricky need to be together seems like.

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Date: 08/05/10 07:01 pm
Title: Calm Before The Storm

I feel Dave's pain. I've never been in that situation but you can't help but feel sympathy for him. I want them to have it out but I wonder if Phil will give him the satisfaction of a fair fight (no punches being thrown I'm talking words here). We'll just have to wait and see. Sophia will hopefully have a change of heart and come clean, but it's not a good thing that Mark lied. Yeah she's gonna be p.o. but he didn't sleep with the itch now did he?

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Date: 08/05/10 06:48 pm
Title: Sophia's Story

I hope Mark and Ana are string enough in this relationship, that what mom has planned doesn't affect tham too much.

 Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 06:05 pm
Title: Answers Wanted

These are some evil people. If someone doesn't love you then move on, it's as simple as that. Mom says  he is no good for her baby because he may be cheating on her, but what exactly makes what she thinks Mark is doing  different than what Ricky did. Phil doesn't deserve Dave, if she has to have her black man then stop leading him on.

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Date: 08/05/10 05:49 pm
Title: Betrayal

Mark is stupid for even thinking about getting back with his ex. Right now I have no respect for Phil, how can she sit there and tell that man she loves him after having just laid up with another man. She is no better than Ricky.

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Date: 08/05/10 05:34 pm
Title: Tested

Oh he is so wrong for that. Why would you continually let someone use you, I truly don't understand.  He is going to break her heart at this happy celebration, I hope he thinks twice about that with her family there. I hope Ricky isn't there to pick up the pieces of her broken heart. Awesome update.

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Date: 08/05/10 05:09 pm
Title: A Talk With Dad

I don't understand her giving up a six figure job offer because of that fool. She didn't trust him anyway so why screw up her career.

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Date: 08/05/10 04:55 pm
Title: Calm Before The Storm

Thanks for a great update.  Ricky and Sofia...they just make me sick.  I feel bad for Dave but what he doesn't know is that pkans are already in the work to break up Mark and Ana.  Thanks

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Date: 08/05/10 03:31 pm
Title: Calm Before The Storm

OMG denita you cant stop there! NOOOOOOOOO! please come back soon ok?! im dying over here lol!! thanks for updating.

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Date: 08/05/10 01:31 pm
Title: Closer

I can't believe her mom bought the ex with her. He messes with Ana and he may get his butt beat.

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Date: 08/05/10 07:26 am
Title: Coming Clean

I'm really enjoying the heck out of these crazy larger than life people.

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Date: 08/05/10 07:15 am
Title: Almost Had It

Almost Mark! You know now she wants you at least!

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Date: 08/05/10 07:12 am
Title: Til The Cops Come Knockin

I sure hope Mark is lucky tonight as well. Phil will not be complaining about her pink man anymore.

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Date: 08/05/10 07:05 am
Title: Fight!!!!

I love those two ladies or should I say three. Ken is hilarious, she needs to have those babies now.

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Date: 08/05/10 06:45 am
Title: Calm Before The Storm

What is Dave to do? I mean I hate the fact that Phil cheated on him but maybe just maybe their meant to be together, but hey maybe a break from her will get her to see that Dave is the one that completes her. But anyways I'm glad Dave isn't going to tell mark about Ana knowing even though I have a feeling it's going to come out anyways. Oh and I hope Sophia and Ricky's plan fails. Great update. update soon please.....

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Date: 08/05/10 06:31 am
Title: Calm Before The Storm

When did AJ put out a solo album? I use to be in love with him. lmao

I hate Rick. I really and truly hate him.

I'm looking forward to the drama in the next chapter.

Thanks for updating.



Author's Response: AJ was my favorite. He came out with an album in Feb I think...but only in Japan. It has some great tracks...check out youtube. "What If", "London", "Have It All" and "Gorgeous" are my favorite tracks.

 Reviewer: Cholyn Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 06:28 am
Title: Calm Before The Storm

I am glad that Dave talked himself out hurting Ana by telling Mike.  Thank you so much for the update, I love this story.  I want Phil hurt and humilated bad.  I want Ricky, Samora and Sophie run over by semi.

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Date: 08/05/10 06:10 am
Title: Double Date

Mark was rude. That date didn't turn out the way they wanted it too.

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Date: 08/05/10 06:00 am
Title: Calm Before The Storm

Gahhhh!!! How could you end it there? Kinda loving Sophia. Ricky just gets scummier and scummier.

And this...

Dave lay on his back and thought of the one person that he was still unsure of. He use to see a future with her; he use to see that they could’ve been happy. But now every time he’d dream of her, the white picket fence and a couple of kids…a mail man would come along and fuck her behind the garage. 

I was all moved by his musings but then you wrote this and I just laughed.

Well done. 



Author's Response: I can't let things get too serious...its just not in my nature. lmao

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/05/10 05:41 am
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