Okay, so that was ALOT Of reading, but I REALLY enjoyed it. Very very good. Great dialogue and action. Can't wait to see what happens next. I'm seeing the facial expressions and bulging muscles of Dave and Mark... I'm loving it! I really am!
Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed
[Report This]Date: 21/04/10 09:18 pm
OMG! What is Dave gonna do? I feel so bad for him Phil broke his heart (Damn you Phil). And someone please break up this little plan that the trick Somara is doing. Love the update Can't Wait to find out what happens next.
Reviewer: Chell Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/04/10 05:59 pm
Oooh I can't wait for Phil to get hers! Girlfriend knows she is being Triffling!
I dislike Somara more and more with each passing chapter. I have to agree with Sophia, her life must be really pathetic if she is going through all of this to try and control her daughters life!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/10 05:05 pm
Wow, this story has a lot going on. First of all Phil should be ashamed of herself. Quit stringing Dave along and tell him. It is going to blow up in her face big time. Somara is a mother from hell. Why is she such a terror. She is going to find herself without either child or her husband at the rate she is going. Poor Ana having to deal with so many people trying to wreck her good thing with Mark. You did such a good job of capturing everyones emotions and motives in this story. I know the next chapter will be just as exciting.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 21/04/10 03:44 pm
oh snap somebody is gonna get theirs!! yo i love the drama of it but whats gonna happen next? plz keep updating!!!
Reviewer: june Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/04/10 02:20 pm
Awesome update. Happy to see that you bought it to this site... Please, please update soon!
Reviewer: kaci Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/04/10 10:08 am
I can't wait for Dave to kick her trifling ass to the curb. I am so mad at her. Dave does not deserve this. It's worst because Alek knew all about Dave but Dave knew NOTHING. And then she had the nerve to get pissed at Alek having a side piece. What the hell?
“It hurts me every day. I love Dave more than you can understand, and I don’t expect you to understand. Every time I look at him in the eyes I hate myself for what I’m doing to him.”
And yet, she continues to do it. bitch please, you're doing this cause you WANT to do it. Phil is insane.
And speaking of insane, Ana's egg donor is truly certifiable. I hope her plan doesn't work. If Ana falls for Rick's crap, she's as crazy as Phil.
This is a complete mess. At least with Ana, she's not willingling causing drama in her life, like Phil is.
Poor Dave. He's being played for a chump. Oh, the upcoming chapter is going to be angst-ridden. I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/04/10 10:06 am
I am glad that Dave overheard Ana's and Phil's conversation, but I can't believe that was surprised. Her behavior was suspicous and she confessed then took it back. Phil has treated him like a bald headed step-child with bad teeth and leprosy and he was surprised. Phil makes my teeth itch and I hope that bitch looses both men!!! That would be the only justified reward for her hoish behavior. Oh yeah and her next relationship she needs to get played just like she did to Dave!!! I don't like Phil!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/04/10 07:56 am
This story is too good, couldn't stop laughing while reading it. Love Ana, Dave, Ken(she is hilarious),Dev,Mark(though he needs to get his stuff together and tell Ana that trick sophia is in town trying to get at him) and Phil(I'm having mixed emotions with her cause she was cool in the beginnig but she is playin fine ass Dave and that just ain't right). What I'm hoping is Ken finds out about the plan of getting Mark and Ana apart and makes use of that shank of hers on those devils som,ricky,and soph LOL! But anyways Loving the story Can't Wait for next update!
Reviewer: Chell Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/04/10 07:16 am
I hate that Sofia ho. As for Phil and Dave well Dave sorry but Mark is right you are being played big time. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/10 06:03 am
I love this story. I love the pace of your chapters and it is fun-ny. Enjoying the read!
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 21/04/10 02:42 am
My Cena story is not really a "cena" story. But I am gonna do an Orton story!
Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed [Report This]Date: 20/04/10 11:29 pm
Really good so far. I'm looking forward to reading more. Because I'm such a WWE fan, I can literally hear their voices... that was really enjoyable. Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
I've been a fan off the WWE since the mid 90s. I've always loved Taker but I started to get a huge crush on him during hs Amreican Badass days. There was just something about the long hair, choppers and tatts...lmao. When I got the idea for the story Taker and Dave seemed to be the perfect fit for my guys.
I plan on making a seires of short stories with some of my other favorite wrestlers like Edge and the Hardys after I'm done with this story. Also, I can't wait to read your John Cena story.
Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed [Report This]Date: 20/04/10 08:00 pm
Wow, loving all the crazy drama in this story! please update soon!
Reviewer: Kay Signed [Report This]Date: 20/04/10 06:22 pm
Yummy pic of The Phenom and The Animal!
Reviewer: Dsmoothone Signed [Report This]Date: 20/04/10 05:51 pm
after reading this i gotta say damn. i love the guys! mark, dave, and dev and of course their ladies: ana, kendra with her crazy ass and phil even if shes being trifling right now. but for real she needs to get her shit together and pick a dude cause im feeling for dave. and mark needs to handle those terrible three. you know who. and finally i love how each chapter has a song that fits with the mood occurring in the story. Plz keep updating.
Author's Response: There was a time when I thought that watching wrestling was my muse....but I figured out that it was different music I heard. I like to intergrate the music and the mood as well as I can. I'm glad you like it.
[Report This]Date: 20/04/10 02:22 pm
Wow, this is really good. Just read all 26 chapters.
Ana's "egg donor" is a real B. When she said she wouldn't let anyone hurt her baby, I wanted to scream since she was saying it the prick that had cheated on Ana with her "best friend". This woman is as twisted as they come.
And Phil is beyond pissing me off. Dave is going to, and should, dump her cheating ass. She WANTS him to find out about her cheating so he will dump her ass. What a f'd up chick. She needs therapy and Dave needs to get as far away from her as possible. She'll probably be all crying when he finds out.
And Mark is playing right into the evil doers' hands. But I was so glad that he popped that little bitch, Rick. He should've shanked him.
Everybody is lying. I don't see how they're keeping their crap straight.
This story has it all, drama, angst and some of the funniest sh*t I've read in ages. It had be rolling. These are some crazy ass characters. I can't wait for the next installment.
Reviewer: BellaChica Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/04/10 08:31 am
Wow...I spent all day reading all 26 chapters and this story is off the chain!
Man, with a mama like Somora who needs enemies, I don't know who is crazier, her mama or Ricky!! Talk about delusional!
I was just as hurt and disappointed in Phil as her girls were, I cannot believe she would hurt Dave like that. If she doesn't want him then she needs to let him go...she is fould to play him like that!
I can't wait to see what happens next. Sturgis seems like it is going to be explosive!!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/04/10 08:08 am
There is story has reprehensible people or should I say scum buckets in it. Ana's own mother is plotting against her man she jsut can't win. I wish that she would file a restraining order against Rickey, his ass is crazy!!!! When is Dave going to wake up and smell the coffee? THe ho confessed in front of him.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/04/10 07:34 am
Denita glad to see your story here at The Chamber. I hope you update soon.
Reviewer: tcarey Signed [Report This]Date: 20/04/10 06:50 am
What did Ana do when she realized that it was her best friend sleeping with her man? Update soon. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/10 11:19 pm
The past is coming back for Mark and Ana. Sophia sounds like a female version of Ana's ex. I hope that Sophia doesn't start working with Ana's mother to break up Ana and Mark. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/10 11:18 pm
Yeah Ana and Mark finally were able to get their groove on. As for Pinky's mom what a mean devious woman she is. WOW. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/10 11:17 pm
Poor Mark...still no luck but at least the babies are here. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/10 11:15 pm
I glad Phil and Dave made their love connection. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 19/04/10 11:14 pm