Kendra had me LMFAO. She is just to much and Devlin is such a punk. "See what you did!?!" Devlin said, "NOw I gotta deal with her!"
I wasn't expecting them all to go to jail. I'm loving this story.
Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/12/10 09:01 am
Dang I wasn't expecting that from the first meeting. I wonder whats Mark problem???
Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 08:47 am
Mommie Dearest does have a lot of bitch-ass-ness going on. She is doing way to much after 2 years, she really needs to move on with her life.
So Dave and Phil huh. NICE. I'm liking this whole 2 stories in one thing.
Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 08:42 am
I love the relationship between Ana, Phil, and Kendra. Ana is to funny yelling she gay across a restaurant. LMAO.
Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/12/10 08:32 am
Good first introduction chapter. Her mom is doing to much taking up for Punk Ass and Tramp. I already see how Mommie Dearest is going to roll.
Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed
[Report This]Date: 26/12/10 08:20 am
I'm loving your cast. I had to stop and read your story due to the fact you mentioned my home city The ROC. 585 all the way.
Reviewer: Tam14611 Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 08:13 am
OHHHH, YES MA'AM....UPDATES ARE NECESSARY!!!
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 04:46 am
ONCE AGAIN...I HATE YOU, PHIL!!!
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 04:42 am
OHHHHHHH POOR DAVE!!! Stupid Phil!!!! Ugh, she makes me SICK!!!
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 04:37 am
*deep sigh* Phil wants her cake and pie too. She's straight up wrong for sleeping with AleK and having a relationship with Dave. Break it off with Alek or break up with Dave...simple...nothing hard about that.
What's also crazy...her jealousy over Alek have a side dish too...LOL
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 04:20 am
WOW...MARK....JUST WOW!!
On a serious note, how can people be so CRUEL? They can just take someone's heart and break it like its nothing...wow.
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 26/12/10 03:30 am
you will be forgiven when i see another update and then we can talk lmao. wow so daddy is about to lay the law down on mom good she need to get put in her place. I think she tension now something tells me that david is going to tell marke that she knew the whole time that her girl was cheating on him. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/10 11:31 pm
Yes, that was a wonderful chapter I truly hope that Somora pays the highest price. I want Devlin Sr. to divorce her and makes sure that she nothing in terms a divorce settlement. Ricky and Sophie deserve each other as they are both useless manipulators. Loving this story so please don't make us wait too long for another update.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/12/10 08:33 pm
Momma does not know when to stop, and if she doesn't she will lose her hubby. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/10 06:28 pm
Merry Christmas to us! Thanks for the update, even though I haven't read it yet. I love this story.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/10 06:23 pm
DENITA!!!!
All is not forgiven but I will stop harassing you. Loved it as always....do I smell a divorce in the air?
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/10 05:38 pm
Awww, her momma is SOMETHIN' ELSE!! She don't want that cheating ex boyfriend and she told her that POINT BLANK...
Mark is going to wreck lil Ricky...lol
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/10 04:56 pm
Thanks for the update. It seems that Devlin, Sr is getting ready to lay down the law on wifey. I hope he does because she is a hawt mess. Meddling in folks business.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/10 09:39 am
AWWWW SNAP!!! If I had somebody like Dave checking me out...I would be down with the SWIRL in a second....*drooling*
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/10 01:20 am
Great start, Denita!!
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 25/12/10 12:37 am
hey just wonder when can we see another updated on this story i realy like this story and will like to see what happen next.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 23/10/10 05:37 am
where have you gone ? more please
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Reviewer: omgsums Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/06/10 01:18 am
I read this in one sitting and I am anxiously awaiting more. Update soon please
Reviewer: shellyme Signed [Report This]Date: 30/05/10 03:02 pm
I am really enjoying this story! I can't stand somara, what a bitch. My favourite is Kendra, she one cool girl. update soon!
Reviewer: KKMonroe Signed [Report This]Date: 19/05/10 10:52 pm
This...
“It represents royalty, nobility, friendship, sharing, wisdom, sympathy, and sophistication. It’s one of my favorite colors and it’s…”
had me almost choking. Yep, that trick knows what the color purple represents, however, she's a stranger to the concepts.
Phil has not only cheated, she's causing Dave to question all the relationships he has with her circle of friends. And the fact he's thinking about forgiving her. That bitch will lie and apologize and continue to do the same thing. PHIL IS NOT SORRY. She's only sorry that peopele know... wait a minute, she doesn't even seem sorry about that. It's easy to apologize, but it means nothing if it's not true repentence. Dave will be a chump and a willing chump if he believes this incarnation of Phil. I'm so pissed at that chick, I could spit.
And Ricky, not only is he a sleaze, he's dumb as a stump. That fool has given Sophia so much ammunition. Sophie might grow a conscience and spill, who knows. But she might get more leverage with this info. These folks are completely rotten. Makes me want to take a shower in bleach. good job....
[Report This]Date: 09/05/10 12:20 pm