wow i argee with kendra beat him up for being rude lol. but i hope thing work out btween phil and davd because they seem to get along and realy like each other. sometimes friends can mess thing up / or make thing great. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/05/10 03:55 am
well that date with smooth lol. thought she was going to pour a drink down his pants lol but good thing she didn't. he was rude and hope that he said he sorry to her. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/10 03:51 am
lol to funny i dont' do pink lol girl she better do it and do it nasty lol. ann mom wrong i would never wanted my child mother sister any woman to be with someone who cheated on them and dont' care how they did it or about the person. i hope her mom wake up and stop trying to run her daughter and son life before she lose them. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/10 03:43 am
glad that she has a close bond with her sister in law someone she can talked to and help out the same time. why do men do crazy things her he is going all this stuff and scary his wife. well hope the new bike help out her bond with hubby. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/10 03:33 am
wow that good she made a new friend in phil lol he a trip lol everyone has a gay best friend their great to have. i hope she find love to but with who. and no that hefa/ex friend going to blame her. she the one hope on him and she shouldn't have because it was so wrong on so many ways. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/10 03:26 am
wow so the fake friend stab her in the back by sleeping with her man wow like she said she a hoe lol. it funny when something crappy happen to us we come out a play toni luther all them lol. lol her mom is a trip calling her brother wife a hoe lol. thanks for the updated.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/10 03:17 am
nice pics of the cast and never read a fic with bastia and mark in the story. looking forward to it.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 02/05/10 03:13 am
Oh Snap, the ish is about to hit the fan, and I can't wait. I wonder if Mark will find out about Ana keeping Phil's secrest, and Ana discovers Mark.
Poor Dave, I hope he doesn't physically arm her, but if he just yell and calls her verything in the book, or is cold as ice, I will cheer him on every step of the way.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/04/10 11:52 am
Aww mind games, I hope Mark is smarter than that...Naw, he's not. I feel bad for Ana and Dave, because they are the only ones on the up an up. The are the only ones trying to see the best in their partners.
Again, I hate Somara, and Ricky is an ass. I would love to know, why, he's go gung ho about getting Ana back.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/04/10 11:35 am
LOL@ the waitress
Aww Dave, give him someone else! That skank does not deserve him. I hate her more and more each chapter. lmao
Phillis has some nerve to be mad, because Alek has a side piece. And why should he, when she has one.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/04/10 11:19 am
Phillis has some nerve, she needs a head check. Her not being completely comfortable dating a white guy is no excuse. I really like Dave, poor boo boo.
I liked the fight.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/04/10 10:53 am
Eww, just eww. Why don't Somara and Ricky just have sex and leave everyoneelse alone, including Devlin Sr.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/04/10 10:37 am
I HATE SOMARA!!!! I hope she gets hit by a bus!
Aww Mark and Anna were great. Ugh I these folks for trying to break the up. grr
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/04/10 10:18 am
Mommy Dearest is a Biotch! I can not believe how delusional this woman is. Ricky is a punk, I hope Mark beats his a-double-s. lol
Phil, I am so done
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/04/10 10:05 am
Phil, is just WRONG! Dave is a great guy, ugh, she's such and idiot.
I'm sorry no matter how hung up you are, there is a time when you just have to let it go. MARK, needs to let the HO go. lmao
Aww Ana
I love BSB! Although, I don't own their last three ablums, I do have some songs on my playlist.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/04/10 09:34 am
Lil Ricky got some nerve, asking her if's she's sleeping with him.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/04/10 08:50 am
Oooooo SHOT! Mama needs to quit!
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/04/10 08:38 am
I really like the conversations between Mark and Dave. They seem very organic.
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/04/10 08:00 am
Mark is funny. I cracked up when told Kendra to sit in the other chair, because it would save her a few steps. I like that he's sort of an unapologetic a-hole.
Ok, this irks me to NO end, but "I have to piss" Really! I mean Really! I cringe everytime I read that. She may as well say, "I have to take a leak."
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/04/10 07:25 am
I just have to say "You go girl!" I know cliche, but it needed to be said. LOL
Reviewer: Cholyn Signed [Report This]Date: 25/04/10 06:34 am
I'm so glad you joined here and updated this story. Welcome back. Loved the update.
Reviewer: Raven Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/04/10 01:03 am
This story is so captivating because it doesn't follow the rules. I love it!
It started out hilarious, thanks for that - a comedy will get me everytime. As it has progressed though, its gotten darker. Ana is giving everyone too much leaway. She should have told Phil she had 24 hours to tell Dave when she first found out, she should have told Mark and she should have slapped the shit out of Ricky when he kissed her outside the building. Covering up wrongs is never a sign of loyalty, its a sign of weakness. Loyalty doesn't always render one popular, but in the end everyone sees it for what it is. I'm disapointed in Ana and Ken and Devin for that matter.
Well now he knows so the gigs up. It will be interesting to see Marks reaction when Dave tells him. The thing that really gets me, there should be nothing in the world that could induce Ana to get back with Ricky...NOTHING. So either her mother is completely delusional or Ana isn't what I've come to think she is. She and Mark may separate because he's got issues, but getting with Ricky again just isn't an option. I guess we'll see.
Thanks for bringing the story over!
Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/04/10 06:43 pm
Dayum!! I'm glad he finallly knows but what a way for him to find out and can Ana get out of telling Mark without ruining what they have together. Tune in next time for duh duh duh!!!!! The Adventures of hot crotch (Phil)
Reviewer: June Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/04/10 08:42 am
Girl you crazy!!!!!!!! It was quite a 180 but I'm glad they bonded over The Backyardigans. Loved it! And they haven't even had sex yet. I can only imagine there will be some headboard banging soon for both couples. Ok all three Kendra sounds like she is a wild woman when she gets ready.
Reviewer: June Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/04/10 06:44 am
Oh crap, the mess has hit the fan. I can't stand Phil. I'm glad Ana was finally going to tell Dave, especially after that crack Phil made about empty threats, but it's too late now. I feel bad for Dave. He had all this faith and love for Phil and she was just a selfish liar.
Thanks for the update. I can't wait for the next part.
Reviewer: Tootall Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/04/10 02:04 am