personally, at least for right now, none of these fools need to be together. mark still really isn't over his ex and until he is, doesn't need to be with ana. phil needs therapy to deal with self image issues. i mean really, screwing over a good man bc he's white? and ana's mother and crew need jail time and to be held on a mental ward. geez.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed
[Report This]Date: 16/01/11 04:33 pm
oh hell naw no phil didn't tell mark that ann knew about her sleeping with alex and didn't tell him. for her to say that her friend she has a crazy way to show it. I think all four of them need to sit down and hash out all the things they feel if they ever wanted to be with each other agian. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 16/01/11 04:05 pm
Please get Anna and Mark back together. why is he being a fool.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/01/11 02:21 pm
Too many secrets, they all need to sit and talk this mess over and get on with loving each other. Mark is too smart to fall for that no good Sophia.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 16/01/11 01:57 pm
whew!! that was a lot!!! you have me on the edge of my seat now! mark is an ASS!!!! i cant believe he saw that skank again!! please dont let ana take him back! how dare he try to get mad about her not telling him about phils nastiness!! dumbass!!!!! more please!! i soooo want ana and dave to get together. i also want the truth to come out about sophia, ricky, and mom from hell so marks face can break into a million pieces!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/01/11 01:05 pm
This says it all.....
"The kiss deepened, not on her part but on his. His hands found her waist then her ass. Their tongues darted around each other, the passion of years gone by still there."
There is nothing Mark can say to justify this. It doesn't matter if this was a one time thing and they never had sex. Nor is this the first time Mark has done something questionable, where to me, his faithfulness and loyalty to Ana have come into play. If he is having reminiscings of what was and what could've been with Sophia, then he's not ready to move forward in a relationship with anyone. I would have more respect for him if he would've told Ana that he still had feelings for his ex and needed some time alone to work through them. Regardless if she would've slapped his face and dumped him for his honesty or stood by him hoping he'd come back to her when he worked through his confusion. Knowing about her relationship with her ex and the pain his cheating and lies caused her, he should've taken extra care to show he would never do that to her. What Mark has shown, is that he is TRIFLING and doesn't deserve her.
Say good riddance, Ana. Don't forgive that creep!
Good job, Denita! Luv the story..
skyy
Reviewer: skyy Signed [Report This]Date: 30/12/10 02:30 am
well now, everything is f^cked ain't it? Real disappointed in Mark though.
Reviewer: grumpirah Signed [Report This]Date: 28/12/10 07:17 pm
omg how sick is the mother for you to wanted your daughter to be with a man who cheated on her and not let her be with a man that love her. Phil she got some guts on her i love you. I hate when people who cheat say i love you. it like saying i didn't mean to shot you 12 dam times lol. glad he told her off. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 28/12/10 06:17 pm
I have missed this story and have loved the updates!!
Maaannn I can't wait to see what Ana's dad has in store for Somara...divorcing her would be too simple...she needs to suffer the way she is making her own child suffer!
Mark is dumb as hell! I can't believe that he fell for Sophia's lies... RME.
And Phil got what she deserves to be alone! How stupid was she to think she could have both men and not get caught??
I am so glad to see this story is back!
Reviewer: Redbird Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/12/10 05:51 pm
Somara strikes again, but I have to say that Mark was too dumb to fall for what Sophia did to him. I thought he was too smart for that, and Phil well she got what was coming to her. I just wish Ana didn't have to be hurt in all of this too, she already had a no good man and now all she has is more pain. Great update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 28/12/10 04:44 pm
I am so glad that Phil got kicked to curb as I really can't stand her skanky ass. But why oh, why did Mark trust that ho-hiefer Sophie? I hope that Ana cools off then about the things that her human uncubator has been up to and equates it to Sophie antics. I so love this story. Please update soon, I need to know what will happen next. I so want Devin Sr. to divorce that woman.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/12/10 04:27 pm
When you play the two end against the other there is no middle. Now she see how she messed up big time. But we want what we want and when we get IT, we realize its not all that good!! LONG AND SHORT YOU DONE SCREWED UP TRAMP. NEXT time you are in a loving relationship, KEEP YOUR DRAWS UP!!!!!!
ANA let him explain PLEASE!!! ARE YOU SO willing to throw out the baby w/the bath water! He is a GOOD man!
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/12/10 02:44 pm
Well, Mark was so wrong to even trust her or touch her. Serves him right. he hurt Ana....wow
Somara appears to have won.
Phil should have known Dave wouldn't take her back.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/12/10 02:21 pm
oh man im worried that this is definitely not going to be a hea for anybody!!!!! i cant stand that ana and dave are both hurting so much. are they gonna turn to each other now? im not sure if i like that idea either even though they each deserve someone loyal and loving like the other one is. thanks for the update!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 28/12/10 01:10 pm
Dave knows that Phil can't be trusted. He needs someone who can. I still hate her guts. Just because now she supposedly knows what she wants, Dave is suppose to take it. I think not. What about the next time and you know there will be a next time.Maybe Phil needs to be by herself for awhile and try to figure why she's such a triflin' skank.
And that mother, she needs her ass kicked. However, oddly, I don't feel sorry for Ana.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: 28/12/10 11:13 am
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW....My baby Dave gave Phil those walking PAPERS...PAPERS...HE..DON'...WANT...YOU...NO...MOOOOORRRE...SHE GOT THOSE....PAPERS...PAPERS...walking PAPERS!!!
*clapping* Wooooo, Denita, girl girl girl!!! I can hardly wait to see Daddy Devlin lower the BOOM on Somara....*dancing*
Great update!!!!
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 28/12/10 11:12 am
WOW!! Phil is finally growing a backbone and doing the decent and right thing for a change. I hope D can forgive her... Great Job :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/12/10 05:33 pm
Oh Phil, get ready to get the second dump. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 27/12/10 06:35 am
yay two updates are cool but lets she how long it last lol. Now i wonder what dave going to say to her is he going to yell scream stay quiet or shut the door in her face right after he calls her a whore? mmmmmmmmmmmm lol. can't wait to see what happen thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 27/12/10 01:37 am
Fiiiiiiinaallllllyyyyy!!!
She has to come clean! That man still loves her (right?) even if he is worried about her screwing the mailman.
Come on Phil!
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 09:16 pm
Yay, two awesome updates. She may be a little too late in getting back the man she should have been with all along.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 06:06 pm
How is this 2 updates? They're on the same page...LOL
Good update, girl!!!
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 03:40 pm
WELcome back LV. I LOVE YOU. I have not read it yet, but i was so excited to see it that i had to review. THANKS
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 02:37 pm
bout time she got over herself!!!!! i really used to like phil but now i just wanna smack her HARD!! thanks for the update denita! youve been SORELY missed!!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 01:05 pm
well atleast Phil realizes her mistake, but we will see if its too little too late, thanks for the 2 updates today :) Happy Holidays !
Reviewer: omgsums Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 11:25 am